13-09-2025, 02:43 PM
Update 117•2
Scene Update – Parallel Climax (Arjun & Zaheer)
Auditorium ek jung ka maidan ban gaya hai. security officer, gunde, students, sab ek doosre se takra rahe hain. Cheekh-pukaar, goliyon ki goonj, lohe ki rod aur kursi todne ki awaaz. Har taraf dhua aur khoon.
? Camera split-frame karta hai:
Ek taraf Arjun vs Mushtaq, dusri taraf Zaheer vs Lalit. Background me ek hi heartbeat ki dhadkan bajti hai, jo dono fights ke beat ke saath synchronize hoti hai.
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Arjun vs Mushtaq
Mushtaq apni bandook Arjun ke sir pe rakhta hai.
Mushtaq
Kya samajhta hai tu? Hero hai? Tere jaise anpadh gawar mere jaise logon ke samne mitti bhi nahi! Tera aaj antim din hai saale!
Arjun apne khoon se bheege hoth se ek thandi si smile deta hai. Uski aankhen full fire.
Arjun
Mitti main nahi hu… tu banne wala hai.
Arjun ek dum se apna haath uthata hai, Mushtaq ki gun ko side me push karta hai. Dhadaam! goli chhoot jaati hai aur auditorium ke upar wale speaker me ghusti hai. Arjun fir ek full power mukka Mushtaq ke chehre par martaa hai.
Mushtaq girta hai lekin turant uthta hai aur apna hunting knife nikalta hai.
Mushtaq
Aaj tera khoon mere hatho se milega zameen ko!
Dono ek doosre par jaanwar ki tarah toot padte hain. Knife Arjun ke cheek ko scratch karta hai, khoon behne lagta hai. Lekin Arjun knife ko pakad kar usse ulta ghumata hai aur Mushtaq ke haath pe cut kar deta hai.
Mushtaq cheekhta hai, lekin Arjun uske pet me knee martaa hai, aur fir uske gale ko pakad kar stage ke railing pe dhadaam se patakta hai.
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Zaheer vs Lalit
Dusre side, Lalit apne brass knuckle ke saath Zaheer ke jaw pe mukka marne hi wala hota hai. Zaheer uska haath rok leta hai. Dono ka chehra ek inch door, aankhen laal, saans garam.
Zaheer
Tere drugs ne meri gali ka ek ek baccha barbaad kar diya hai. Aaj tera hisaab khatam!
Lalit cheekh kar mukka chodta hai, lekin Zaheer usse block karke uske pet me lagatar 3 punches ghusa deta hai. Fir ek body slam karke Lalit ko podium ke peeche patak deta hai.
Lalit ke bodyguards daudte hain, lekin Zaheer unhe apne jism se dhakel deta hai. Uska khoon se bheega chehra, haath me ek todhi hui chain — woh chain Lalit ke gale me lapet deta hai aur kheenchta hai.
Lalit ghutne lagta hai, aankhen bahar nikalti hain.
Zaheer
Yeh awaaz… yeh cheekh… yeh tere drug se mare hue students ki roohon ka badla hai!
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Parallel Crescendo
? Camera ekdum synchronized cut karta hai:
Arjun Mushtaq ko uthakar ek flying kick se dhadaam! se stage ke center me giraata hai.
Zaheer chain kheench kar Lalit ko podium ke saamne ghutno pe laata hai.
Background me ek hi beat — dhad dhad dhad!
Chief Guest, media, aur poora auditorium shock me hai. Ammu aur Shanu dono ki aankhen aansuon se bhar jaati hain, par dil me ek hi jazba: yeh dono ab akela nahi, ek saath lad rahe hain.
Goliyon aur cheekh-pukaar ke beech, auditorium ke bahar ek hi waqt me siren ki gehri goonj ghoomti hai. Pee-pon! Pee-pon!
Agle hi pal auditorium ke darwaze tod kar security officer ki tukdiyan andar ghus jaati hain. Shield, rifle aur baton lekar woh ek ek row cover karte hain.
Ek loudspeaker par awaaz goonjti hai
security officer
Sab students aur guests safe exit ki taraf daudho! Media aur faculty turant bahar nikle!
Camera me dikhaya jata hai:
Students ek dusre ka haath pakad kar stage ke peeche ke emergency gate se nikal rahe hain.
Guest aur reporters ko security officer cordon me le kar bahar le jaati hai.
Auditorium ke andar ab sirf gunde, bodyguards aur fighting chaos bacha hai.
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security officer Action Montage
security officer ke shields gundo se takraate hain, danday baraste hain.
Ek ek karke 50–60 gunde ko zameen par patak kar cuffs pehna dete hain.
Lalit ke personal bodyguards bhi ek line me khade kar ke arrest hote hain.
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Stage Pe
Arjun aur Zaheer abhi bhi apne dushmano ke saath jaan ki ladai kar rahe hote hain. Arjun Mushtaq ke gale ko daba raha hota hai aur Zaheer Lalit ki chain kheench raha hota hai.
Tabhi inspector — khoon me lathpath, chehra kuta hua, uniform phati hui — apna pura jism ghaseetta hua stage par aata hai.
Woh cheekhta hai
Inspector
Bas! Ab chhod do inhe! Yeh kaam ab kanoon ka hai… tum dono yahan ruko!
security officer turant stage par daudti hai. 4–5 constable Mushtaq ko ghaseet kar neeche le jaate hain, uske haath bandhe jaate hain. Dusre 3–4 constable Lalit ke gale se chain utar kar usse zameen par dhakel dete hain aur cuffs laga dete hain.
Mushtaq cheekhta hai
Main wapas aaunga! Tum sabko mitti me mila dunga!
Aur Lalit garajta hai
Mere baap ki kursi pe main baithunga! Yeh khel abhi khatam nahi hua!
