02-10-2025, 09:47 AM
Bro ... I usually like and rate ... This is my first comment... I liked this story very much... Your way of writing also very good...But I have a critic to mark it in here...this is purely my view and I don't ask you to change the story line or your thought process
After senthil's entry I felt the story is going towards cuckold type of story... Which I don't like.. I started liking this story because it is not promoting cuckold. But unfortunately in my view the story moving towards cuckold now.
After senthil's entry I felt the story is going towards cuckold type of story... Which I don't like.. I started liking this story because it is not promoting cuckold. But unfortunately in my view the story moving towards cuckold now.