Xossip Ultimate Story Contest 2014

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Tapatii jwala - a romantic thriller

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Mera naam ajay haii ajay biswas...umar yahi koi 19 saal...kuch hi mahino pehle bengal ke is chote se khubsurat sheher ghurghutiya mein aaya tha jo darjeeling se kareeb 2 km dur hai...is sundar hill station pe jab kadam rakha tha...jo yahan ki haseen waadiyo mein jaise kho sa gaya tha...lekinn shayad in haseen waadiyo mein kab madhumita se mulaqat ho gayi pata hi nahi chalaa...madhumitaa mere dil ki dhadhkan dikhne mein yahi gorii chitti ek typical housewife ji han...ek gharelu biwi.kiski yakeenan meri nahii mere makaan maalik vijay sarkar ki..asal mein jab yahan aaya tha tab mujhe ghar nahi mil raha tha aakhir mein kisi tarah kiraaye ka ye ghar milaa..main haan kare binaa reh nahi paaya

Lekin is ghar ko haan karne ka asli matlab tha jab maine madhumita ki aankho mein pehli baar apne liye ek chamak si dekhii..shuru shuru mein madhumita se itni baat nahi ho paati thi kyunki madhumita kafi sharmeeli lagti thi bihar ke chote se gaon se thi...vijay sarkar sarkaari daftar mein kaam karta aur zyada kamaai nahi bas yahi koi 6000 tak kamata tha..lekin jab haalat ne karwat badlii kaam se vijay sarkar ko apni badhti bimari ke liye retirement lena padhaa toh fhirr aur kaise ghar chalta oosi liye ye ghar jise kiraaye pe mujhe diyaa gaya isliye chadhaya gaya taaki in dono ka guzara ho sake

Madhumita mujhe pyaar karti thii ye baat mujhe pata nahi tha..lekin madhumita kis dard mein thi ye baat oose jannke hi pata chala...asal mein madhumita ka byaah kareeb 16 varsh mein hua tha oos waqt vijay bihar mein kaam karta th maa baap ne vijay ke thaat baant aur sharafat ko dekhte huye beti ka byaah kar diyaa maa baap marne ke baad madhu akeli padh gayii aur vijay ka transfer ghurghutiya mein ho gaya jahan dono ek saath rehne lage..madhu ko koi baccha nahi tha...baccha na hone ka kaaran sirf yahi tha ki madhu apne pati ke sath jismani rishte se khush nahit hi aur vijay oose toh bas khaana aur vyapar ke alawa is khubsurat stri se aur kuch chahiye hi nahi thaa

Aur is tarah madhu ki zindagi mein aaya main..main it industry mein acchi post mein ho aur nightshift ka job karta hoo isliye pure din mujhe ghar mein rehna hota hai...vijay jo ki sarkaari daftar mein kaam karta tha wohh ab pure din ghar se bahar hota hai sunaa haii ki tasveer ki dukaan kholke oosse ooska guzara chalta hai...dheere dheere madhu ko main tab pasand karne lagaa jab madhu mere saamne ki chatt pe aake kapre daalti thi ooska wohh tapata badan jawani mein khila ek phool sa tha oose dekhte hi mere andar oose apni baahon mein kheenchne ki jo pyaas thi badh jaaya karti thi lekin main nahi janta tha ki aisa kuch madhu ke dil pe bhi chal raha haii jawan aurat ghar mein ek jawan kiraayedaar aur koi nahii bina baat kiye waqt kaise katee

Dheere dheere madhuu mere sath baatein karne lagii aur fhir mere kareeb bhi aane lagiii...maine madhu ko samjhaa oose apne pati mein koi mann nahi tha oska dil toh bas oon jawan aurato ki trah tha jo bas khulke masti aur aalingan mein judhke khud ki tapati jwala ko nikalana chahti thi...aur main madhu ke is khubsurat chehre aur badan pe fhidaa tha...lekin darr bhi tha ki kahin agar vijay ko hamare rishte ke baarein mein pata chal gaya toh maine madhu ko samjhaaya bhi tha

"aahh sss madhuuuu ohhh madhuuu ye ttheekk nahii haiii sss tum janti nahii ye paap hai paap aahhh sss oh madhuu"....maine madhu ke nange jism pe chadha hua tha
"aahhh k..kyaaa galat hai kyaa paappp aahhh nahi tum samajhte ho ek aurat ki garmi ko samajht ho ohhh aaahhh aahh"....madhu ne mere peeth pe apne naakhun gadhaa diye jalan se pura jism sihar gayaa

