Adultery Vinod- A Financial Cuckold.

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You wrote like a english literature type english. I like it. I like erotic literature slowly developed story. You just wrote an erotica on my fav genre.

I am wondering if it is fantasy or real life incident. But excellent plot. new thoughts. I like your style.

But you could describe more about Sharmi's figure and character. You could inginte the suspicion like male underwear in her laundry basket before Ravi came in her house. Vinod afraid ask about it and thinking about it a lot. The more vinod will suspect and sharmi will fool him the more story will get exciting, hot.

Now I don't know what is Sharmi's planning when he called her office frnd or he is a boyfriend? Make sharmi a cunning, smart lady at the same time very horny for Ravi.

Make more rules.

Make a situation where Ravi will fall on trap and even if he wants to get out of this stuation he cannot go back anymore.

Let me know if I can share my thoughts which you may like to add. Otherwise you are going good.

hi thanks for your valuable comment.
i purposefully left sharmi's description so that the readers can imagine their own features of sharmi.
and regarding the characterization, sharmi is an adventurous women and is now exploring the opportunities that are laid before her through ravi and vinod. ravi being a strong alpha male and vinod is a simp.  
will try to include the scenarios that you wished. 
i would like to keep this as realistic as possible though it will be difficult as this is more like an fantasy story.