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Xossip Ultimate Story Contest 2013
#31
A story about a man who changed the face of cyber world
funfunati

scene 1:
Woh aaya hain
chahe koi kuch bhi kahe aur soche uske baare main, lekin mera yahi sochna hain uske baare main ki usne cyber underworld ka chehra badal kar rakh diya tha.

dikhne main woh ekdum sidha sadha tha aur joki woh tha bhi lekin kaun keh sakta tha ki woh aisa hi rahega hamesha. aare woh to apne sapno ki potli uthaye ek din aa pahucha tha apni kismat banane iss cyber nagri ke ek aise shahar main jisko kehte the "xossip". waha aakar usne meri naam ke seth ke yaha naukri kar li. seth meri bahut paisa wala asami tha aur apne yaar dosto par khulla kharcha karta tha. lekin seth kabhi bhi apne yaha kaam karne walo ko chain ka pani nahi pine deta. casinar ko bhi usne bahut pareshan kiya aur jitna ho saka uska exploitation kiya. khair malik aur naukar ke beech ka yeh rishta to pehle se hi badnam hain aur yeh baat casinar janta tha. to woh chup-chap sahan karta raha. lekin baat tab badi jab seth ke dosto ne bhi casinar ke sath ched chad karna shuru kiya. seth ne ek din party rakhi jisne shahar ki famous
cabaret dancer bhi aayi thi nachne. shahar ki sabse famous dancer "premika darling" aur "shakueen thakurain" aaj us mehfil ki raunak bada rahi thi.
casinar sham se hi apna kaam kar raha tha drink etc serve karne ka. shaam dhalte dhalte mehfil apne unmad par thi. premika casinar ki jawani par fida ho gayi usko dekhte hi aur uske sath masti karne lagi. casinar usko bhav nahi de raha tha lekin kuch keh bhi nahi sakta tha kyoki woh seth ke guest the.
lekin jab kismat kharab hoti hain to kuch nahi keh sakte. party main shahar ka ek aur seth aaya hua tha jo tasir se tharki ke sath sath chalbaj bhi tha. uska naam tha xysti khan. woh premika ke sath sambhog karne ko machal raha tha lekin premika usko bhav nahi diya karti thi. aur jab usne dekha ki woh casinar ke sath chipakne ko bekarar hain to uska khoon khaul gaya. yeh sab kuch door khadi thakurain dekh rahi thi. woh muskurate hue xysti ke pass gayi aur uske badan se sat kar boli, "seth aaj to mera pani pi lo, premika ka pani aaj shayad koi aur piyega"

yeh sunkar xysti ke tan badan main aag lag gayi kyoki usne ek baar thakurain ki lene ki koshish kari thi aur usko koi maja nahi aaya tha. yeh sunte hi seth ne thakurain ko dhakka dekar alag kar diya.khair ab to xysti ne 5 peg bhi chada liye the. aaj woh casinar ko sabak sikhane ke mood main tha.

xysti seth dandanata hua casinar ke pass gaya aur uske upar 3-4 haath jamate hue usko bharpur galiyan dekar bola ki teri himmat kaise hui premika jaisi masoom ladki ke badan se khelne ki.

casinar ne jab kaha ki woh kuch nahi kar raha tha to xysti seth ne usko aur maara, tab tak waha meri seth bhi aa gaya aur bina kuch jane hue usne bhi casinar ko marna shuru kiya. dono nashe main the. casinar jab admari halat main tha to waha security officer ko bulaya gaya aur usko arrest karwa diya. us masoom par charge lagaya gaya "daru pikar party main danga fasad karna aur masoom ladki ki ijjat par haath dalna"

