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Xossip Ultimate Story Contest 2013
#11
ULTIMATE LOVE

timmycool 46

Mr.Palash was sitting in his small room. Suddenly door knocked tak-tak,tak-tak
Mr.Palash – who is it?
From out side this is Alok please open the door
Mr.Palash opens the door and found a young man around 24 was standing.
Mr.Palash - yes what can I do for you?
The young man said “sir I am searching for Mr Palash ghosh
Mr.Palash- yes I am Mr Palash ghosh what can I do for you.
Sir I am Alok ghosh son of Mrs Rajani ghosh
Hearing this word Mr.Palash was stand still could not speak a word and looking with very wide eyes
After recovering then he asks Alok to come inside then he offer him a cup of tea

Lets us go flash back why Mr.Palash was astonished.

Twenty five years ago palash used to live in a village with his marital uncle. At very early age as he lost his mother and father. So he used to stay with his uncle and used to look after uncle’s household works. When he grow up as a young man of eighteen he fell in love with Rajani.
Rajani was only daughter of there parents. Her mother and father was farmer.
Regularly palash and rajani used meet near river. And slowly they were in deep love. So one day palash went to rajani’s house. Palash ask her father for Rajani’s hand to marry her. But Rajani’s father and mother was not ready to give her hand to palash.

Rajani’s father- see palash I know you are good man but how could I give my daughter hand to you because you don’t have any thing you stay at your uncle house how will you feed her so sorry son we cannot ruined our daughter life. Then palash came back with very sad and heart break.
When palash uncle Hear all this he drove him away and said get lost from here and don’t show your face to us any more. Next day palash called rajani to meet him railway platform at 4 pm.
When rajani came,
Palash- “rajani I don’t know I am capable for you or not, I don’t have that much quality and qualification even I don’t have any property. I know I have my strength and your love. If you support me and marry me we will slowly built our happy home.
Rajani was listening without saying any thing. Then slowly she said “after marriage where we will go.”
Palash- “ we will go to Kolkata and we will rent a house, and I will work hard so that we can live happily. I will never let you down.

Rajani – “Then when we will go I to love you very much I can’t live without you . After getting green signal from rajani they decided to leave next day at 4 pm
Next day when they arrive in Kolkata, went to kalighat they got married and after that they ranted a house in Kolkata.
After struggling for few days palash got job in a jute mill as load carrier at a salary of Rs. 2000.
They were living happily, in between this they the happiest couple in the world but one day nearly after three month a messenger came and informed that rajani’s mother is dead, so both of them went to there village.

Seeing Rajani and Palash villager gather. Rajani’s father was sitting near his dead wife. Seeing rajani and palash his
Father- “did not said any thing but ask her daughter to leave do not touch her mother.
For you only your mother died, you ran away with this man without informing us. Your mother could recovery from that incident in that shock she died, what I will do without her.
What you have done is very wrong we are not your enemy; forget all of us any way I am not going to bless you or curse you just leave from here with this man.
Then rajani said father I am only child there is no one except you and mother, please father forgive us then rajani’s father said you have your husband go away. Listening to conversation of father and daughter villagers also started to cry.

Palash got angry and went away from there rajani also fallowed him.
Time & Tide wait for none,
Slowly days past Palash and Rajani were living happily, nearly six month later she got news of her father death, she ask palash to go to visit her father dead body. But palash got angry and started to shout “ I don’t want to go to see that dead man face and I don’t want you to go. That man has insulted me, these ways the quarrel come to dead end, rajani packed her belongings and started to go, then palash said “if you go from here then never come back here”.
When rajani reach her village every thing was finished. Now no one was there in that village, she cannot go back to her husband even. One of her friend ask her to work in Patna in a house where she was working Now rajani was helpless she agreed and went to Patna. 

