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Maa Ki Mamta (ek suraksha kavach)

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Hospital ke thick samne ek gaadi aa kar ruki aur us main se ek aadmi hadbara kar utara aur doctor-2 chillate huye andar bhagta hua aata hai es ke chehre par darr aur chinta saaf pata chal raha tha.tabhi ek Doctor apne room se aate hua dekhta hai .wo aadmi daur kar us ke paas jata hai aur doctor ke samne haath jod kar khada ho jata hai. Doctor sahab plz wo se bacha lijiye use bahut takleef ho rahi hai aap jaldi kuch kijiye nahi to wo mar jaayegi plz doctor bacha lijiye aur ye bolte huye wo zameen par ghutno ke bal baith jata hai

Doctor:-Aare Mr. Ravi aap ye kya kar rahe hai jaldi uthiye aur aap itna pareshan kyu hai aur aap kise bachane ke liye bol rahe hai kya hua kuch to bataaye.

Us aadmi ne apna sar upar utha kar doctor ke chehre ke taraf dekhta hai aur apne kaapte huwe awaj mein doctor meri biwi wahan car mein plz.

Itna sunte hi doctor ne jaldi se do wardboy ko bulaya aur bhag kar gaadi ka gate kholta hai aur us mein ek aurat khoon se latpat behosh padi thi doctor ne jaldi se wardboy ko inhe andar laane ke liye bolta hai aur khud unki help karta hai us aurat ko andar laane mein aur aate hi wahan khadi nurse ko operation ki taiyaari karne ke liye bolta hai aur dono wardboy ko unhe andar operation theatre main le jane ke liye bol kar Ravi ke paas aakar unhe zameen se utha kar wahan padi chair par baitha kar unhe hosla dete huye,

Doctor:- Mr.Ravi aap sab se pehle shant ho jaye hum apni taraf se puri koshish karenge inhe kuch na ho.
Ravi:- dotor mere biwi ko kuch hoga to nahi na plz aap wo se bacha lijiye.

Doctor:- aap chinta mat kijiye hum apni taraf se har sambhav paryas karenge ki un ko kuch na ho, par ye sab hua kaise maine to aap ko pehle hi baat diya tha ki usha ji ka bahut acche se dekhbhal karen unhe jyada kaam na karne de Kyon ki inka condition dusro se alag tha.

Ravi:- doctor sahab pehle sab thick chal raha tha lekin pata nahi kaise achanak sidhi se usha ka pair fisal gaya aur wo gir gayi mujhe to aab tak kuch samajh mein hi nahi aa raha hai ki yeh sab kaise ho gaya.

Doctor:- aap chinta mat kijiye hum puri koshish karenge usha ji ko bachane ka.
Tabhi piche se ek nurse aa kar doctor ko bolti hai.
Nurse:- Sir operation ke liye sab taiyaar hai sab aap ka hi intazaar kar rahe hai jaldi chaliye.

Doctor:- Mr.Ravi aap bagwan se prarthana kijiye ki aap ki wife ka operation successful ho aur hum un ko bacha sake,aur wahan khade nurse ko ishare se chalne ke liye bolte hai.

Phir pure 5 ghante operation chalta raha , Ravi wahin bahar khade apne wife ki salamati ki dua mang rahe the ki tabhi operation theatre ka gate khula aur sabhi nurse aur doctor bahar aaye.

Ravi:-doctor aab meri biwi ki tabiyaat kaisi hai sab kuch thick hai naa,kuch to boliye na dekhiye aap ki chuppi mujhe bahut dara rahe hai plz kuch to boliye.

Doctor:-Mr.Ravi pehle aap shant ho jaye aur yahan aa kar baith jaye mai jo aap ko bolne ja raha hoon us ke liye aap shant hona jaruri hai,meri baat dhyan se aaram se suniye aap ki wife ka case bahut hi complicated aur different tha pure 5 ghante lage hame unki operation mein lekin aap ki wife ki internal bleeding kafi jyada ho jane ke karan unki tabiyaat kafi karab hai hamne operation to kar diya hai par aab bhi ye 24 ghante bahut hi critical hai unke zindagi ke liye agar woh 24 ghante par ho jaye to wo khatare se bahar ho sakti hai nahi to kuch bhi ho sakta hai. I am sorry Mr. Ravi es ke aage mere haath mein kuch bhi nahi,aab sab kuch waqt aur bhagwan pe hi nirbhar hai.

