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Pyaar Ka Nazrana

Zain_Ali

Zain:-"Ouyi maa. Kya kar rahi hai subha subha thanda pani daal kar mere haseen sapno ka satiyanaas kar diya tohne. Acha khasa Katrina Kaif meri aur bhaag kar aa hi rahi thi ke beech main toh vilain ban kar aa gayi"

Maa:-"Had haram jab dekho bas sapne hi dekhte rehna. Kabhie kuch karna na. Joh tera haal hai na beta, Katrina chor koyi aandhi bhi teri aur nahi aane wali. Hafta hafta toh tu nahata nahi. Jaise pani se koyi alergy ho tujhe. Chal uth aur ja ja kar dukaan se chai ki pati le kar aa tere abba ke liye chai banani hai."
Zain:-"Toh abba ko bolo na ja kar le aayain. Maine thode hi peni hai. Wesse bhi unka peth nikalta ja raha hai. Is bahane thodi morning walk bhi ho jayegi unki."

Maa:-"Shabaash beta. Haan saare hafte kaam bhi woh karain. Ghar main kama kar bhi woh layain aur toh beta ghode beech kar sota reh. Jane kounsi manhoos ghadi thi jab toh hamare ghar paida ho gaya tha. Meri toh zindagi hi jahanum ban gayi tere jaisa nalayak beta paida kar ke"

Zain:-"Chal theak hai ja raha hoon. Subha subaha dimaag toh mat kha. Itna hi bura lagta hoon toh ratoun ko jaag jaag kar nahi ludu khelni thi." Toliye se sar sukhate huwe Zain maa ke hath se pesse khench kar kamre se bahir nikal gaya. Uska haal bhi dhobi ke kutte wala tha, na ghar pe uski koyi izzat thi aur na hi bahir. Abhi kamre se bahir nikla hi tha ke uske abba ne dekh liya.

Abba:-"Uth gaye nawaab sahaab. Kyun beta kya garmi lag rahi thi? Kaho toh AC lagwa doon ke mera lal chain ki neend sota rahe."

Zain:-"Ab rehne do aap. Dada ji ke bachpan ke zamane ke pankhe lage hain unki jaga toh naye lagwa nahi paye toh AC kya lagwaoge?" Yeah keh kar woh ghar se bahir nikal gaya aur abba ji dil hi dil us raat ko kosne lage jab unka condom phat gaya tha.

Yeah hansi mazaak toh Rang Mahal(Lahore) ke har dosre ghar main hi hota rehta hai aur is nook jhonk main bhi ek apnapan aur pyaar chupa hota hai. Aesa nahi tha ke Zain bilkul hi nikhatu tha. Par usse choti umar se hi jis hunar se pyaar ho gaya tha woh tha hi kuch aesa ke usko duniya wale muskil se hi samjhte the. Choti umar se hi usse painting ka buhat shook tha aur dhere dhere yeah shook jane kab pyaar main badal gaya. Artist log baki logoun se kuch alag kisam ke hi hote hain. Raat ko jab sab log sote hain toh bas aashiq apne mehboob ki yaad main warna artist log apne art ke nit naye namone banane main lage hote hain. Kehne wale kehte hain ke raat ke andhere main suraj ki roshni na hone ki waja se paintings ke joh rang nikhar kar aate hain woh din main mumkin nahi. Ab is baat main kitni sachayi hai yeah toh koyi artist hi bata sakta hai. Zain bhi raat ko jab uske maa baap so rahe hote the toh chat par bulb jala kar uski roshni main painting karta tha. 

Raat ko jab bijli chali bhi jati thi toh moom bati jala kar uski roshni main hi apni painting jari rakhta tha. Aese main raat ke kissi pehar uska sath dene uske liye chai ka cup liye uski hamsai Aisha aa jati thi. Lahore ke purane gali mahloun main aaj bhi wohi purane zamane ke ghar the jin main chat ke sath chat lagti thi. Aisha na sirf Zain ki hamsayi thi balke woh dono ek dosre ko dil-o-jaan se chahate bhi the. Woh dono parhe bhi aik hi universty se the aur dono hi arts ke student the. Jahaan graduation ke baad Aisha ki parhayi khatam ho gayi aur uske ghar wale uske liye kissi ache rishte ki raah dekhne lag gaye wahin Zain apne andar ke artist ko duniya ko manwane ki daur dhoop main lag gaya. Yeah alag baat hai ke graduation ke ek saal ke baad bhi abhi tak na toh Aisha ke liye koyi dhang ka rishta aaya tha aur na hi Zain ko koyi kameyabi milli thi. Kam se kam koyi acha rishta na aane ki sakoun Aisha ke dil main tha aur sath hi ek umeed bhi thi ke jald hi uske Zain ke hunar ko aesse kadardaan mil jayenge jinka usse besabri se intezaar hai aur phir uske kameyaab hote hi un dono ke rishte ki raah hamwaar ho jayegi aur kissi ko koyi aetraaz na hoga.

