Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Rocky@handsome]

As for Hemant not reacting to Vikram and Sonarika. I believe him lashing out won't do justice to his character. 

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And do not worry , Pranitha is definitely in the horizon. She will pave the way for an interesting lifestyle and new exploration in Hemant's arc. On the storyline standpoint , Pranitha is to Hemant is what Vikram is to Sonarika. The perfect partner they need. 
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I completely agree; it’s a good thing Hemant didn’t show any anger or lash out when he saw Sonarika with Vikram in the flat—otherwise, his character’s image would have been tarnished. And yes, Hemant should totally ignore Sonarika, as if she never existed in this world, as I had already commented the same word's on your previous updates when she confessed everything to Hemant.

However, he cannot do that because he doesn’t want to hurt his son Karan, nor does he want to shatter the false dream of a united family.

In my opinion, Hemant has been tragically wronged. Sonarika not only betrayed Hemant but also mercilessly inflicted wounds on his heart like a cruel oppressor.

1) When she first betrayed him, she claimed Vikram was a passionate lover and Hemant was too busy. But is working hard for the family and not giving his wife enough time a crime? Should betrayal be the reward?

2) The second time, Sonarika restarted the affair with Vikram, stabbing Hemant’s wounds again and again, even though he was fully supporting her and had become a passionate lover. Yet, her infidelity was justified with the claim that her special bond with Vikram went beyond physical pleasure.

3) Under the guise of therapy and self-discovery, Sonarika repeatedly hurt Hemant with her words, while secretly, (subconsciously) deep in her heart, she was dreaming of a future with Vikram. She was unwittingly building dreams with him.

4) Ultimately, she went back to Vikram’s house, pouring salt on Hemant’s wounds and using the ghost of Dilawar as an excuse.

Last but not least (though Sonarika did not intend it), unfortunately, the harshest and cruelest betrayal to Hemant’s soul was showing him the private world of happiness between Sonarika and Vikram, which literally made Hemant’s soul bleed.

In this entire love triangle, Vikram emerged victorious and was hailed as the real hero, while Hemant was portrayed as the loser husband. Sacrificing such true love and devotion, only to be branded a loser, is a grave injustice.

So far in this story, the only one who has lost everything is Hemant. Sonarika lost nothing—she will be with Vikram, have half custody of her son Karan, and a bright future ahead. For Hemant, even half custody will hurt deeply because he never imagined his son would grow up in a broken family, but now that painful reality is unfolding.

Sonarika carries only guilt for hurting Hemant’s heart; she shows no regret or sorrow for losing a loving husband like him. I never felt Sonarika truly longed for Hemant or his love—only sympathy remains, nothing more.

Now that she has chosen Vikram, even if Hemant loves someone else, Sonarika will neither feel jealousy nor insecurity. She will happily live her life and soon forget Hemant, because time heals all wounds.

Even if Hemant finds a new partner, it will never truly be justice for him. Sonarika had a choice between Vikram and Hemant, and she chose Vikram—humiliating Hemant’s genuine love and sacrifice.

If Hemant had the choice, he would have always chosen Sonarika without hesitation.

I sincerely wished that Sonarika would repent for her mistakes and return to Hemant, because their love was real. But that hope is now completely lost; Sonarika has finally chosen Vikram, no matter what excuse there is.

I also wanted to see a scene where Sonarika sees Hemant with another woman in bed—especially witnessing his wild and aggressive side—and feels helpless, unable to do anything. Such a scene was possible because Hemant was shown to be powerful, unlike in other stories where the husband appears weak. This would have revealed Hemant’s strength and truth, adding depth to the story—but that hope is now lost.

Since Sonarika has chosen Vikram, she no longer cares what Hemant does with any woman.

So overall, even if Hemant conquers the whole world, he has lost to Vikram in the battle of true love, which is deeply tragic and painful.

Sonarika and Vikram will build their palace of happiness, upon which lie the ashes of Hemant’s love and sacrifice.

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This is purely my personal view; please don’t take it as criticism. You are free to shape your story as you wish—I’m just sharing the pain and feelings from my heart.

Your storytelling and vivid imagination bring these characters to life in such a powerful way. Keep creating such compelling narratives that touch the heart and soul. I truly admire your dedication and talent—wishing you endless creativity and success ahead!

God Bless You 

Regards 

Rocky ❤️