Ravi:- Nahi doctor mujhe aap se koi shikayat nahi hai apne to mujhe nayi umeed di hai es ki liye aap ka bahut bahut shukriya aab main bhagwan se apni usha ki zindagi ki bhik manguga aur unhe meri murad puri karni hi hogi.par doctor aap ne aisa kyu kaha ki meri biwi ka case different hai.

Doctor:- Ek lambi saans lete huye Mr.Ravi maine apni puri carrier mein aisa case kabhi dekha hi nahi, itni chhote lagne ke baad bhi usha ji ke sarir ka har ang sahi salamat kaam kar raha tha unka dil bhi aam insaano ki dil ki normal speed se kuch alag lag raha tha. Jaise wo dil kisi insaan ka ho hi nahi bahut hi strong energy ka ehsaas mujhe us waqt ho raha tha aisa lag raha tha jaise mai kisi engery ke circle ke andar khada hoon mujhe koi anjaani shakti ka anubhav har waqt ho raha tha.pata nahi ye mera waham tha yah kuch aur bhawan hi jaane.

Abhi dono ki baatein chal hi rahi thi ek nurse daur kar kamre se bahar aati hai aur dono ke paas ja kar khadi ho jati hai.

Nurse:-Doctor patient ko hosh aa gaya hai aur unki halat bahut kharab hai. wo apne pati se baat karne ki zid kar rahi hai aur wo unhe andar bula rahi hai.maine unhai samjhane ki bahut koshish ki magar wo meri baat sun hi nahi rahi hai.

Doctor:-Thick hai tum chalo hum aa rahe hai, chaliye Mr. Ravi aab hame andar chalna hoga us se pehle mujhe unka check up bhi karna hoga.
Ravi:-Doctor usha ko kuch hoga to nahi na plz bataiye. Mujhe bahut bechaini ho rahi hai.

Doctor:- dekhiye mai abhi kuch bhi nahi keh sakta pehle mai unka check up karlun us ke baad hi kuch bata paunga.
Phir dono usi kamre main chale jaate hai jahan usha yani Ravi ki wife ko rakha gaya tha wahan ja kar doctor ne check up karne ke baad Ravi ka bahar le aaye.

Doctor:- dekhiye Ravi aap ki wife ki bleeding rukne ka naam hi nahi le raha hai unka khoon jarurat se jyada nikal chuka hai aab hamare haath mein kuch bhi nahi hum se jitna ho sakta tha hum ne sab koshish kar liya aab aap hame maaf kijiye ga hum unhai nahi bacha sakte, aab unke paas kafi kam samay bacha hai accha hoga aap in samay mein unke paas hi rahiye.

Ye sunte hi Ravi apne ghutno ke bal zameen par baith gaye aur apne aap ko kosne lage ki sab meri wajah se hua hai agar main us samay us ke paas hota to mai us se bacha sakta.phir doctor ne unhe uthate huye bola ki ye samay in baato ka nahi hai aap abhi unke paas jaye unhe aap ki bahut jarurat hai.itna bolte huye doctor unhe utha kar kamre ke andar le gaye jahan unki wife so rahi thi jis se dekh kar Ravi ke aankho mein aansu aa gaye par unhone us se chupa liye aur apne biwi ke paas ja kar baith gaye. Aur pyar se apna haath us ke sar pe pherne laga jisse uski aankh khul gayi.

Usha:-aaji aap itne pareshan kyu hai kuch bhi to nahi hua mujhe dekhiye mai thick hoon.

Ravi:-haan tum kitni thick ho mujhe sab dikh raha hai thick se bol bhi nahi pa rahi ho aur keh rahi ho mai thick hoon aur aap pareshan mat hoye, mai hota hi koun hoon jo tum meri baat manogi kitni baar tum se kaha hai ki sidhi pe thick se uthra karo par tum meri koi baat maan tab na.
Usha:- Maaf kar dijiye mujhe bahut badi galti ho gayi jo maine aap ki baat nahi maani.

Ravi:-Chalo thick hai tumhe tumhari galti ka ehsaas to hua mere liye itna hi kaffi hai.aab mai tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga kabhi bhi nahi bas tum ek baar thick ho jawo.
Tabhi Usha ne apna sar upar utha kar Ravi ke chehre ki taraf dekha Ravi ne uskechehre par ek muskan thi jis ka matlab Ravi samajh nahi paya.

Usha:- Accha ji humara beta kahan hai mujhe us se milna hai aur kuch baat bhi karni hai aap us se andar bulaiye na.

