Adultery Love Sex And War : Age Of Darkness

[Rocky@handsome]

Hemant may not be bound to Sonarika…but will will never get liberated. What can one make out of a hero.. if his wife leaves him for another man..,and he doesn’t fight back. To claim what has always been his. More so after the last chapter, when he sees Sonarika with Vikram in the flat. What does this make him….an unwilling cuckold…..who can’t do anything about his wife…soon to be divorced…but still his wife…getting fucked by her lover in his flat….this is not Micheal….nor is he Hemant….he is just a cuckold….may be unwilling.

Hemant always spent some time with his family…since beginning…It was always Sonarika…after she met Vikram, she was busy in lovemaking and didn’t have time for family. Leaving her son and husband(who’s working) for a sexual affair shows her concern for her son…leave apart her husband….and she continues to do it.. hell she wants rough sex when it was how Dilawar treated her…she would’ve wanted comfort…tender sex…to overcome the tragedy..yet she went to Vikram to be dominated. One would not want to repeat the experience of hell..and would want to be loved and cared. That’s what Hemant did, alas she still wanted Vikram…why just because Meghna told her so….what about others…Hemant, her son, her sister..nothing…but Meghna matters much.

Again..she gets everything …loving husband in Vikram…her son…her so called sister….good life….guardian angel….what could have she asked for…as for not accustomed to household chores…Vikram can arrange a maid at least…that’s not punishment for the sins she did…further…what about Vikram…nothing for breaking a loveable and happy family. For what…his in fluctuations…initially…nothing…

And who gets hurt…Hemant…the great Micheal king…who then takes out his frustrations on different women….he still is the biggest loser in the story..whatever he does now….i thought with a strong hero story would be different….however…it is still the same….
Husband loses his wife to someone he feels is better in bed…..no difference apart from fighting sequences.if I think about the overall plot.

I must say in the end…these are just rumblings about the story I liked on this site, thinking it would do justice to the hero. A wonderfully written story by a fantastic writer. Alas, I guess, this is what this site is about. Overall…a fantastic story…which keeps the readers hooked as to what is coming next….

Apologies to the writer if I have stepped the line… you are an absolutely wonderful writer with a great thinking and writing skills. Continue with it. Looking forward to many of great updates…

Brother, I completely agree with you and Brother@RCF, Please take a moment to revisit my two earlier comments and compare them with these latest updates. I’ve expressed similar thoughts about Sonarika’s character [from her first cheating till the latest cheating and excuses given to justify it] and the injustice done to Hemant, though not as thoroughly as you and @RCF have. Harry gave me reasons that are hard to accept, but I respect the author’s vision and avoid arguing with either him or fellow readers—argument is the last thing I want.

Still, it pains me to see this story turning like many others, where the hero’s justice is denied and the deceitful Sonarika moves forward untouched by the weight of her sins. I hoped Sonarika would yearn for Hemant’s love, beg for his forgiveness, and suffer because of her choices—but sadly, that doesn’t seem to be the path. Instead, she’s still finding herself, enjoying Vikram’s company, and only later might evolve and move on.

Whether Hemant moves on with another woman or conquers the whole world, in this battle of love, he will still be considered the loser. And the cheating wife, as often happens in stories on this site, will not feel much regret for losing Hemant, nor will she suffer any real loss. In fact, her only guilt is that she betrayed Hemant as a person, and all she has for him now is mere sympathy. That guilt and sympathy will completely fade with time when she sees Hemant happy moving forward. And it cannot be denied that in the future, she will not even remember Hemant; her only connection to him will be as the father of her child (Karan)—nothing more.

There’s no doubt Harry is a brilliant author with immense knowledge of every element described in this story and exceptional writing skills. I wholeheartedly appreciate his craftsmanship and dedication.

If my words at any point unknowingly caused offense or hurt you, dear author, I deeply apologize. Please understand, I have only expressed the emotions that were painfully stirring inside me. It is my humble request that you don’t take this in the wrong spirit.


Regards 

Rocky ❤️