There she used to cook and washed cloth, for that she used to get Rs 50 and free food and stay.
Ajay uncle and his wife Anjali were very happy when they found rajani in there house because they have no child of there own.
Meanwhile rajani did not know that she was pregnant of three month. When days past every one came to know about her pregnancy her body shows every thing.
Nearly after 10 month Rajani give a birth to boy. Ajay uncle and Anjali were very happy due to there age there was no children.
Slowly and slowly the boy grew up and they named him “Alok”
Alok was very obedient and discipline man, after completing his education he joined security force.

Ajay and Anjali love Alok very much as grandchild.
One day Alok found Brigadier and his wife was sitting in there house talking with Ajay, Anjali and his mother Rajani.
He was surprised to see his boss in there house. When they saw him ask him to sit
Brigadier-“ son we came here to talk about your marriage
Alok –“ sir my parents are best person to take the decision
Brigadier –“ 1st you see the girl then only you make a decision. Just I can say Antara is well behave educate and ready to get married
Alok-“ sir if my parents is ready for my marriage then I am ready. After all this discussion from both sides date of marriage was fixed.

When day of marriage came Alok knock his mother’s room for blessing but found the room was dark his mother sitting in bed and was crying. Many times Alok has seen his mother crying many times, He has ask many times but she refuse to say anything.
But today when he went inside he asks his mother reason for crying. She said that it’s a happy tears but Alok did not listen to her mom and said “ mom today if you don’t tell me the truth I am not going to get marriage and this way he pleaded her mom.

Then Rajani said son I was thinking about you father, where is he what he is doing I know for me only I ruined his life. He used to love me like an hell for me he left his every thing and we built our happy home, after that she said every thing how they separated
Then Alok said mom you are like mother and father to me but for your shake I will find him.
Then Rajani said son today is very happy moment in our life I don’t want to spoil this movement talking all old talks
Here Mr. Palash was very unhappy when rajani left him. When he found rajani did not return after one month from village, he went to village and started to search her but when he heard she went away from there he was very unhappy and return home.

That day he drank a lot and started to shout “god why only me, why only me. I did not say anything when you took my mother and father in my childhood. When children used to run and leap into his mother lap I used to cry, but I did not said any thing. When I was in fever there was no one to make me sleep with mother soft hand still I did not said any thing. But now what wrong did I do even my wife left me. Please god bring her once and let me ask her why she left me
Bring her back just to see her last time, I love her more than anything, even god fight among them self but they do not leave each other. Please god bring her back just I want see her.
This way the Days past. Every day night time he used to talk with god saying same thing
In factory he used to work with full dedication and his strength and at night he used to drink a lot.
For his dedication in work he was promoted in his work with a good salary. After making money he buys a home.
He did not marry again due to love he gave to rajani. She was his first love and 1st love never be forgotten.

Now coming back from flash back

Mr.Palash- “son tell me once again what is your mother name?
Alok –“Father I am your son mother has told every thing. After my marriage taking a address with mom I came to Kolkata to search you.
For few days I was searching you, I went to your old house where you used to stay in rented house. But they said that you brought a home and you left that place. Then they told me your office address from there I took your home address.
Father I came here to take you to mother. Mr. Palash was very happy he said “when to go”
Alok -“Tomorrow night we will go by train.
Mr.Palash was very eager to meet rajani. With excitement he was not able to sleep. Next day they were getting ready to go Mr. palash wear same dress as he has wear when married rajani in kalighat then took a train and went to Patna.
After reaching patna they took a taxi reach home.

Antara was standing near a gate. She took a blessing and called her mother in law. What a co-incident she was also wearing same sari when she married in kalighat, when she came out Mr.Palash was speech less and catching hold of a gate he was staring at rajani for few minute when both of them not moving, Alok ask his father to come inside but he was not moving still staring at rajani. When Alok shook palash hand he fell down with wide open eyes. Alok found he was no more,
Alok- “ father, father awake up but no sound everything was salient, then rajani came near him with severing catch hold palash leg and put her head in his leg and remain there. Every one was crying after some time when Alok found that his mother was also not moving he called his mother, mother still no movement then he slightly pushed her she also fell down.
True love come to and end.

This is a god creation no one can go beyond that.
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