Ravi:- Maine use abhi tak kuch bataya hi nahi hai tumhare bare mein , mai nahi chahta tha ki wo tumhe es halat mai dekhe, agar tum chahti ho to mai use abhi yahan bula leta hoon.aur itna keh kar apne bete ko phone kar ke hospital bula lete hai.

Ansh:- papa yeh sab kya hua, aur maa ko itni chote kaise lagi aur aap ne mujhe bataya kyu nahi maa ke baare mein.

Usha:-Shant ho ja beta maine hi mana kiya tha tumhare papa ko ki tum ko mere accident ke bare mein kuch na bataye. lekin halaat hi aise ho gaye ki tumhe yahan bulana hi pada. Aab mere paas aab jyada samay nahi baccha hai beta es liye maine tumko yahan bulaya hai
Itna sunte hi Ravi, Ansh aur doctor teeno chok gaye aur na chahte huye bhi Ravi aur Ansh ke aankho mein aansu ka sailaab uttar gaya jo ki rukne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha,jis se usha ne dekh liye aur apne haath badhkar dono ke aansu pochne lagi.

Usha:-(Doctor aur Ravi ki taraf dekhte hue) Aap dono ko kya laga ki mujhe kuch bhi malum nahi ki mere paas aab jyada samay nahi bacha hai mai ye pehle se hi janti thi mera bachna bahut hi muskil hai par mujhe khushi es baat ki hai ki mare aakhri samay mein mere pati aur mera baccha dono mere paas hai. mujhe aap dono se bahut jaruri baat karni hai akele mein apne baare mai.
Wahan khade doctor ne nurse ko apne saath kamre ke bahar le kar chale gaye aur jaate samay Ravi se keh kar chale gaye agar unhe unki jarurat pade to unhe bula le. sabhi ke jaate hi usha mein Ansh ko kamre ka darwaza band karne ke liye kaha phir Ansh ne darwaza band kar ke wapas aa kar apne maa ke paas baith gaya, phir usha ne Ravi aur Ansh jo bataya us se sun kar unke hosh hi udd gaye.unhe apne kaano par vishwas hi nahi ho raha tha ki aisa bhi kuch ho sakta hai wo bhi unke saath lekin Ravi ko apne biwi ki har baat mein sachai nazar aa rahi thi.

Ansh:-Aap ye kya keh rahi hai maa mai kuch samjh nahi pa raha hoon.

Usha:-Haan beta main jo keh rahi hoon wo bilkul sahi hai. Beta tum koi mamooli ladke nahi ho tumhara janam ek kaas maksad ko pura karne ke liya hua hai,Beta maine tumhe aab tak ye sachai itne saalo tak es liye nahi batayi kyu ki tum us samay es ke liye taiyaar nahi the.

Ansh:-Koun sa sach maa plz saaf-2 bataiye.
Usha:-Ye baat aaj se 1500 saal purani hai es duniya se bhi alag ek dusri duniya hai jahan ek raja ka raj chalta tha wo raja bahut hi nek dil aur insaaf parast insaan tha wahan ke sabhi log bahut hi khush rahte the us raja ki eklouti beti thi jo bahut sunder thi Aur wahan sabhi ke paas koi na koi shakti howa karti thi lekin wahan koi bhi apni shakti ka galat istemal nahi karta tha agar koi karta to us se us ki saari shakti chin lijaati, shif wahan ke raja ke paas hi ek se jyada shakti hoti thi ye shakti unhe janam se hi prapt hoti thi. Sab kuch accha chal rah tha lekin ek din ek aisa toofan aaya jis ne wahan ki saari khusiyan ko tabha kar diya aur wo toofan ka naam tha vikral wo aur koi nahi balki usi raja ka bhai tha jo satta ke lalach mein us ne apne bhai ko dhokhe se jaan se mar diya aur wahan ke praja ko gulam bana liya. Vikral ki niyat pehle se hi raja ki beti par thi aur wo use paane ke liye kuch bhi karne ke liya taiyaar tha.

Par honi ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha raja ki beti ko uski maa aur wahan ke dharam guru ne mil kar us duniya se bhagane ka faisal kar liya par ye baat vikral ko pata chal gayi aur us ne dharam guru ko jaan se mar diya. lekin dharam guru ne marte-2 vikral ko ye shaap diya ki us ka kaal aur koi nahi balki raja ki beti ka santan hi hoga.ye sunte hi vikral aur bhi darr gaya aur rani ko apna gulam bana liya aur wo us par bahut atyachar karne laga ye janne ke liya ki un dono ne use kahan bheja hai par use kuch pata nahi chal saaka es liye vikral ne rani par din ba din aur jyada atyachar karna suru kar diya.

