Adultery விதியின் வழி
Once again an update that's beyond comparison. Absolutely erotic. @aishu you have the incredible ability to write an erotic scene without any sex in it
Wooow. Even without a kiss. Man how do you do this. Brilliant. Every update is fresh and breezy. We know that அப்பா and உமா are going to end up on bed (hopefully). But the thrill is in seeing how that happens. At first she sees him masturbating. Now we think maybe he will see her and walk upto her and then sex. Maybe in other stories . But not aishu the awesome. She sees him a couple of times and it is she who has the wet dreams. The writer also shows why he ends up like that. Its because the wife is not cooperating. So that brings sympathy to the old man.

Then comes the birthday treat. Beautiful function. How he makes the wife buy gold and dress for her. He buys her a saree. All of this is done with no sinful thoughts at all. All genuine love. Then comes the next plot point. His diary writing
Genius idea. Now uma and the readers will come to know more about his sexual feelings and deprivation. Uma comes to know of his desire to see women in modern fashion especially sleeveless. So as a dutiful loving daughter she dresses up for the father. அட்டகாசமான எழுத்து. Now that she's dressed up how will he see her? In other stories once again she goes down to see him masturbating and he sees her and then .... the usual. But Nope. Not aishu the awesome. He pulls his back bringing up water. And we know that it wasn't the first time. He has been doing it for a couple of nights already. So once again their meeting is as natural and as inevitable as possible.

To sit and think of a plot development like this takes so much of time and dedication to the writing. Yes we are all here for the adrenaline rush of reading and enjoying different erotica. But its the authors like aishu the awesome make our time worthwhile by applying themselves so much. வந்தான் பாத்தான் படுத்தா ஓத்தான் is never the case with aishu the awesome. There has to be a genuine story. A purposeful narrative. Flesh and blood characters. Believable character motivation. Superb arcs of character development. And then yes sex. The sex is a result of the actions of the characters and contexts that they find themselves in. SEX IS NOT THE BE ALL OR END ALL. This is why when there is sex finally it is so satisfying. And yes I can write so much about the sex scenes separately. Maybe later.
Writers like aishu the awesome are a rare phenomenon. We have had some big guns here. Ocean. Vandanavishnu. Monkdevil. Jns. Jeganselvamani. Dubai seenu. Aishu the awesome is definitely up there in that Hall of Fame.
So proud to say a big fan.
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விதியின் வழி - by Aisshu - 14-08-2023, 04:01 PM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by Bigil - 08-09-2023, 08:38 PM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by M boy - 12-09-2023, 01:34 PM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by M boy - 17-09-2023, 04:43 AM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by M boy - 08-10-2023, 11:37 PM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by M boy - 29-12-2023, 04:33 PM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by Bigil - 02-01-2024, 08:04 PM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by M boy - 25-06-2024, 08:23 AM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by M boy - 17-07-2024, 11:19 PM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by Bigil - 23-02-2025, 03:17 PM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by RARAA - 10-03-2025, 08:00 AM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by RARAA - 11-04-2025, 12:10 PM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by RARAA - 03-05-2025, 05:36 AM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by RARAA - 23-05-2025, 06:03 AM
RE: விதியின் வழி - by Bigil - 14-06-2025, 02:14 PM
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