Oos din madhu ke sath sambandh banake samajh aaya ki madhu jawani mein pighal gayi hai agar main oose apne se dur kar dungaa tohh shayad khudkhushi kar le...ek aurat ki aag badhak chukithi aur main oos aag mein jalne pe mazbur ho gaya...aur dheere dheere hahaha mujhe bhi ooske jism ko apne baahon mein bharke ooske sath bistar garam karne ka mann karne lagaaa dheere dheere hamare jismani taaluqat badh gaye yahan tak sath mein kabhi kabhi ghumna fhirnaa hota lekin madhu ko toh bas zyadatar ghar mein mere sath akele kamre mein pyar karne ka hi dil karta aur main isse ekdum aitraaz nahi jatata thaa

Ekdin madhu mere seene se lagi huyi thi aur mere seene ke baal pe haath phairaa rahithi main madhuu ko apne se lipatakar ooske baalon pe haath phair raha thaa

"tumhein pata hai main jabse tumse mili tumhare sath bina soye reh nahi pati lekinn agar main jo chahun tum woh karoge"...madhu ki aankho mein aaj vasna ke sath kuch aur bhi tha
"kaho toh shonaa main sun raha hoo tum kaho toh jaan bhi de doo"....madhu ne mere gaal pe halki chapaat maari aur ooski aankho mein ek chamak si aayi
"ufff ho pagal jaan nahi zindagi hum dono ki zindagi ko ek karna hai"....madhu ki muskurahat mein mujhe ek lalach dikh raha tha
"bolo"...maine madhu ke chehre ki or dekhte huye bola
"dekho tum toh jaante ho vijay mein kuch rahaa nahi umar mein mujhse kaafi bara hai aur mujhewoh khushiya nahi de sakta jo tum de sakte ho ab main ye chup chupp ke tumhare sath aise sambandh nahi banaa sakti"......madhu ne mere seene pe haath rakhte huye nazarein jhukaa li...main madhu ko ektak dekhte huye sochne laga

"oh toh fhir tum chahti kya ho? kya tum vijay se talaq lena chahti ho?"....maine madhu ke chehre pe haath fhiraate huye bola..madhu meri ungli ko chusske ek baar mujhedekha aur fhir muskuraya
"main chahti hoo ki tum vijay ko maar do oose khatam kar do yakeenan woh mujhe talaq nahi degaa aur agar hamare sambandh ke baarein mein oose kisi din pata chalaa toh tumhein mujhse judaa kar dega aur main tumhein khona nahi chahti"....madhu mere chehre ko sehlaati huyii mere hontho ko chummke aansu tapkaane lagi

Mujhe ek bara jhatka sa lagaa ye kyaa? yaani mujhe vij.ay nahi nahi apne faayede ke liye agar vijay ko maar dungaa toh mujhe ek bari musibat mein padhna hogaa..lekin jab madhu ke chehre ki or dekhaa toh samajh aaya ki madhu kitne dard mein hai mera bhi koi sansaar nahi kabtak kaam kaaj karke yun zindagi kaantunga aur ab mujhe madhu se ek azib si mohabbat ho gayi thi main madhu ke bina reh nahi sakta aur ab oose chahne laga tha...maine madhuu ko kaafi samjhaaya par woh atal rahi oosne saaf keh diya ki agar main aisa kuch nahi kar sakta toh mujhe woh kabhi nahi milegi aur na khud ko kabhi chune degi...main bhaukla gaya

Ye nahi ho sakta nahii main madhu ko kho nahi sakta...aur isi kashmakash mein andhera ho gayaa..oos din se maine thaan liya ki madhu ke sath milake main vijay ka qatal kar dungaa...lekin vijay ko main sidhe mar toh nahi sakta tha security officer ko saf shaq ho jataa..aur main madhu se judaa mujhe kuch toh aisa karna tha jisse saanp bhi mar jaaye aur laathi bhi na tute..din pe din madhu ke jism ki hawas mujhe badhkaane lagi...dheere dheere jab bhi vijay ko dekhta oosse hassi khushi baat karta lekin dil mein oose maarne ki talab uthne lagi wohh ab mere liye dushman se badhke tha agar woh marega toh madhu meri ye sochte sochte main na jane main pagal sa ho gayaa...ekdin madhu ko jab vijay ko maarne ka qatal karne ka irada bataya..madhu kaafi khush thi mera plan saaf tha...maine darwaaje aur khidkiya khol daale they..taaki kabhi bhi vijay aayega aur hum dono ko aaligan mein dekhega ooske dil mein jaise saanp lotne lagega gusse mein wohh chillaayega aur oosi pal main aur madhu milake ooska qatal kar denge yakeenan madhu ko mere sambandh dikhane wale plan ke baarein mein kuch pata nahi tha

