21-09-2025, 11:33 PM
Nice update, nice plot but go little bit slow,
Try to add more detailing, little bit of resistance so frontman try to convince her Praise her holy work , add little bit shyness as she thinks she is doing nobel work as a goddess not a hoe.
And my personal opinion try to avoid the scene of dipa with sabina (lesbo scence)
Try to add more detailing, little bit of resistance so frontman try to convince her Praise her holy work , add little bit shyness as she thinks she is doing nobel work as a goddess not a hoe.
And my personal opinion try to avoid the scene of dipa with sabina (lesbo scence)