Lekin security officer unki cheekhon ko siren aur cuffs ki khanak me daba deti hai.
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Inspector’s Glance
Inspector Arjun aur Zaheer ki taraf dekhta hai — dono khoon se bheege, thake hue, lekin abhi bhi apne dushman ko pakad ke rakhe hue.
Inspector kuch nahi bolta. Sirf ek tez, gehra glance deta hai. Aankhen bolti hain:
“Tumne galtiyan ki… lekin aaj jo kiya, usse sab bacha.”
Phir woh turant wapas gundo ki taraf mudh jaata hai aur arrest supervise karne lagta hai.
Camera Arjun aur Zaheer par zoom karta hai. Dono ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain — aankhon me guilt bhi hai, sukoon bhi, aur ek naya faisla bhi.
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security officer Mushtaq aur Lalit ko pakad kar le jaati hai. Auditorium ab khaali ho raha hai, sirf thodi kursiyan tuti hain, khoon ke nishaan hain aur hawa me barood ki boo.
Stage par sirf tootey hue spotlight, kursiyon ke tukde aur khoon ke nishaan bache hain. security officer Mushtaq aur Lalit ko le ja chuki hai. Auditorium khali ho raha hai, sirf kuch cops evidence collect kar rahe hain.
Arjun aur Zaheer — dono zameen par gir kar saans phoolte hue, khoon aur pasine me bheege, aankhon me thakaan aur andherapan sa. Unke dil ki dhadkan abhi bhi us goliyon ki goonj ke sath race kar rahi hai.
Tabhi do parchaayi daud kar unke paas aati hain — Shanu aur Ammu.
Shanu ghutno ke bal girti hai Zaheer ke paas. Uska chehra aansuon se bhig chuka hai, haath kaanpte hue Zaheer ke zakhmon ko touch karte hain.
Shanu
Zaheer… tu thik hai na? Uth… please kuch bol…
Zaheer apni aankhen kholta hai, thoda halki si muskaan lane ki koshish karta hai, lekin dard use khinch leta hai. Uski aankhen Shanu ke aansuon par tik jaati hain,
Dusri taraf Ammu Arjun ke paas jhukti hai, uske kapde khoon se lal ho gaye hain. Ammu ke haath uske chehre ko sambhalte hain.
Ammu
Arjun… please aankhen khol… main yaha hoon… main kahi nahi jaa rahi.
Arjun halki si aankh uthakar Ammu ko dekhta hai. Uske hothon se ek dard bhari saans nikalti hai. Uski ungli Ammu ki kalai ko halka sa pakadti hai, jaise uski tasalli lena chahta ho.
Stage par dono pairs ek dusre ke saath lipte hue hain, magar dono mardon ke beech ek bechain khamoshi bachi hai.
Zaheer ek pal ke liye Arjun ki taraf dekhta hai. Arjun bhi usi pal nazar ghoomata hai Zaheer ki taraf. Aankhon me ek hi sawal likha hai —
“Humne ek dusre ko dushman samjha… lekin aaj saath ladhte hue kitni zindagiyan bacha li.”
Lekin dono ke hoth khamosh hain. Koi “dost” shabd zubaan par nahi aata. Sirf hesitation, sirf wo bharosa jo ban kar bhi abhi dhoond raha hai jagah.
Shanu aur Ammu ek dusre ko dekhti hain, samajh jaati hain ki in dono ke dil abhi bhi uljhe hue hain… par zakhmon aur dard ke iss waqt unse kuch kehna bekaar hai.
Camera stage se dheere dheere zoom out karta hai…
Ek taraf khoon me bhiga Arjun Ammu ki god me.
Dusri taraf thaka hua Zaheer Shanu ke kandhe par.
Aur dono ke beech ek khaali jagah, jo abhi bharni baaki hai.
Auditorium ab khaali hai. Sirf kuch tootey hue posters, jali hui taro ki smell aur security officer ki fading siren ki goonj bachi hai. Stage par ek soft yellow spotlight abhi bhi chal rahi hai, jaise woh dono jo ladhai ke beech se guzre, unke liye ek witness ho.
Arjun aur Zaheer ko stretcher par le jaane ke bajaye dono apne pairon pe baith gaye hain, zakhm gehre hain par dono ka zidd aur ego unse bhi gehra.
Ammu Arjun ke paas baithi hai, uske haath abhi bhi uska chehra pakde hue, uske aansu Arjun ke galle par gir rahe hain. Arjun hamesha ki tarah tough rehne ki koshish karta hai, par is dafa uski aankhon me vulnerability chamak rahi hai.
Arjun (halki saans ke sath)
Mujhe laga… main sab kuch control kar raha hoon… lekin main khud ko hi kho raha tha.
Ammu uske hoth chhup kar sirf uska haath zor se pakad leti hai.
Dusri taraf Zaheer Shanu ko dekh raha hai. Uska chehra dard se bhar gaya hai, par Shanu ke aansuon ko dekhkar uske dil me kuch todta hai.
Zaheer (aawaz bhari hui)
Main tujhe kabhi khud se alag soch hi nahi sakta tha Shanu… aur phir bhi maine tujhe iss khel me dhakel diya.
Shanu uske kandhe par sar rakh kar kehti hai
Bas chup ho ja Zaheer. Jo bhi hua… ab hum dono saath hain.
Ek pal ke liye pura stage ek tasveer ban jaata hai—
Arjun aur Ammu ek dusre ke paas, Arjun ke aankhon me wo softness jo kabhi usne kisi ko nahi dikhayi.
Zaheer aur Shanu ek dusre me lipte hue, jaise har tufaan ab sirf un dono ka hai.
Aur phir… Arjun aur Zaheer ki nazrein milti hain.
Pehle awkward silence. Dono ke chehre par hesitation, guilt, aur ek saath ek anjaana relief.