scene 2:
jail main

oye haramjado mere liye chai lekar aayo. jail ki gallery main yeh awaj aam thi aur isko sunkar ache ache apne kache main peshab kar diya karte the. yeh awaj thi axba ghazi ki jo ki ek bahut bada gangster tha aur aajkal jail main tha. sach kahu to woh jail main apni marji se tha. waha woh sakun ki jindagi gujarta tha. bahar uske dusham hajar the jo uski saltanat ke liye khatra the. aaj phir se ardali kunwara singh der se chai hajir kar raha tha. kunwar singh hamesha kitchen ke piche store main baith kar nangi ladkiyon ki tasveer dekha karta hain. khair. chai aayi aur axba ne 4 gali dete hue kunwar ko chai ki chuski li. jail main bhi axba seth bahut shaan aur shaukat se rehta hain. waha saare kaam uski marji se hote the.aur woh baki quadiaon ka pyara bhi tha.jinke pass jamanat ke paise nahi hote the axba seth unki jamanat ityadi apne gang ke vakil tinku nath se keh kar karwa diya karta tha.na jaane aise kitne hi ehsaan usne duniya par karke rakhe the.

axba seth ko jab pata chala ki jail main nava nava chokra aaye la hain to usne ardali ko bola ki usko lekar aaye salam ke liye.kunwar singh ardali jitni teji se gaya utni hi teji se wapas aa gaya.usne aakar bola ki casinar ne aane se mana kar diya.
iss par axba ko bahut gussa aaya aur usne kaha ki aao dekhte hain ki kaun aaya hain jo usko naa bole.

casinar bahar maidan main paudho ko pani dene main masgul tha.usne axba seth ko aata dekh koi pratikriya nahi di.axbe seth ne aate hi casinar ke pet par ek laat de mari.casinar apna pet pakad kar door jakar gira lekin usne bhi palat waar kiya aur axba ki gardan par sawar hokar usko ghuse marne laga.ladte ladte dono thak gaye aur jameen par gir pade.ab axba ne bahut jor se hasna shuru kiya aur haste haste jameen par haath de dekhar marne laga.
waha log hairan hue ja rahe the ki aisa kya hua axba seth ko.ab axba seth ne casinar ki taraf dosti ka haath bada kar bola ki dosti hona mangta. do shero ke beech dosti ho to acha hain warna ek na ek sher maara jata hain. casinar jo ki bahut kam bolta tha iss baat ko samajh gaya aur usne axba ki dosti kabool kar li.axba ko pata chala ki casinar ko andar karwane main meri aur xysti seth ka haath hain.axba ne casinar ko bahar nikalwane ka intejam kar diya.jald casinar riha ho gaya aur jaisa ki axba ne usko bola tha ki jel se nikalte hi woh "mava mama" se jakar mile.

scene 3:
mava ki kursi
mava ek harfanmaula insaan tha aur axba ke gang main axba jitni hi haisiyat rakhta tha.woh gang ka home minister jaisa tha.gang ki dealing, transaction,day-to-day activities wahi run karta tha.lungi baandh kar woh din bhar cigarette ke kash leta tha aur rivals ke against plan banaya karta tha.log kehte the ki underworld main 2 hi baaton se daro ek to ak-47 se aur dusra mava ke dimag se.

ven sharma, casinar ko mava mama se milwane le gaya.mava ne casinar se bahut der baat kari aur phir uske baad uske liye ek flat ka intejam kar diya. ven gang ka ek member tha aur hamesha masti main rehta tha.woh casinar ko uske room par le gaya aur agle din office main aane ko bol gaya.

casinar ko kuch ajeeb nahi lag raha tha.yeh to uski jindagi thi jo uske na jaane kaha lekar jane lagi thi.woh bhi bas behta ja raha tha nadi ke uffan ke sath.
aaj ki raat woh aaram se soya.agle din woh mava ke office main gaya aur waha axba ko baitha dekhar kar hairan ho gaya.axba seth ne usko bola ki hairan na ho.underworld ke saare kaam secret hote hain aur casinar abhi nava nava hain.

scene 4:
casinar se casi
to be followed...
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