Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[JohnS112]

Wonderful writing.what an excellent story teller you are.

I guess Hemant can’t really cut off all relations with Sonarika…due to Karan. And again as many have pointed out before, I feel the real loser in all this mess is Hemant and Karan. Sonarika would be happy with Vikram and forget Hemant after sometime. After all Time heals everything. However, what punishment is this that she has a life she wanted…beautiful family…loving husband, son, her sister.Whereas Hemant has just semblance of a good life. Making out with everyone you desire may not bring the calm Hemant really wanted. Michael King and Hemant to truly be free and one require that calm…and that doesn’t comes with betrayal…or leaving the past behind as Michael did when he married Sonarika.

One has to face the past. Accepting ones mistakes and letting ones love go away just because one thinks she is happy with other man shows a weakness in Michael. That was not the Michael King different characters in the story spoke about.

But again, what a wonderfully written story. Just jotting down what I felt. Not to point out anything in the story. Hoping for more such cool and exciting updates.