Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

Wonderful writing.what an excellent story teller you are.

But again, what a wonderfully written story. Just jotting down what I felt. Not to point out anything in the story. Hoping for more such cool and exciting updates.

Good observation , due to Karan , Hemant can never remove Sonarika from his life. So at the end of the day , he will have to accept and endure her choices and her relationship with Vikram. Which is where Michael King's attitude and mindset will help evolve and liberate Hemant from Sonarika's actions. I don't consider Hemant a loser in this story , I mean lets be real , Hemant turned from a simple employee to a Business Magnate in limited time and now has an identity of a made man across the elites. As for him leaving Sonarika , its pretty clear Hemant still loves her , and her choices broke him and now he has decided he is no longer bound to her anymore. And that is needed because I want his character to show men has a breaking point , and Sonarika crossed that right now. And this will also open different scenarios for her character to be explored.