Phir Arjun thoda sa haan bhar kar sir jhukaata hai—jaise keh raha ho, main galat tha.
Zaheer ki aankhen nam ho jaati hain. Wo sirf ek halki si muskaan deta hai, jaise jawab ho, aur main bhi.
Ammu aur Shanu ek dusre ki taraf dekhti hain. Dono ki aankhon me ek chhupi si khushi hai—ke shayad ab zindagi ek naye mod par jaa rahi hai.
Camera dheere dheere stage se zoom out karta hai.
Ek naya chapter shuru hone wala hai.
Scene Update – Next Day After the Chaos
Poora campus ek ajeeb sannate me dooba tha. Jahan kal tak posters, loudspeakers, slogans aur rally ki awaazein gunj rahi thi, wahan aaj hawa bhi chup thi. Corridors khali, notice boards adhe–phate postero se latak rahe the, aur canteen ki kursiyan ulati–padi thi jaise kisi ne jaldi me sab chhod diya ho.
Frame 1 – Arjun & Ammu
Library ke saamne ki bench par Arjun baitha tha. Uske dono haathon par plaster, kandhe par sling, chehre pe gehri bandage, aur aankhon ke paas chot ke nishan. Jaise uski poori body kisi war se laut kar patch–up ki gayi ho.
Arjun neeche dekh raha tha, ungliyon ki bandage ko ungliyon se hi touch karta hua. Uski aankhon me guilt ka bojh tha—jaise wo khud ko hi saza de raha ho.
Arjun (halki si aawaz me)
Mujhe lagta hai sab meri wajah se hua, Ammu… agar main pehle hi peeche hat jata to shayad itni jaan–maal ka khatra nahi hota.
Ammu uske paas baithi thi. Usne uska bandaged haath apne dono haathon se pakad kar apni god me rakha. Uski aankhon me aansu the lekin awaaz me mazbooti.
Ammu
Arjun… agar tu nahi hota na, to na main yaha baithi hoti, na ye college ke students zinda hote. Tu khud ko dosh mat de. Tu sirf ladha nahi, tu ne hum sabko bachaaya hai.
Arjun uski taraf dekhta hai—us guilt ke beech ek chhoti si rahat ki chamak.
Frame 2 – Zaheer & Shanu
Camera dheere se canteen ki taraf shift hota hai. Wahi canteen jahan kal tak chai ke order aur students ki awaaz gunjti thi, aaj kursiyan khali thi, counter par bartan bikhar gaye the.
Corner wali table par Zaheer baitha tha, ek haath plaster me, doosre haath ki ungliyon me bandage, maatha aur gaalon par gehre zakham ke nishan. Uski aankhen khidki se bahar khaali campus ko tak rahi thi, aur uske chehre par ek dard, ek guilt chipka hua tha.
Zaheer (andar hi andar, thodi uchi aawaz me)
Main kya karne chala gaya tha, Shanu… sab ke sapne, sabki zindagi barbad karne… apni nafrat ke chakkar me andha ho gaya.
Shanu uske samne baithi thi, apne dono haath uske bandaged haath par rakhkar. Uske chehre par aansuon ki nami thi, par awaaz me wo hi shaant si garmi.
Shanu
Zaheer, ab aur kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi. Tu galat tha, haan. Lekin kal raat tu ne sabit kar diya ki tere andar ab bhi woh insaan zinda hai jo sach me ladne ke layak hai. Tu khud ko doshi mat samajh, bas ye samajh ki yeh ek naya chance hai.
Zaheer uski taraf dekhta hai, aankhon me pehli baar guilt se zyada sukoon.
Frame – Final Shot
Camera ek wide angle me dono parallel frames ko dikhata hai—ek taraf Arjun aur Ammu, doosri taraf Zaheer aur Shanu. Dono jodiyan alag–alag jagah, par dono ka dard aur healing ek jaisa.
Aur dono frames ke upar narration jaisa feel hota hai—
Jang ke baad sirf zakham nahi bachte… kabhi kabhi naye rishte bhi paida hote hain.
Scene – Zaheer’s House
Drawing room ka maahaul ek ajeeb sa tha. TV ke saamne sofa par Zaheer baitha tha, ek haath plaster me, dusre haath se garam chai ka cup pakde hue. TV par breaking news chal rahi thi—
“Kal raat ek college debate ke dauraan hua hungama… do bade naam – Lalit Kumar aur suspended inspector Mushtaq Khan—drug cartel ke connection me arrest… security officer ki taizi aur kuch students ki himmat ne bachayi kai zindagiyan…”
Screen par visuals aa rahe the—auditorium ka chaos, security officer ki gadiyan, aur Arjun aur Zaheer ki tasveerein—jisme dono khoon aur dhool me lapete ladte hue dikh rahe the. News anchor unhe “students turned saviors” keh kar describe kar raha tha.or tv par is academic session me election to be cancelled ki news aa rahi thi.
Zaheer chup–chaap TV dekh raha tha, cup ke andar ki chai dhire dhire thandi ho rahi thi. Uske chehre par koi fakhr nahi tha, sirf ek socha–samjha hua guilt aur confusion.
Kitchen Frame
Kitchen se bartan takrane ki halki aawaz aayi. Ammu kitchen counter ke paas khadi thi, ek glass me paani bharte hue. Uske kaan TV ke har lafz par lage hue the. Usne apne aansu dabaye, lekin aankhon ka halka sa chamak clear thi—wo Zaheer par gussa bhi thi aur uske liye proud bhi.
Back to Drawing Room
Azhar—un dono ka baba—sofa ke side khada tha. Uski aankhon me fakhr tha, ek proud father ki chamak, jo kuch kehna chahta tha par keh nahi pa raha tha. Usne bas ek gehri saans li aur Zaheer ki taraf dekha jaise keh raha ho—“Beta, tune galtiyan ki, lekin aaj tu ne apna naam roshan kar diya.”