"aao madhu aaj hum fhirse ek ho jaaye"...maine madhu ki taangein kholke ooske petticoat ko utaarke apni pant niche khiskate huye ooski aankho mein dekhaa
"aah aahhh aaahhh"...kuch hi dair mein hum dono ki aaheinn jaise pure kamre mein gunzne lagi khatiyaa charcharane lagaa aur oosi pal maine muskurake sheeshe ki saamne ki or dekhaa

ghar ke almirah ke sheeshe mein mujhe bahar ke darwaje pe khara dikhaa...koi aur nahi madhu ka pati mera dushman vijay..vijayekdum thithake meri or dekhen jaa raha tha...ekpal ke liye mera pura jism sihar gaya..ab ooske mann se gussa ubalne wala tha..aur oosi pal woh mujhpe hamla karegaa...madhu ko mere sath aalingan mein judhaa dekh vijay ekdum patthar ban gaya madhu toh mere niche dabi aahein bhar rahi thi main toh ooski chaatiyo ko vijay ke saamne masal raha tha...aur tabhi maine dheere se madhu ko bola "vijay"...aur saamne ke sheeshe ki or dekhen lagaa

jhatpat hum dono uth baithe madhu ne meri taraf dekha aur main madhu ki or..vijay ekdum chupchaap ghar se nikal gaya..mujhe laga ooska paara chadhega aur woh kuch uthaayega lekin ye kya? madhu ekdum pasine pasine mujhe dekh rahi thi main jhat se bistar se utha aur bahar nikalke dekhne laga

Vijay chupchaap apne kamre mein baitha huaa tha...ungli mein fassa ek cigarette aur hontho ke beech se nikal raha dhuaa...vijay ko yakeenan jhatka laga tha ooski biwi ksii gair mard ke sath..main chupchaap dheere dheere ooske kamre ki taraf gaya..."vijay?"...maine dheemein awaaz mein kaha
"uhh haan"...maano jaise wohh kisi gehri soch mein duba tha aur soch se nikalke bola
"vijay main janta hoo tumne sabkuch dekh liya hai aur mere aisa karne ki wajah sirf ye hai ki main madhu ko chahta hoo aur mujhe osse koi alag nahi kar sakta"....mere itna kehne ke baad bhi vijay ne koi jawab nahi diya
"uff kitnaa dard hai is zindagi mein dekho charo or is dharti pe gunda beshya lootera chor kuch accha nahi khoon aisa lagta hai jeeti jagti narak mein reh raha hoo"....oosk ibaatein sunke lagne lagaa ki vijay jitna shareef hai shayad itna bhola ki ooske andar dum nahi ki woh uthe aur mujhe thappad maare oose humhe yun dekhke jaise ek gehra sadma pahucha tha aur plan ke mutabik hi toh sab tha aur oosse bhi behtar lekin main hairaan tha...mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya

"ab jee nahi karta is zindagi mein aur rahu..bas madhu ko bolna m..main aaj raat ka khaana nahi khaa paunga".....vijay ki azibo garib baatein sunkar mujhe ekpal ke liye ashcharya huaa gala sukh gayaa k..kya matlab? kya oose itna kuch hone ke bawjud gussa nahi aaya ooske zehan mein kya chal raha tha?

Vijay subakte huye apne kamre ki or chala gaya..madhu jald hi nikal ke aayi oosne apne kapre pehen liye they..."kya hua mujhe toh bahut darr lag raha hai kya oosne tumhein maara koi dhamki?".....madhu ne mere baazu ko pakadhte huye bola
"n..nahii wohh sidhe chala gaya oosne keh diya ki wohh is duniya mein aur rehna nahi chahta..oosne tumhein bola hai ki tum oose aaj khaana mat dena"....madhu ko bhi thodha azeeb laga dil mein ooske darr aur deshat dono simit they

