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Xossip Ultimate Story Contest 2013
#39
Beerbal
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sorry guys thats story is dq bcoz some says thats copy right story . yes this story is copy from the history . some years ago here in india .In jhoona gadh thats happend . Raja name was rai diyach . he marrige with sorath . and his enemy raja name was anu rai . sorath is daugter of anu rai . and beejal who killed the rai diyach is the nephew of rai diach . So this story copied from history . thats a lok katha .

Ek samay ki baat he . bharat nami raja kanchi par raaj karta tha . uski ek behen thi . usko aulad nahi thi . ek martaba ek faqeer ne use dua ki ke tumhen ek baita hoga jo tere bhai ka sar qalam kare ga . ye baat sun kar raj kumari ke mun se cheekh nikal gai .likhe ko kon tal sakta he . kuch mahino baad raj kumari ko ek ladka hua . raj kumari ko us faqeer ki baat yaad thi . raj kumari ne apne bete ko ek box me band kar ke dariya me baha diya .

box behta hua raja amar ke ilaqe me pohanch gaya . wahan ek bakri bass apni bakrion ko pani pila raha tha . uski nazar us box par padi . usne woh box dariya se nikala aur khol kar dekha to use ek sundar bacha nazar aya . woh bakri bass us bache ko lekar apni patni ke pass le aya . us bakri bass ko aulad nahi thi . un dono ne uska naam beerbal rakha . din par din guzarte gaye . aur beerbal jawan ho gaya .


beerbal jungle me bakriyan charata tha . ek din beerbal bakriyan chara raha tha je uske kano me ek sureeli awaz goonji . beerbal ne charon tara nigahen dodaen . usko ek lakdi nazar aai . jis me se jab hawa guzarti thi to ek man mohit awaz ubharti . beerbal ne us lakdi se ek murli banai . jis me se aisi awaz nikli ke pura jungle madhosh ho gaya . phir to beerbal ki murli ka charcha door door tak phail gai .

jis waqt beerbal paida hua tha . us waqt raja amar ko bhi beti paida hui thi . woh bohut sundar thi lekin raja amar ko pehle bhi bohut betian thin to is martaba bhi beti paida hone par use gussa aa gaya aur usne beti ko ek box me band kar ke baha diya . aur woh box ratnu lohar ko hath aya . ratnu ko bhi aulad nahi thi use ek sundar bachi dikhi to use ghar le aya . aur uska naam kalpna rakha . kaplna bhi waqt ke sath badi hui . kalpna bohut hi sundar thi . uski sundarti ka charcha hone laga . aur ye baat raja bharat ke kano tak pohanchi to usne ratnu se kalpna ka hath manga . jo usne bohut khushi se dediya .

muqarar din par raja bharat ne kalpna se vivah kar ke apne ghar le aya .

jab is baat ki khabar raja amar ko lagi to woh gusse se lal ho gaya . aur apni sena lekar raja bharat ke desh par hamla kar diya . lekin is jung me raja amar haar gaya aur apne desh lot aya .

phir usne apne raj me ailan kar waya . jo raja bharat ka sar lai ga . usko sone se bhara hua thal mile ga . beerbal ki patni bohut hi lalchi aurat thi . usne raja se wachan kiya ke mera pati ye kaam kare ga . beerbal jab ghar lota to bohut gussa hua . lekin ab kya ho sakta tha . woh ab wachan bhi nahi tod sakta tha . kyoon raja use maar bhi sakta tha . marta kya na karta . beerbal kanchi ki taraf rawana ho gaya .

kanchi pohanch kar beerbal raja amar ke mehel ke bahar beth kar murli bajane laga . aisi murli bajai ke raja ne use andar mehel me bulwaya . aur beerbal ko kaha phir bajao .

beerbal ne dil soz andaz me aisi murli bajai ke raja madhosh ho gaya . aur madhoshi ke alam me beerbal par heeray jawahirat ki barish karne laga . lekin beerbal apni jagah se hila tak nahi .

raja itna madhosh ho chuka tha ke beerbal ko bola maang , jo kuch bhi tujhe chahiye me tujhe doon ga .

beerbal raja ki baat sun kar bola : raja sahab mere pass dhan dolat ki koi kami nahi he . me sirf tera sar lene aya hoon . me koi faqeer nahi hoon .


raja herat me pad gaya . aur beerbal ko bola mera sar ki kya qeemat he .Me tumhen bohut se heere jawahirat doon ga . lekin beerbal ki ek hi baat . majbooran raja ne talwaar uthai aur apni gardan par chala di . aur raja bharat ka sar beerbal ke qadmon ja gira .

beerbal raja bharat ka sar lekar raja amar ke raj ki taraf chal pada. is ghatna ki khabar door door tak phail gai . jab beerbal raja amar ke pass raja bharat ka sar lekar pohancha to raja amar ne use door se keh diya . itne bade sakhi raja ka sar le aaye ho to mere kya wafadar raho ge . ja mere desh se nikal ja .

beerbal raja ki ye baat sun kar dewana ho gaya . aur dodta hua kanchi ki taraf rawana hua jahan raja bharat ki chita jal rahi thi . bohut hi bada aag alau jal raha tha .beerbal ne us alao me chalang laga di aur uske raja bharat ke sath jal kar khatam ho gaya .
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