Moment
Zaheer chai ka cup table par rakhta hai, dhire se uthta hai aur kitchen ki taraf chal padta hai. Uske pair thode bhari, shoulders thode jhuke hue—jaise har kadam guilt ka bojh utha raha ho.
Kitchen me aate hi uski nazar Ammu se takrati hai. Ammu ne bas ek pal ke liye apna glass side me rakha aur uski taraf dekha—ek aisi nazar jisme shikwa bhi tha, dard bhi tha, aur kahin na kahin pyaar bhi.
Zaheer ne apni aankhen jhuka li. Uske hoth hilte, jaise kuch kehna chahta ho, lekin awaaz nikalti hi nahi. Ammu bas khamoshi se usse dekh rahi thi. Dono ke beech ka sannata hi sab kuch keh raha tha—ek rishte ka bojh, ek bhai ki majboori, aur ek pyaar ka bandhan jo abhi tak bechain tha
Scene – Zaheer aur Ammu ka Emotional Breakdown
Kitchen me wahi khamoshi thi. Sirf fridge ka halkasa hum aur bartan ki chhup–chhup ki awaaz. Zaheer darwaze ke paas ruk gaya, uski saans tez chal rahi thi. Ek pal ke liye laga jaise wo wapas mudh jaayega… lekin uske pair khud-b-khud aage badh gaye.
Ammu ne uski taraf dekha. Dono ke beech abhi bhi kuch pal ka sannata tha. Fir Zaheer ne dheere se apna plaster wale haath ko side kiya aur poore bojh ke saath Ammu ke kandhe par apna sar rakh diya. Uske andar ka dard, guilt aur thakan sab ek saath bahar nikal aaya.
Zaheer (rote hue, awaaz bhari hui)
Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi Ammu… main tujhe protect karne aaya tha, lekin tujhe dukh hi diya. Main tujhe samajh hi nahi paya… apne gusse, apne ahankar me bas apna point prove karna chaha. Mujhe maaf kar de behna… mujhe maaf kar de.
Uske aansu Ammu ke dupatte ko bhigo rahe the. Zaheer ke shoulders hil rahe the—woh jo hamesha apni taqat aur jazbati gusse ke liye mashhoor tha, aaj bachche ki tarah ro raha tha.
Ammu ke hoth bhi kanp rahe the. Uski aankhen laal thi, aansu ruk nahi pa rahe the. Usne apna haath Zaheer ke sar par rakha aur dhire se usse apni taraf kheench kar gale laga liya.
Ammu (roti hui, awaaz dardi)
Bas… bas Zaheer… ab aur mat bol. Tu mera bhai hai, mera khoon hai. Galti sabse hoti hai, lekin jo apni galti ko maan le, wahi sabse bada hota hai. Main tujhe maaf karti hoon… jitni baar bhi tune mujhe dukh diya, main sab bhool jaati hoon.
Dono ek dusre ko gale lagaye hue khamoshi se rote rahe. Kitchen ke ek kone me rakha chhota sa diya, jo subah se jala hua tha, apni laal–peeli roshni se us pal ko aur bhi gehra bana raha tha.
Camera dheere dheere dono ke chehre par zoom karta hai—dono ki palkon par aansu, dono ki saanson me ek relief, jaise saalon purana bojh halkasa halka ho gaya ho.
Scene – Arjun aur Shanu ka Emotional Breakdown
Ghar ka drawing room bilkul khamosh tha. Curtain se roshni ki halki si line andar aa rahi thi, dhool ke zarre usme tair rahe the. Sofa par Arjun baitha tha—plaster me lipta hua haath, maatha bandage se bandha hua, aankhon me thakan aur guilt ki gehraai. Uski nazar zameen par jhuki hui thi jaise usme utar kar apna jawaab dhoond raha ho.
Shanu dheere se uske paas aayi. Usne dekha, Arjun apna dard chhupane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin aankhon ke kone geele the.
Shanu
Arjun… tu sabse strong hai. Lekin tujhe bhi rona aa sakta hai. Mujhe dhokha mat de apne aansuon se.
Arjun ne halki si muskaan di, jo turant aansuon me badal gayi. Usne sir neecha kiya aur bas ek pal me apni chhoti behen ke kandhe par sar rakh diya. Saalon ki majbooti tod kar wo bachpan ke Arjun ki tarah phoot phoot kar ro diya.
Arjun (rote hue)
Shanu… main tujhe aur ghar walon ko kitna tension diya… maine apni ego, apni zid, apna gussa sab ke aage rakh diya. Mujhe laga main sahi hoon, lekin jo kuch hua… students, Ammu, sab… main khud ko maaf nahi kar pa raha.
Shanu ke aansu bhi ruk nahi paaye. Usne Arjun ko gale lagate hue uski peeth thapthapai.
Shanu (rote hue)
Tu galti kar sakta hai Arjun, lekin tu bura insaan kabhi nahi ban sakta. Jo dil se pyaar karta hai, jo apne doston ke liye jaan tak daav pe laga deta hai, wo bura ho hi nahi sakta. Tu mera bhai hai… mera hero hai.
Arjun ne apni behen ko zor se gale lagaya. Dono ke aansu ek hi flow me mil gaye. Jaise dono ek doosre ka bojh halka kar rahe ho.
Background me Madhu aur Pratap darwaze se chup chap dekh rahe the, unke chehre par ghamand aur sukoon ka asar tha. Unhone kuch kaha nahi—sirf ek glance share kiya, jaise kehte ho hamara beta akela nahi hai… uske saath hamari beti hai, aur hamara pyaar bhi.
Camera dheere dheere fade hota hai—sirf Arjun aur Shanu ek dusre ko gale lagaye, aansuon me bhi ek tasalli.