Oos raat mere andar ki saari planning sabkuch tham si gayii bas dil mein ek anchaha darr sa lagne lagaa...ki kya maine sahi kiya? kya maine ek bhole insaan ki zazbaat aur bholepan se khela koi aur hota toh mujh jaise gair mard ki bahon mein apni biwi ko dekhke goli maar deta...achanak ek pal ko laga ek baar niche dono ke kamre mein dekhke aau kya vijay ne madhu ko maara peeta hogaa

Main dheere dheere niche ke kamre ki or badha dekhta hoo jake ki kamre mein lamp ki roshni jal rahi hai khidki ke kaggar pe chehra tikaaye andar dekhkee meri jaise rooh fanaa ho uthi...ye kyaa? vijay na jaane kya? kya? kaagaz pe likh raha tha aur kuch munh se badhbadha rahatha...paas mein safed nighty pehni madhu chupchaap soyi huyi thi dekhke hi lag gaya ki madhu ko yakeenan vijay ne kuch nahi kaha

achanak table ke theek saamne ek pistol dekha..vijay ek bhola bhaala shareef insaan hoke ghar mein pistol kaise rakh sakta hai? mujhe aane waali khauff ki dastak sunaai dene lagii..main jhatpat dekhne laga...kaagz ko table pe kisi cheez se dabate huye vijay ne uthaa liya woh pistol aur oose apne kanpatti pe lagaa liya

Main jhat se darwaje ko thokhne laga "vijayy vijayy"...darwaja ko thokte hi andar se madhu uthke ekdum se chillaayii aur dhaccchh aaaaaaaaahh...mera pura badan sihar gayaa...achanak se do pal ke baad kisi ne kundi kholi mera dil dhak dhak karein jaa raha tha..jab saamne ki or dekha..toh paaya madhu chupchap munh pe haath rakhke khauff bhari nigaaho se vijay ki lash ko dekh rahithi..mainekdum chupchap jab kamrem ein aaya toh ek jhatke mein madhu ko jhinjodhaa..oosne bas ishara kar diya..vijay ke kanpatti mein goli dhas gayi thi charo or khoon hi khoon beh raha tha...maine jhat se paas rakhke oos kaagaz ko uthaa liya dil sihar gaya oosmein likha tha

"priye madhu main janta hoo ki maine tumehin kabhi khushiya nahi di tumhari umar se badha bhi tha tumhari kabhi zarurato ko pura na kar paaya..asal mein jabse ajay aaya hai maine tum dono ko kayi baar sambandh banate dekha hai...main is dard ko aur nahi jhel sakta main tumhein dil se itna pyar karta ho ki tumhein keh nahi sakta..tumhara mere sath koi rehne ka dil nahi hai lekin tum dono ki batein jab suni toh samajh aa gaya ki main tum dono ke raste ka kaanta hoo aur mujhe is sansaar ko chodhke chale jaana chahiye waise bhi main ab apni zindagi se thak chuka hoo aur ab maut ko gale lagane ke siwa main kuch nahi kar sakta agar maine tumhein koi chot pahuchaayi ho toh iske liye mujhe maanf kar dena main vijay se yahi kahungaa ki mere marne ke baad wohh darre na bas mere jaane ke baad tumhara kabhi haath na chodhey aur hamesha tumhein jiski tum haqdaar ho aasha hai tum dono ab khush rahoge apna khyaal rakhna vijay sarkar"

kaagaz ko padhne ke baad jaise main ekdum hil sa gaya ye maine kya kiya? jis insan ko hum dono ki zindagi se dur karna chaha woh khud hi ye sansaar chodhke chala gaya sirf aur sirf hamare liye madhu chupchaap bas khoon se lathpath aankhen mundein vijay ki or dekh rahi thi aur main ekdum thithake bas patthar sa ban gaya tha

Aaj samajh aaya ki apne naapak rishte ke liye maine ek base basaye ghar ko ujaadha tha...main is sadme ko aur jhel nahi paa raha tha..madhu ne roke meri or dekhaa..jald hi security officer goli ke shorr se bulaa li gayi thi hamare ghar mein security officer aa gayi laash ke saamne hum dono ko kharaa dekhke oonke mann mein kayi saawalat aane lage oonhone sirf itna puchaa ki katal kisne kiyaa...

Maine madhu ne ek dusre ki or dekhaa....security officer ne hum dono ko hatkadi pehnaa di aur mauke pe mazud pistol aur wohh kaagaz uthaa li....jald hi madhu aur ajay ko vijay ke maansik taur se maut ka dabaav dene mein 10 saal ki sazaa sunaa di gayi ooske baad dono ki kahani isi modh pe khatam ho gayii...
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