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MERI ASHIQUE AB TUM HE HO.....

shamskhan

kehte hain agar kisse se sache dil se mohabbat ke jaye to sare kayenat unn dono ko ek karne ke koshish karte hai

hal e dil kuch apna bhi aisa he hai.

flight ko bhopal pahunchne mein abhi 1 ghanta aur tha magar jaise jaise mere

manzil kareb aarahi thi dil aur teez raftar se dhadakne laga tha

ek ajeeb se khushi aur ek mazi ka dar dil mein ghar karne laga tha

mai shams khan delhi se 5sal baad apne khala ruksar begum ke ghar jaa raha tha

jahan dil apne mehbooba ke dedar ke liye bechain ho raha tha wahen dar bhi tha

ke pata nahi wahan pahunchne ke baad kya honga sabse zyada dar mujhe saba firdos mere khala ke eklaute beti ka tha..

ji han saba he wo ladki hai jo iss dil ke shehzadi hai..

bachpan sath mein guzra tha hamara sath mein khelte thay sath mein padhte

thay aur ek dusre se khoob ladte bhi thay

dekhte he dekhte bachpan kab jawani mein tabdeel hua pata he nahi chala

mujh par jawani apne shokhiyan bekher rahi thi magar saba par wo kuch zyada he

maherban thi apne 19 sal ke umar mein saba behad haseen doshiza bankar

duniyaa ke samne aaye thi jab bhi usse dekhta aise lagta

USSE DEKH KAR JOSH E JAWANI BHI RAKS KARTE HAI..
WO DALE PANV PANI MEIN TO PANI BHI RAKS KARTA HAI..
USSE CHUNE KE KHAWAHISH MEIN HAWA RUK RUK KE CHALTE HAI..
AUR JO CHU LE USSE TO KHOOB JALTI HAI.

saba bhi mere ankhon mein uske liye mohabbat mehsoos kar chuke thi

uske hontho ke larjish uske baat be baat par naraz ho jana aur mere mananae par

man bhi jana saaf bata raha tha ke dil ke kisse kone mein mai bhi apna makam bana chuka hun..

magar kehte haina mohabbat imtehan lete hai.

saba jisse mai apna sab kuch mana chuka tha aur usse apne sab kuch banana

chhata bhi tha usse ammi bhi apne ghar ke bahu banana chhate thi bas fark sirf

itne tha ke mere shareek e hayat nahi balke mere bade bhai aslam khan ke.

ammi aur khala mein baat chit bhi ho gaye thi aur dono khandano ko ye rishta bahut pasand bhi tha.
bas pucha nahi gaya to mujhse..

saba ek talem yafta mazhabi ladki thi apne ammi abbu se wo koi mutaleba nahi

karna chhate thi ek achi beti ke tarhan usne bhi han kehde.

sabhi bahut khush thay aur bhai ke khushi mein agar mai shareek nahi hota to to shaed beemani hoti.

achank pilot ke awaz se mai mai apne mazi se haal mein laut aaya

aur air port se sedha khala ke ghar pahunch gaya

hath kanp rahe thay door bell bajane ko khuda ka naam lekar akhir door bell par hath rakh diya.

rukhsar ;uffffffffffff ho aa rahi hun baba

mai;assalam o alikum khala jan

rukhsar;walikum assalam
mera bacha mera shams kahan tha tu abb apne khala se milne aaye ho aao aao andar aao mujhe to laga mere mayeyat mein bhi shaed naa aaonge tum

mai;khala kaise baten karrahi hain aap mare apke dushman

khala ko to jaise unka sab kuch mil gaya tha

wo roo rahi thi mere peshani ko choom rahi thi


unke awaz sunkar saba aur khalu bhi room se haal mein aagaye thay

khalu;shams kaise ho

salam karne ke baad mai khalu ke chhate se lipat ke roo pada waise to bhanje ko

ulfat apne khala se zyada hote hai magar mere lagawat bachpan se khalu ke sath zyada tha abbu ke maut ke baad


mere walid ke tarhan har kadam par mere rehnumaye karne wale mere khalu he thay.

saba door khadi mujhe dekh rahi thi

isse pehle ke mai usse salam karta wo mujhe salam karke apne room mein chali gaye.

khala khalu;ek pal ke liye khamosh ho gaye magar agle he pal unhone ne mujhe apne baaton mein behla liya.

ghar mein to jaise eid sa mahool lag raha tha khala thi ke bawarchi khane mein

pata nahi kya kya bana rahi thi aur khalu ke baten khatam hone ka naam nahi lee rahi thi

mai pani pene ke liye jab kitchen ke samne se guzar raha tha to andar se saba aur khala ke awaz sunkar wahen ruk gaya.