Scene Update – Parallel Climax (Arjun & Zaheer)
Auditorium ek jung ka maidan ban gaya hai. security officer, gunde, students, sab ek doosre se takra rahe hain. Cheekh-pukaar, goliyon ki goonj, lohe ki rod aur kursi todne ki awaaz. Har taraf dhua aur khoon.
? Camera split-frame karta hai:
Ek taraf Arjun vs Mushtaq, dusri taraf Zaheer vs Lalit. Background me ek hi heartbeat ki dhadkan bajti hai, jo dono fights ke beat ke saath synchronize hoti hai.
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Arjun vs Mushtaq
Mushtaq apni bandook Arjun ke sir pe rakhta hai.
Mushtaq
Kya samajhta hai tu? Hero hai? Tere jaise anpadh gawar mere jaise logon ke samne mitti bhi nahi! Tera aaj antim din hai saale!
Arjun apne khoon se bheege hoth se ek thandi si smile deta hai. Uski aankhen full fire.
Arjun
Mitti main nahi hu… tu banne wala hai.
Arjun ek dum se apna haath uthata hai, Mushtaq ki gun ko side me push karta hai. Dhadaam! goli chhoot jaati hai aur auditorium ke upar wale speaker me ghusti hai. Arjun fir ek full power mukka Mushtaq ke chehre par martaa hai.
Mushtaq girta hai lekin turant uthta hai aur apna hunting knife nikalta hai.
Mushtaq
Aaj tera khoon mere hatho se milega zameen ko!
Dono ek doosre par jaanwar ki tarah toot padte hain. Knife Arjun ke cheek ko scratch karta hai, khoon behne lagta hai. Lekin Arjun knife ko pakad kar usse ulta ghumata hai aur Mushtaq ke haath pe cut kar deta hai.
Mushtaq cheekhta hai, lekin Arjun uske pet me knee martaa hai, aur fir uske gale ko pakad kar stage ke railing pe dhadaam se patakta hai.
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Zaheer vs Lalit
Dusre side, Lalit apne brass knuckle ke saath Zaheer ke jaw pe mukka marne hi wala hota hai. Zaheer uska haath rok leta hai. Dono ka chehra ek inch door, aankhen laal, saans garam.
Zaheer
Tere drugs ne meri gali ka ek ek baccha barbaad kar diya hai. Aaj tera hisaab khatam!
Lalit cheekh kar mukka chodta hai, lekin Zaheer usse block karke uske pet me lagatar 3 punches ghusa deta hai. Fir ek body slam karke Lalit ko podium ke peeche patak deta hai.
Lalit ke bodyguards daudte hain, lekin Zaheer unhe apne jism se dhakel deta hai. Uska khoon se bheega chehra, haath me ek todhi hui chain — woh chain Lalit ke gale me lapet deta hai aur kheenchta hai.
Lalit ghutne lagta hai, aankhen bahar nikalti hain.
Zaheer
Yeh awaaz… yeh cheekh… yeh tere drug se mare hue students ki roohon ka badla hai!
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Parallel Crescendo
? Camera ekdum synchronized cut karta hai:
Arjun Mushtaq ko uthakar ek flying kick se dhadaam! se stage ke center me giraata hai.
Zaheer chain kheench kar Lalit ko podium ke saamne ghutno pe laata hai.
Background me ek hi beat — dhad dhad dhad!
Chief Guest, media, aur poora auditorium shock me hai. Ammu aur Shanu dono ki aankhen aansuon se bhar jaati hain, par dil me ek hi jazba: yeh dono ab akela nahi, ek saath lad rahe hain.
Goliyon aur cheekh-pukaar ke beech, auditorium ke bahar ek hi waqt me siren ki gehri goonj ghoomti hai. Pee-pon! Pee-pon!
Agle hi pal auditorium ke darwaze tod kar security officer ki tukdiyan andar ghus jaati hain. Shield, rifle aur baton lekar woh ek ek row cover karte hain.
Ek loudspeaker par awaaz goonjti hai
security officer
Sab students aur guests safe exit ki taraf daudho! Media aur faculty turant bahar nikle!
Camera me dikhaya jata hai:
Students ek dusre ka haath pakad kar stage ke peeche ke emergency gate se nikal rahe hain.
Guest aur reporters ko security officer cordon me le kar bahar le jaati hai.
Auditorium ke andar ab sirf gunde, bodyguards aur fighting chaos bacha hai.
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security officer Action Montage
security officer ke shields gundo se takraate hain, danday baraste hain.
Ek ek karke 50–60 gunde ko zameen par patak kar cuffs pehna dete hain.
Lalit ke personal bodyguards bhi ek line me khade kar ke arrest hote hain.
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Stage Pe
Arjun aur Zaheer abhi bhi apne dushmano ke saath jaan ki ladai kar rahe hote hain. Arjun Mushtaq ke gale ko daba raha hota hai aur Zaheer Lalit ki chain kheench raha hota hai.
Tabhi inspector — khoon me lathpath, chehra kuta hua, uniform phati hui — apna pura jism ghaseetta hua stage par aata hai.
Woh cheekhta hai
Inspector
Bas! Ab chhod do inhe! Yeh kaam ab kanoon ka hai… tum dono yahan ruko!
security officer turant stage par daudti hai. 4–5 constable Mushtaq ko ghaseet kar neeche le jaate hain, uske haath bandhe jaate hain. Dusre 3–4 constable Lalit ke gale se chain utar kar usse zameen par dhakel dete hain aur cuffs laga dete hain.
Mushtaq cheekhta hai
Main wapas aaunga! Tum sabko mitti me mila dunga!
Aur Lalit garajta hai
Mere baap ki kursi pe main baithunga! Yeh khel abhi khatam nahi hua!
Lekin security officer unki cheekhon ko siren aur cuffs ki khanak me daba deti hai.
