11 hours ago
(11 hours ago)qazmlp Wrote: First things first, I think Sriya had to pander to the demand from readers for some sex action as it has been a long while missing.
Aur abb jaha thodi bahut touching, snuggling hone lagi thho Pyaar ka izhaar krne se Iqbal nahi ruk paaya, and as expected uss moment me pyaar ka izhaar, seeing Supriya's beauty, it lead to lust and he went for it.
And jaha tak forced/haiwaaniyat ki baat hai, I would say that's because of Iqbal's upbringing and his hard way of life. Furthermore, now that he is back in his home village, he is surrounded by such nasty elements whenever he steps out of his home. So wo influence karta hi hai. Also, he must be facing certain jibes and taunts from his village folk for sure as the gossipers must be talking all sorts of shit about him and her. But please witness that all that aggression is also mixed with moments of pure love and caring for her.
I only agree to your first sentence.
Baaki this story would have been more erotic with slow seduction and romance...