Zain:-"Aaj aane main buhat deer kar di tum ne. Mujhe laga jaise ab hamari parwa hi nahi rahi aap ko."

Aisha:-"Aesa bhala kabhie ho sakta hai? Amma ki tabiyat aaj theak nahi thi. Unke pair daba rahi thi. Abhi thodi deer hi huyi hai unhe soye huwe. Phir tumhare liye chai banane lag gayi thi. Dekhao toh zara kya bana rahe ho? Kuch din se dekh rahi hoon ke tum apni nayi painting ko mujh se chupa rahe ho."

Zain:-"Ji darust farmaya aapne. Aisha yeah koyi aam painting nahi balke meri zindagi ka pehla masterpiece hoga. Ek painter tabhi masterpiece bana pata hai jab usse uska mule mil jata hai. Is main joh rang bhar raha hoon woh meri roh ki gehrayi ki akasi karte hain. Ek baar is painting ko mukamal ho jane do phir dekhna hum dono ki zindagi hameshaa ke liye badal jayegi."

Aisha:-"Yeah toh badi ziadti hai ke ek taraf itni tarifain kar rahe ho aur dosri taraf mujhe dekhne bhi nahi de rahe. Chalo yeah batao mule koun hai tumhari?"

Zain:-"Bas thoda sabar aur karo meri jaan. Ek baar is shakar ko mukamal kar loon phir tumhe tumhare sawaal ka jawaab bhi mil jayega. Dekha abhi is liye nahi raha ke pehli baar meri kissi painting ne dil main ek umeed jagayi hai aur abhi yeah us haal main nahi ke tum bhi iske husan ko sarha sako. Jhoot tumhe sahi se bolna nahi aata aur agar tumhari aankhoun main maine woh sach dekh liya joh mujhe joh lag raha hai uske baraks nikla toh kahin mera dil na toot jaye."

Aur aesse hi yeah pyaar ke panchi aadhi raat tak apne pyaar ki boli bolte rahe. Kehte hain ke pyaar main woh taqat hoti hai joh kuch pal ke liye hi sahi par waqt ko apni jaga thaam sakti hai par isko mehsoos sirf pyaar karne wale woh dil hi kar sakte hain joh pyaar ke un lamhaat ko sath bitate hain. Dosri taraf zindagi ki kadwi sachayi yeah hai ke waqt kissi ke liye nahi rukta. Ek raat phir aese hi Zain apni painting karne main masroof tha ke usse Aisha ke aane ki khabar tak nahi huyi. Phir jab ek dam nazar pari toh chonk utha.

Zain:-"Aare kya baat hai aaj itna dabe kadam aayi ho ke mujhe bhi mehsoos nahi huwa."
Aisha:-"Main toh wesse hi aayi hoon jaise hameshaa aati hoon par shayad tum apni hi ek alag duniya main khoye huwe the."
Zain:-"Sahi kaha tumne. Ab toh meri duniya aur khushi sab kuch is painting main hi hai."
Aisha:-"Chalo achi baat hai tumhe tumhari duniya toh mil gayi hai. Ab shayad mere jane ki kami bhi mehsoos nahi hogi."

Zain:-"Yeah kya keh raho ho Aisha? Kahaan ja rahi ho tum?"
Aisha:-"Mera rishta aa gaya hai Zain aur baba ne haan kar di hai."
Zain:-"Aese kesse bhala woh haan kar sakte hain? Koun hai woh ladka aur kahaan se rishta aaya hai? Kya tumhari khushi ka unhe koyi ahessas nahi?"

Aisha:-"Ek baap ke liye uski beti ki khushi se barh kar bhala kya ho sakta hai? Ladka London se hai. Wahaan bank main assistant manager ki post par hai. Apna ghar, garhi sab kuch hai aur laske ke ghar waloun ko jaheaz main kuch nahi chahiye." Yeah sun kar Zain ek dam chup ho gaya. Jane kitni deer un dono ke beech main yeah khamoushi rahi jisse bilaakhir usne toda aur badi muskil se yeah keh paya ke

Zain:-"Maana ke yeah sab kuch mere pas nahi par kya mere bina ji paogi?"
Aisha:-"Hum lower middle class ladkiyaan kab apni khushi se jeeti hain? Aaj tak baba ne mere se kuch nahi manga aur meri parhayi ke liye buhat kurbainyaan di hain. Ab jab unhone haan kar di toh kis muh se unhe manna karti?"
Zain:-"Aur un sapno ka kya joh humne mil kar dekhe the? Kya mera dil todte tumhe khayaal nahi aayega?"