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Inspector’s Glance
Inspector Arjun aur Zaheer ki taraf dekhta hai — dono khoon se bheege, thake hue, lekin abhi bhi apne dushman ko pakad ke rakhe hue.
Inspector kuch nahi bolta. Sirf ek tez, gehra glance deta hai. Aankhen bolti hain:
“Tumne galtiyan ki… lekin aaj jo kiya, usse sab bacha.”
Phir woh turant wapas gundo ki taraf mudh jaata hai aur arrest supervise karne lagta hai.
Camera Arjun aur Zaheer par zoom karta hai. Dono ek dusre ki taraf dekhte hain — aankhon me guilt bhi hai, sukoon bhi, aur ek naya faisla bhi.
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security officer Mushtaq aur Lalit ko pakad kar le jaati hai. Auditorium ab khaali ho raha hai, sirf thodi kursiyan tuti hain, khoon ke nishaan hain aur hawa me barood ki boo.
Stage par sirf tootey hue spotlight, kursiyon ke tukde aur khoon ke nishaan bache hain. security officer Mushtaq aur Lalit ko le ja chuki hai. Auditorium khali ho raha hai, sirf kuch cops evidence collect kar rahe hain.
Arjun aur Zaheer — dono zameen par gir kar saans phoolte hue, khoon aur pasine me bheege, aankhon me thakaan aur andherapan sa. Unke dil ki dhadkan abhi bhi us goliyon ki goonj ke sath race kar rahi hai.
Tabhi do parchaayi daud kar unke paas aati hain — Shanu aur Ammu.
Shanu ghutno ke bal girti hai Zaheer ke paas. Uska chehra aansuon se bhig chuka hai, haath kaanpte hue Zaheer ke zakhmon ko touch karte hain.
Shanu
Zaheer… tu thik hai na? Uth… please kuch bol…
Zaheer apni aankhen kholta hai, thoda halki si muskaan lane ki koshish karta hai, lekin dard use khinch leta hai. Uski aankhen Shanu ke aansuon par tik jaati hain,
Dusri taraf Ammu Arjun ke paas jhukti hai, uske kapde khoon se lal ho gaye hain. Ammu ke haath uske chehre ko sambhalte hain.
Ammu
Arjun… please aankhen khol… main yaha hoon… main kahi nahi jaa rahi.
Arjun halki si aankh uthakar Ammu ko dekhta hai. Uske hothon se ek dard bhari saans nikalti hai. Uski ungli Ammu ki kalai ko halka sa pakadti hai, jaise uski tasalli lena chahta ho.
Stage par dono pairs ek dusre ke saath lipte hue hain, magar dono mardon ke beech ek bechain khamoshi bachi hai.
Zaheer ek pal ke liye Arjun ki taraf dekhta hai. Arjun bhi usi pal nazar ghoomata hai Zaheer ki taraf. Aankhon me ek hi sawal likha hai —
“Humne ek dusre ko dushman samjha… lekin aaj saath ladhte hue kitni zindagiyan bacha li.”
Lekin dono ke hoth khamosh hain. Koi “dost” shabd zubaan par nahi aata. Sirf hesitation, sirf wo bharosa jo ban kar bhi abhi dhoond raha hai jagah.
Shanu aur Ammu ek dusre ko dekhti hain, samajh jaati hain ki in dono ke dil abhi bhi uljhe hue hain… par zakhmon aur dard ke iss waqt unse kuch kehna bekaar hai.
Camera stage se dheere dheere zoom out karta hai…
Ek taraf khoon me bhiga Arjun Ammu ki god me.
Dusri taraf thaka hua Zaheer Shanu ke kandhe par.
Aur dono ke beech ek khaali jagah, jo abhi bharni baaki hai.
Auditorium ab khaali hai. Sirf kuch tootey hue posters, jali hui taro ki smell aur security officer ki fading siren ki goonj bachi hai. Stage par ek soft yellow spotlight abhi bhi chal rahi hai, jaise woh dono jo ladhai ke beech se guzre, unke liye ek witness ho.
Arjun aur Zaheer ko stretcher par le jaane ke bajaye dono apne pairon pe baith gaye hain, zakhm gehre hain par dono ka zidd aur ego unse bhi gehra.
Ammu Arjun ke paas baithi hai, uske haath abhi bhi uska chehra pakde hue, uske aansu Arjun ke galle par gir rahe hain. Arjun hamesha ki tarah tough rehne ki koshish karta hai, par is dafa uski aankhon me vulnerability chamak rahi hai.
Arjun (halki saans ke sath)
Mujhe laga… main sab kuch control kar raha hoon… lekin main khud ko hi kho raha tha.
Ammu uske hoth chhup kar sirf uska haath zor se pakad leti hai.
Dusri taraf Zaheer Shanu ko dekh raha hai. Uska chehra dard se bhar gaya hai, par Shanu ke aansuon ko dekhkar uske dil me kuch todta hai.
Zaheer (aawaz bhari hui)
Main tujhe kabhi khud se alag soch hi nahi sakta tha Shanu… aur phir bhi maine tujhe iss khel me dhakel diya.
Shanu uske kandhe par sar rakh kar kehti hai
Bas chup ho ja Zaheer. Jo bhi hua… ab hum dono saath hain.
Ek pal ke liye pura stage ek tasveer ban jaata hai—
Arjun aur Ammu ek dusre ke paas, Arjun ke aankhon me wo softness jo kabhi usne kisi ko nahi dikhayi.
Zaheer aur Shanu ek dusre me lipte hue, jaise har tufaan ab sirf un dono ka hai.
Aur phir… Arjun aur Zaheer ki nazrein milti hain.
Pehle awkward silence. Dono ke chehre par hesitation, guilt, aur ek saath ek anjaana relief.
