Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

I am uncertain about this update and dont know how to rate it . It is one of the best erotic chapters but at the same one of the weakest chapter plot wise 

Again YOU ROCK,  HARRY   . 

Thank you for the Kind Words.

Yeah , it felt great to do sex scenes after a while and I can say proudly , this is just the beginning. The future chapters will feature more sex as Hemant Kumar's liberation is complete.....Now he is unleashed and he has a pletorah of Women to get his pleasures fullfilled.

And yeah I definitely spammed the "Few Days Later" LOL. But I had to because I wanted to make sure time passed in between each events or else readers might mistake next scene happens right away.

As for the Therapist Neha Bharadwaj , she is just there to provide relief for Sonarika as a person. Her job is also a bit severe as she is one of the rare person who is aware of Sonarika's medical condition. And rather than block her , Neha is doing what she can to make sure Sonarika is comfortable. Also she never stated to go sleep with Vikram. That was Meghna's doing , she was one enticing her and Sonarika suffering from the trauma of kidnapping went to Vikram to get rid of Dilawar's hauntings in her.


Now the most important part about Sonarika's arc , I think some readers can see why this arc happens. Sonarika is suffering mentally and due to her recent trauma of Dilawar, she cannot find that comfort with Hemant as his touch remind her of those terrible memories. Plus the most important factor , Sonarika is still unaware of Hemant being Michael King. She wanted dominating , rough sex that could replace Dilawar's nightmare in her brain and according to her , she cannot get that with Hemant as all her life , Hemant held back with her. But Vikram didn't , which is why she went to Vikram , because deep down , she was sure Vikram could erase those memories and forge new ones because Vikram roughs her up. Something she expects to never get from Hemant. Which is why she chose to go to Vikram to have a special time with him , but Hemant's arrival there was something she didn't expect. And that has paved the way for Hemant's Liberation.


About the Tamanna's arc , its simple. Tamanna already has her own tragedies , she had lost her husband to violence and is aware of violent people. But she does not see the negative side of that in Hemant because , one , she knows the true Hemant , one that was with her during college. And two , Hemant was there to save her daughter , something that fuelled Tamanna's feelings towards him. Which is why during their first time , they simply went off , no talks , no confessions , just gave in. And that suited them at that moment because they ended up satisfying each other to the fullest. Hemant embraced Michael King at that moment when he remembered a past memory of him with Kira and Ashnoor. And Tamanna fuelled by her desire towards him as he was always her most desirable man since college. Which is why she doesn't care about his violence, because she has faith that Hemant will never walk a dark path that she has experienced in her own personal life before.


As for Hemant not reacting to Vikram and Sonarika. I believe him lashing out won't do justice to his character. Because first and foremost , those two are still unaware of Michael King. And at that moment , I wanted Hemant to be liberated with his hope and  bound to Sonarika. He came there days after having amazing sex with Tamanna , so he is already moving ahead. But seeing the pictures and seeing Sonarika happy , this will make him ignore Sonarika wholely in the future. And when it comes to betrayal , nothing hurts more when the person who you betrayed cuts every relation with you beacuse that will haunt them forever. Because in this point , her arc takes a different approach for the future. Because now it will be Sonarika truly seeing her own errors and faults , understanding that she is making erratic decisions and realizing how much she has stumbled from her real identity. All I can say for now is her arc will be something I am definitely looking forward to explore.


And do not worry , Pranitha is definitely in the horizon. She will pave the way for an interesting lifestyle and new exploration in Hemant's arc. On the storyline standpoint , Pranitha is to Hemant is what Vikram is to Sonarika. The perfect partner they need. And Pranitha and Hemant's arc is something I am definitely curious about because there is a lot of interesting scenarios I have planned to explore with them.


And finally yes , this is the True Beginning of Hemant Kumar , the formidable Michael King merged to a fragile Hemant forming a vibrant , flamboyant , ruthless , tactical version of himself. And Hemant Kumar's growth is just the beginning , he is preparing his army , for a conflict that will put all the characters in the crossfire in the future. Ironically his war will decide the fates of all the characters as the story progresses to its DESTINATION!