saba;ammi abb wo yahan kyun aaye hai
unse kehdo yahan se chale jaaye

khala;saba kya ho gaya hai tujhe humne tujhe aise he taleem de hai kya wo

mehman he nahi tera khala zaad bhai bhi hai jab tak wo yahan hai mujhe koi
galat baat nahi sunne

saba;jhunjla kar kitchen se bahar niklane lagte hai aur mai usse takra jaata hun

saba;dekh kar nahi chal sakte

mai;sorry ji apko kahen lagi to nahi

saba;ke ankhon mein ghussa aur ansu dono saaf dekhaye dee rahe thay wo bina kuch bole apne room mein chali jaate hai.

raat ke khane ke waqt sabhi dinning table par baithe khana kha rahe thay khala

apne bahen yani mere ammi ke bare mein puch rahi thi aur saba jaise inn sab baton se bezar hote jaa rahi thi

saba;aur shams sahab itne salon baad yahan kaise aana hua
koi khas maksad


uske baaton mein talkhi thi

khala;saba yee kya battamizi hai

mai;khala ek min sahi keh rahi hai saba mai yahan bina maksad ke nahi aaya hun

maine khala ka hath apne hath mein lekar sar jhuka kar bade halke phulke andaz mein unse kaha

khala mai yahan tute hue rishtedari ko jodne aaya hun

khala;kya matlab beta

mai;mai saba se shadi karna chhata hun

saba;kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
apko pata bhi hai aap kya keh rahe hai

ek bhai rishta jodna nahi chhata aur dusra bhai rishte dari jodne aaya hai

ammi chhaye kuch bhi kahen mai abhi apke samne kehte hun mujhe ye shadi nahi karne

khala;saba beti aisa nahi kehte

saba;aap kuch na kahen ammi mai inhen aur inke bhai ko ache tarhan jante hun

mai;agar tumhare yahi marzi hai to sunlo saba firdos mai bhi ammi se keh kar

aaya tha ke tumhen unke bahu bana kar lautunga yaa mar kar aaonga


agar tumne mere marne se pehle yee rishta kubool nahi ke to mai yahen tumhare room mein apne jan ded unga

maine sedha saba ke room mein ja kar room andar se lock kardiya

abb ye darwaza tab tak nahi khulenga jab tak tum han nahi keh deti

saba;mar jao mere bala se mai kabhi han nahi kehne wali

khala aur khalu;pareshan ho gaye thay

unn dono ko kuch samajh nahi aaraha tha ke karen to kya karen

mai bhi zid mein paka tha
raat se subha hue aur subha se raat magar maine door nahi khola

khala aaye khalu ne samjhaye magar koi fayeda nahi hua

akhir kar khala ka sabar ka bandh tootne laga jab wo kaali andheri raat subha

mein tabdeel hue to saba bhi fikar mand nazar aane lage

mujhe khana khaye do din guzar chuke thay

khala ;ka roo ro kar bura haal ho raha tha

saba mere bache ko bacha lee mar jayenga wo man jaa beti

wo bada ziddi hai bade duwaon ke baad iss ghar mein khushiyon ne dastak dee hain
man jaa beti
shaed khala ka sans phool gaya tha

akhir apne ammi ke halat dekh saba ko sare hathiyaar dalne pade

saba;darwaza kholo mai hun saba

mai;nahi mai nahi kholunga

saba;shams darwaza kholo jo tum chhahonge wahe honga

do min baad maine darwaza khool diya

darwaza khulte he mere seene par ek zor dar bukka saba ne raseed karde

saba;tum khud ko samajhte kya ho

mai;tumhara ashique

saba;nafrat karte hun mai tumse

mai;koi baat nahi mujhe koi farak nahi padhta

saba;ko laga honga mai kuch aur kahunga

khala khalu bhi khush thay aur ammi bhi

ammi;yee shadi jald se jald karwana chhate thi aur hua bhi aise he mahez ek

mahene ke andar mere aur saba ke shadi karwa dee gaye.

wo pal bhi ajeeb tha jab mai room mein dakhil hua

wo hamare milan ke raat thi hamare suhagraat

jaise he mai room andar se lock karke saba ke taraf palta mere hosh udd gaye

saba;khidke ke samne khade sisak sisak ke roye jaa rahi thi

mujhse uske halat dekhe nahi gaye maine uska hath pakad na chhaha magar

usne hath jhatak ke bed par aakar baith gaye uska chehra surkh ho chuka tha

saba;apne aisa kyun kiye shams
kyu

mai;mere baat pehle sunlo saba uske baad tum jo saza mujhe dongi mujhe kubool hongi.

maine uske hathon ko apne hath mein lekar dhemi awaz mein kehna shuru kiya.