Phir Arjun thoda sa haan bhar kar sir jhukaata hai—jaise keh raha ho, main galat tha.
Zaheer ki aankhen nam ho jaati hain. Wo sirf ek halki si muskaan deta hai, jaise jawab ho, aur main bhi.
Ammu aur Shanu ek dusre ki taraf dekhti hain. Dono ki aankhon me ek chhupi si khushi hai—ke shayad ab zindagi ek naye mod par jaa rahi hai.
Camera dheere dheere stage se zoom out karta hai.
Ek naya chapter shuru hone wala hai.
Scene Update – Next Day After the Chaos
Poora campus ek ajeeb sannate me dooba tha. Jahan kal tak posters, loudspeakers, slogans aur rally ki awaazein gunj rahi thi, wahan aaj hawa bhi chup thi. Corridors khali, notice boards adhe–phate postero se latak rahe the, aur canteen ki kursiyan ulati–padi thi jaise kisi ne jaldi me sab chhod diya ho.
Frame 1 – Arjun & Ammu
Library ke saamne ki bench par Arjun baitha tha. Uske dono haathon par plaster, kandhe par sling, chehre pe gehri bandage, aur aankhon ke paas chot ke nishan. Jaise uski poori body kisi war se laut kar patch–up ki gayi ho.
Arjun neeche dekh raha tha, ungliyon ki bandage ko ungliyon se hi touch karta hua. Uski aankhon me guilt ka bojh tha—jaise wo khud ko hi saza de raha ho.
Arjun (halki si aawaz me)
Mujhe lagta hai sab meri wajah se hua, Ammu… agar main pehle hi peeche hat jata to shayad itni jaan–maal ka khatra nahi hota.
Ammu uske paas baithi thi. Usne uska bandaged haath apne dono haathon se pakad kar apni god me rakha. Uski aankhon me aansu the lekin awaaz me mazbooti.
Ammu
Arjun… agar tu nahi hota na, to na main yaha baithi hoti, na ye college ke students zinda hote. Tu khud ko dosh mat de. Tu sirf ladha nahi, tu ne hum sabko bachaaya hai.
Arjun uski taraf dekhta hai—us guilt ke beech ek chhoti si rahat ki chamak.
Frame 2 – Zaheer & Shanu
Camera dheere se canteen ki taraf shift hota hai. Wahi canteen jahan kal tak chai ke order aur students ki awaaz gunjti thi, aaj kursiyan khali thi, counter par bartan bikhar gaye the.
Corner wali table par Zaheer baitha tha, ek haath plaster me, doosre haath ki ungliyon me bandage, maatha aur gaalon par gehre zakham ke nishan. Uski aankhen khidki se bahar khaali campus ko tak rahi thi, aur uske chehre par ek dard, ek guilt chipka hua tha.
Zaheer (andar hi andar, thodi uchi aawaz me)
Main kya karne chala gaya tha, Shanu… sab ke sapne, sabki zindagi barbad karne… apni nafrat ke chakkar me andha ho gaya.
Shanu uske samne baithi thi, apne dono haath uske bandaged haath par rakhkar. Uske chehre par aansuon ki nami thi, par awaaz me wo hi shaant si garmi.
Shanu
Zaheer, ab aur kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi. Tu galat tha, haan. Lekin kal raat tu ne sabit kar diya ki tere andar ab bhi woh insaan zinda hai jo sach me ladne ke layak hai. Tu khud ko doshi mat samajh, bas ye samajh ki yeh ek naya chance hai.
Zaheer uski taraf dekhta hai, aankhon me pehli baar guilt se zyada sukoon.
Frame – Final Shot
Camera ek wide angle me dono parallel frames ko dikhata hai—ek taraf Arjun aur Ammu, doosri taraf Zaheer aur Shanu. Dono jodiyan alag–alag jagah, par dono ka dard aur healing ek jaisa.
Aur dono frames ke upar narration jaisa feel hota hai—
Jang ke baad sirf zakham nahi bachte… kabhi kabhi naye rishte bhi paida hote hain.
Scene – Zaheer’s House
Drawing room ka maahaul ek ajeeb sa tha. TV ke saamne sofa par Zaheer baitha tha, ek haath plaster me, dusre haath se garam chai ka cup pakde hue. TV par breaking news chal rahi thi—
“Kal raat ek college debate ke dauraan hua hungama… do bade naam – Lalit Kumar aur suspended inspector Mushtaq Khan—drug cartel ke connection me arrest… security officer ki taizi aur kuch students ki himmat ne bachayi kai zindagiyan…”
Screen par visuals aa rahe the—auditorium ka chaos, security officer ki gadiyan, aur Arjun aur Zaheer ki tasveerein—jisme dono khoon aur dhool me lapete ladte hue dikh rahe the. News anchor unhe “students turned saviors” keh kar describe kar raha tha.or tv par is academic session me election to be cancelled ki news aa rahi thi.
Zaheer chup–chaap TV dekh raha tha, cup ke andar ki chai dhire dhire thandi ho rahi thi. Uske chehre par koi fakhr nahi tha, sirf ek socha–samjha hua guilt aur confusion.
Kitchen Frame
Kitchen se bartan takrane ki halki aawaz aayi. Ammu kitchen counter ke paas khadi thi, ek glass me paani bharte hue. Uske kaan TV ke har lafz par lage hue the. Usne apne aansu dabaye, lekin aankhon ka halka sa chamak clear thi—wo Zaheer par gussa bhi thi aur uske liye proud bhi.
Back to Drawing Room
Azhar—un dono ka baba—sofa ke side khada tha. Uski aankhon me fakhr tha, ek proud father ki chamak, jo kuch kehna chahta tha par keh nahi pa raha tha. Usne bas ek gehri saans li aur Zaheer ki taraf dekha jaise keh raha ho—“Beta, tune galtiyan ki, lekin aaj tu ne apna naam roshan kar diya.”