Aisha:-"Kar lo tum bhi ruswa meri muhabbat ko. Yeah toh mera Khuda hi janta ke ke kis tarha toot kar chaha hai maine tumhe Zain par sapne jab tootte hain na toh zindagi ki sachaiyaan samne nazar aane lagti hain. Jao aur ja kar keh do apne aaba ko ke mere liye rishta le aayain. Kya woh tumhare kehne par rishta mangne bhi aayenge? Phir main toh ek ladki hoon. Mujhse kesse umeed kar rahe ho ke apne baba ko manna kar doon?" Ek baar phir dono khamosh ho jate hain. Zain ki nazrain Aisha se gila kar rahi hoti hain toh Aisha ki nazrain apni majbori ki gawahi de rahi hoti hain.

Zain:-"Shadi kab hai?"
Aisha:-"Agle mahine ki tarikh rakhi hai."
Zain:-"Kya tumse kuch mang sakta hoon?"
Aisha:-"Itna toh haq hai tumhara. Bas baba ko manna karne ke liye na kehna ke woh main chahate huwe bhi nahi kar paoungi. Baki agar kaho toh abhi apni jaan dene ke liye bhi tiyaar hoon."

Zain:-"Jisse apni jaan se bhi barh kar chaha ho uski jaan bhala kesse mang sakta hoon? Duwa karta hoon ke tumhe har woh khushi mille joh tumhe main nahi de paya. Aisha kya apni shadi ki raat ko mere se ek baar milne aa sakti ho?"
Aisha:-"Aasaan toh nahi hoga par waada karti hoon ke aaoungi zaror chahe ruswa hi uske liye kyun na hona pare."

Aur phir waqt paloun main jaise guzarta chala gaya. Us raat ke baad woh dono phir kabhie nahi mile. Aisha ka dil toh buhat chahata tha Zain ko milne ko par usse dar tha ke kahin uska pyaar itna hawi na ho jaye ke woh apne baba ki di zubaan ka pas na rakh paye. Dosri aur Zain ne apne aap ko baki ki duniya se mukamal tor par lataluk kar diya tha. Woh din raat apne us shakaar main hi khoya rehta tha. Uski maa ko bhi bete ki muhabbat ka ilam tha aur aese apne bete ko tothte dekh kar woh bhi andar hi andar buhat ghamgeen thi. Uska ladla joh hameshaa uske sath hansi mazaak karta rehta tha ab bilkul murjha gaya tha. Usne bhi bete ko uske haal par chor diya tha aur duwayain mangti thi ke uska lal ki zindagi main bhi phirse ujala ho jaye. Aese main aakhir kaar woh raat aa hi jati hai jab Aisha dulhan ban kar tiyaar hoti hai. Yeah kehna muskil hai ke kya woh apna waada bhool gayi thi yaan usse us raat mouka hi nahi mila ke woh Zain se mil paye. 

Udhar Zain zinda laash ki tarha khada baraat aate aur dulhan ko le kar jate apni chat se dekhta raha. Aisha bhale hi na aayi ho par Zain ne apni maa ke hath uski shadi ka tofha bhejwa diya. Jab us tofhe ko shadi ke baad dulhe ke ghar waloun ne dekha toh unhe itna pasand aaya ke usse apne sath London le gaye. Aisha ne pehli bar usse London pohanchne ke kuch din baad hi dekha jab usse woh painting apne ghar ki ek deewar par tangi huyi nazar aayi. Sach main yeah ek masterpiece tha jisse banane wale ne apne rooh ki gehrayi main utar kar banaya tha. Uske samne koyi aur nahi balke painting main Aisha ki hi Dulhan bani huyi painting tangi huyi thi joh dekhne main lagti thi jaise kissi buhat hi bade painter ne banayi hai. Ek arts ki student ke liye yeah andaaza lagana muskil nahi tha ke painting ke neche likha painter ka naam khoon se likha gaya hai. Pyaar ka yeah nazrana dekh kar ski aankhoun se aanso nikal aate hain. Udhar Rang mahal main raat ko bhi ek deewana apni chat pe jaag raha tha par ab uske hatoun main brush nahi the aur usne apni zindagi ka wahid masterpiece bana kar painting karna chor diya tha. Jab kissi artist ke pas se uska mule door chala jata hai toh uske andar ka artist bhi kahin na kahin mar jata hai. Badi dukh bhari nazroun se woh ek baar phir ushi chat ki aur dekhne laga jahaan se kabhie uski Aisha raat ke is pehar usse milne aati thi


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