Adultery Bound by Storm: Urvashi's Journey into Forbidden

[PELURI]

what's missing is lack of creating sensuous depravity of affair by a wedded wife and as well aa deficit of tender description of the delicate bodily features of beautiful urvasi and strong zaid...emotional afhyachar is completely missing

sorry guys...a few spell mistakes...it's emotional athyachar which is missing....though the context set up is juicy, character built up is lacking