Moment
Zaheer chai ka cup table par rakhta hai, dhire se uthta hai aur kitchen ki taraf chal padta hai. Uske pair thode bhari, shoulders thode jhuke hue—jaise har kadam guilt ka bojh utha raha ho.
Kitchen me aate hi uski nazar Ammu se takrati hai. Ammu ne bas ek pal ke liye apna glass side me rakha aur uski taraf dekha—ek aisi nazar jisme shikwa bhi tha, dard bhi tha, aur kahin na kahin pyaar bhi.
Zaheer ne apni aankhen jhuka li. Uske hoth hilte, jaise kuch kehna chahta ho, lekin awaaz nikalti hi nahi. Ammu bas khamoshi se usse dekh rahi thi. Dono ke beech ka sannata hi sab kuch keh raha tha—ek rishte ka bojh, ek bhai ki majboori, aur ek pyaar ka bandhan jo abhi tak bechain tha
Scene – Zaheer aur Ammu ka Emotional Breakdown
Kitchen me wahi khamoshi thi. Sirf fridge ka halkasa hum aur bartan ki chhup–chhup ki awaaz. Zaheer darwaze ke paas ruk gaya, uski saans tez chal rahi thi. Ek pal ke liye laga jaise wo wapas mudh jaayega… lekin uske pair khud-b-khud aage badh gaye.
Ammu ne uski taraf dekha. Dono ke beech abhi bhi kuch pal ka sannata tha. Fir Zaheer ne dheere se apna plaster wale haath ko side kiya aur poore bojh ke saath Ammu ke kandhe par apna sar rakh diya. Uske andar ka dard, guilt aur thakan sab ek saath bahar nikal aaya.
Zaheer (rote hue, awaaz bhari hui)
Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi Ammu… main tujhe protect karne aaya tha, lekin tujhe dukh hi diya. Main tujhe samajh hi nahi paya… apne gusse, apne ahankar me bas apna point prove karna chaha. Mujhe maaf kar de behna… mujhe maaf kar de.
Uske aansu Ammu ke dupatte ko bhigo rahe the. Zaheer ke shoulders hil rahe the—woh jo hamesha apni taqat aur jazbati gusse ke liye mashhoor tha, aaj bachche ki tarah ro raha tha.
Ammu ke hoth bhi kanp rahe the. Uski aankhen laal thi, aansu ruk nahi pa rahe the. Usne apna haath Zaheer ke sar par rakha aur dhire se usse apni taraf kheench kar gale laga liya.
Ammu (roti hui, awaaz dardi)
Bas… bas Zaheer… ab aur mat bol. Tu mera bhai hai, mera khoon hai. Galti sabse hoti hai, lekin jo apni galti ko maan le, wahi sabse bada hota hai. Main tujhe maaf karti hoon… jitni baar bhi tune mujhe dukh diya, main sab bhool jaati hoon.
Dono ek dusre ko gale lagaye hue khamoshi se rote rahe. Kitchen ke ek kone me rakha chhota sa diya, jo subah se jala hua tha, apni laal–peeli roshni se us pal ko aur bhi gehra bana raha tha.
Camera dheere dheere dono ke chehre par zoom karta hai—dono ki palkon par aansu, dono ki saanson me ek relief, jaise saalon purana bojh halkasa halka ho gaya ho.
Scene – Arjun aur Shanu ka Emotional Breakdown
Ghar ka drawing room bilkul khamosh tha. Curtain se roshni ki halki si line andar aa rahi thi, dhool ke zarre usme tair rahe the. Sofa par Arjun baitha tha—plaster me lipta hua haath, maatha bandage se bandha hua, aankhon me thakan aur guilt ki gehraai. Uski nazar zameen par jhuki hui thi jaise usme utar kar apna jawaab dhoond raha ho.
Shanu dheere se uske paas aayi. Usne dekha, Arjun apna dard chhupane ki koshish kar raha tha lekin aankhon ke kone geele the.
Shanu
Arjun… tu sabse strong hai. Lekin tujhe bhi rona aa sakta hai. Mujhe dhokha mat de apne aansuon se.
Arjun ne halki si muskaan di, jo turant aansuon me badal gayi. Usne sir neecha kiya aur bas ek pal me apni chhoti behen ke kandhe par sar rakh diya. Saalon ki majbooti tod kar wo bachpan ke Arjun ki tarah phoot phoot kar ro diya.
Arjun (rote hue)
Shanu… main tujhe aur ghar walon ko kitna tension diya… maine apni ego, apni zid, apna gussa sab ke aage rakh diya. Mujhe laga main sahi hoon, lekin jo kuch hua… students, Ammu, sab… main khud ko maaf nahi kar pa raha.
Shanu ke aansu bhi ruk nahi paaye. Usne Arjun ko gale lagate hue uski peeth thapthapai.
Shanu (rote hue)
Tu galti kar sakta hai Arjun, lekin tu bura insaan kabhi nahi ban sakta. Jo dil se pyaar karta hai, jo apne doston ke liye jaan tak daav pe laga deta hai, wo bura ho hi nahi sakta. Tu mera bhai hai… mera hero hai.
Arjun ne apni behen ko zor se gale lagaya. Dono ke aansu ek hi flow me mil gaye. Jaise dono ek doosre ka bojh halka kar rahe ho.
Background me Madhu aur Pratap darwaze se chup chap dekh rahe the, unke chehre par ghamand aur sukoon ka asar tha. Unhone kuch kaha nahi—sirf ek glance share kiya, jaise kehte ho hamara beta akela nahi hai… uske saath hamari beti hai, aur hamara pyaar bhi.
Camera dheere dheere fade hota hai—sirf Arjun aur Shanu ek dusre ko gale lagaye, aansuon me bhi ek tasalli.
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