Adultery Sanskari Aurat bani Lund ki Deewani

[fantasywriter]

Update no 39


Avni jaise hi Darji ke Dukan pe aati hai darji usko pahchan jata hai
Darji - Meem sahab aap, kaha chale gye the
Avni - bahut lambi kahani hai Mai bahar chali gyi thi

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Next Day Avni aaram se uthati hai kyuki ab uske dono chote bachhe ab thode bade ho gye the or usko sambhalne ke liye uske saas or sasur ji aa chuke the or Avni se Monu ko ab hamesha uske Ghar pe hi rahne ko bol deti hai jisse wo uske saas sarur ko bachha pakde me help kar sakte uske bachhe ne v uska dudh pina v band kar chuka tha
Kyuki ab Avni gabbar ke sath thi to Gabbar hi hamesha uska dudh pee jata tha to uske beta Aakash ko bahar ka dudh pine ka aadat tha




Too be continue...

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It would be better if you could create some scenes of encounter of Gabbar.
Sakshi moved which was expected due to absence of her employer. 
Darji's scene could be more erotic. It lacks eroticism in it. It is became just bang bang without any feeling. You should little bit more  inside Avni's feeling. 
Customer scene was good but Avni's should not expose to him.  In a city ACP's  identity could not hide much due to just held press conference. 
My suggestion would be like 
Darji's mentioned customer  proposal  (intension of earning money) to Avni. 
Avni scolded Darji and threatened for not any further chudai session with him if he tried to expose her identity. They planned and as per plan when customer came in shop, Darji went inside after that "aahh aahh  " like sound came and tailor came grinning and say that he was fucking a girl there. When they were talking again same sound appear and customer understand that Darji was watching some porn movie, so he scolded darji. Then darji told him that she only fucked Avni in dream because she is ACP of city and even she know that he had such intensions then they both would be killed in encounter. earlier he was trying to impress customer that he had such high level whore for him. 

Just thinking that Avni's over exposure could not be in favor of story because it will restrict his journey where if Darji became mukhir of Avni and then introduce other males as mukhbir for Avni then it will create more possibility for Avni to get  pleasure and duty both. 
Gaurav's photo thread is still open. She should tackle that. 
new neighbor and in laws could add more spices in the story.
Do not allow Avni's son friends to enjoy Avni as ACP , it will make weak the role of Avni as ACP.  As ACP Avni should be fearless and untouchable except darji, Gurav and other mukhbirs. 
You had created character of Avni as ACP so let her behave like ACP except some selected and calculated risks otherwise it will became ordinary threads like other. 
You had enough incest, now move from there to add different encounters so that readers who do not like incest much, would also join the story.


just sharing my own imagination and fantasies.