mujhe pata nahi tum mehsoos karte ho ke nahi magar mai tumse beepanah

mohabbat karta hun mere dil ke gehrayeon mein sirf ek naam basa hai wo tumhara hai saba

mai tumse shadi bhi karna chhat tha magar ammi ne tumhen bhai ke liye pasand kiye

saba bhai jan se iss liye shadi se pehle wali raat ghar chor ke chale gaye thay ke

unhone mere ankhon mein tumhare liye mohabbat dekh liye thay mai apne bed

room mein roo raha tha aur mere hathon mein tumhare tasveer thi unhone ne

mujhe puche aur mai unhune sab kuch batata chala gaya

mere mohabbat uss waqt ek tarfa thi magar bhai jan ko yaqeen tha mai tumhen ek din apna bana lunga

iss liye bhai jan ne shadi se inkar kardiye thay aur hamare ghar se barat tumhare ghar nahi aaye thi

mai uss waqt tumhen apna iss liye nahi bana sakta tha ke mere padhye shurur thi

aur halat bhi aise nahi thay saba

magar abb mai ek MBA hun ek bahut bade company mein job karta hun bhai jan

ne koi kurbani nahi de unhone mujhse itna he kaha tha uss waqt

ke chote mohabbat jiss se karo usse pane ke liye chhaye tumhen duniyaa se bhi ladna pade peche mat hatna.

bhai jan ne tumhen kuwait se salam kaha hai aur hamare aane wali azdawaji zindage ke liye duwayen bhi bheji hai.

saba;sisakte sisakte

mujhe us waqt bhai jan par bahut ghussa aaya tha shams

mai bhi tumse beepanah mohabbat karte hun

ammi abbu ke baat nahi girana chhate thi isse liye maine han kahe thi magar

mai;magar

saba;apne larazte hue hontho se mere peshani choom leti hai

magar mere shams abb saba tumhare hai.

mai;muu to dekho zara apna kya haal bana rakhe ho mujhe laga

suhagrat hai saji sanvri dulhan se samna honga magar yaa khuda

saba;apne ansu pochte hue

sach mein zara dekhun to mai wo wash room mein jane ke liye khadi hote hai

magar uske dupatte par mera panv rakha hua tha wo khadi nahi hoo pati

saba;suniyee apka panv

mai;itne baten karte ho yee nahi kehsakte ke

saba;aap bhi na mujhe pehle bata dete sare baat to itna pareshan kiye mujhe

mai;saba ko apne baahon mein bhar leeta hun aur usse bed par apne neche gira deta hai

uske ankhon mein dekhte hue

agar pehle bata deta to mere jan ka yee roop nahi dekh pata aur tumhare muu se

suhagrat ke din yee kubool nahi karwa pata ke tum bhi mujhse beepanah

mohabbat karte ho

saba;apne ankhen band kar leeti hai aur mai uske uske hontho ko apne hontho se laga kar chumne lagta hun

saba;unhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
wo sharma rahi thi pehle martaba ko mard usse aise jaga chuu raha tha

dhere dhere mai uske hontho ko chumta hua neche sarakte hue gardan ko chumta hua uske breast tak pahunch jata hun

saba;ke ankhen abb bhi band thi

mai;ankhen kholo saba

saba;unhuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

mere mashuka mere samne thi wo husn ke maleeka jisse pane ke liye mai din

raat tadpa tha jiske liye maine kaye mushkilat ka samna kiya tha mujhse ek ek

pal katna mushkil tha mai jald se jald apne saba ko hamesha hamesha ke liye apna bana lena chhata tha

wo laal colour ke laache mein asman ke pari lag rahi thi

uske band ankhon ka fayeda uthate hue mai apne kameez aur paijama utaar deta

hun aur uske upar jhuk ke uske breast ko masalte hue hontho ko chumte hue

uske shalwar ka nada khool deta hun

saba;ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


ek pal bas ek pal ke liye usne uss waqt ankhen khul ke dekhe hongi

aur agle he pal uske ankhen band hojate hain upar ke sans upar aur neche ke

neche uske peshani par aata paseena saaf bata raha tha ke wo bahut nervous hai aur ghabra bhi rahi hai

ek hath se uske shalwar aur panty neche utarne ke baad mai uske upar aagaya

mai;mai chhata hun tum mujhe dekho saba apne shohar ko dekho uss waqt jab

mai hamare beche ka wo nazuk parda hata dun tum apne shohar ke ankhon mein

dekho aur mere mohabbat ko mehsoos karo

saba;apne ankhen khool deti hai
bas wahi wo pal tha jab mera lund uske choot ke upar tha

dono ke jism mein ek thande laher daud rahi thi uske kanpte hue hontho par bas yahi guzarish thi

mujhe apna bana lo shams mujhe apna bana lo

aur maine apne saba ko hamesha hamesha ke liye firdos e khan bana liya uske

choot ke andar tak mera lund jaa raha tha aur uske ankhon mein ansu umadne

lage thay jaise he lund uske hymen ko todta hua pura ka pura andar chala gaya

saba mujhse chipak gaye aur pagalon ke tarhan mere hontho ko chumne lage

mai;tumhen dard nahi ho raha jabke uske choot se khoon lagatar bahar beh raha tha

saba;jisse mohabbat hote hai uska dard bhi metha lagta hai janu

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