Ansh:-Lekin maa ye kahani aap mujhe abhi kyu suna rahI hai mera es se kya lena dena. aab mai koi chota baccha to nahi jo aab es tarah ki kahani sunu mai aab bada ho gaya hoon.
Usha:-yeh koi kahani nahi beta balki ek sachai hai kya tum ye janna nahi chahoge ki wo raja ki beti koun hai.Ansh:-nahi maa mujhe nahi janna,es samay mujhe sirf aap se baate karni hai.

Usha:-beta ek kaam karoge tum thodi der ke liya apni aankhe band karoge. Lekin koi sawaal nahi.
Itna sunne ke baad ansh ne apni aankhe band karli aur usha ne apne dono haath utha kar ansh ke haatho mein rakha phir thodi der baad ansh ko aankh khol ne ko bola.

Usha:-chalo thick hai tumhe nahi jaana to na sahi par beta ek glass pani to de dena.wahin saamne rakhi hai.

Ansh:- ji maa abhi laya aur ye bolte kar wahan rakhe pani ka glass utha kar Usha ko deta hai,aur wapas apne jagah par jaane lagta hai ki tabhi ek jordar awaj kamre mein gonj thi hai, Ansh piche mud kar dekhta hai to paata hai ki jo pani ka glass usne apne maa ko diya tha wo neeche gira padra tha.

Usha :- Sorry Beta haath se glass gir gaya, beta jara es se saaf kar dena.

Ansh:-Ji maa aap chinta mat kijiye mai abhi saaf kar deta hoon aur ye bolte hi wo glass ko uthane ke liye apna haath neeche karta hai ki tabhi zameen par pade sara paani kisi ball ki tarah uper uth jaata hai aur Ansh ke haath ke ishare par idhar udhar ghumne lagta hai Ansh ye dekh kar darr jata hai aur apne maa se puch ne lagta hai ki ye sab kya tha aur kaise hua tab ja kar Usha ne Ansh ko uski saari sachi baat di jise sun kar Ansh ko darr aur gussa dono aane laga. Darr apne sachai jaan kar aur gussa vikral par.

Ansh:-par maa mere paas itni sakhtiyan hone ke baad bhi mujhe kabhi pata kyu nahi chala.
Usha:-wo es liye beta kyu ki meri sakhtiyon ne tumhari sakhtiyon ko rok kar rakh tha itne din tak. Par jab main ne apni sakhtiyon ko tumhare andar se bhar nikal liya, tab tumhari saari sakhtiyan kaam karne lagi

Usha:-beta yahi tumhari sachai hai aab tum hi unki madad kar sakte ho.

Ansh:-lekin maa mai aap ko chod kar kaise ja sakta hoon.
Phir usha aur ravi ke samjhane ke baad wo apne maa aur papa se ashirwad le kar us duniya mein chala jata hai jahan us ka intazaar pura desh kar raha tha, es si beech usha ka swargwas bhi ho gaya. wahan pahunchte hi us ne dekh ki wahan ki sabhi log gulam banne huye hai aur kuch aadmi un par atayachar kar raha tha, jise dekh kar Ansh ko samjhne mein jara sa bhi deri nahi lagi ki ye vikral ke aadmi hai.

Tabhi unmein se ek aadmi ki nazaar Ansh par padti hai aur wo use kaid khane mein le jata hai Ansh bhi yahi chahta tha ki pehle wo apni nani ko us vikral ki changul se muqt karaye phir baki sab ko .Niyati ko bhi yahi manzoor tha Ansh ko jis jail mein rakha gaya tha wahin ek budhi aurat ko bhi rakha gaya tha Ansh ne wahan ja kar us aurat se pucha ki wo koun hai tab us aurat ne bataya ki kabhi wo yahan ki rani hua karti thi. Itna sunte hi Ansh ne Us Aurat ke pair chukar us ka ashirwad liye es beech Ansh ke aankho se kuch aansu ki boond rani ke pair par girte hi rani uth kar baith jati hai aur dhyan se Ansh ke chehre ki taraf dekhne lagti hai jaise wo use pehchane ki koshish kar rahi ho.

Rani:-Tum koun ho beta aur mere pair kyu chu rahe ho pehle to tumhe kabhi yahan nahi dekha kahin bahar se aaye ho.

Ansh:-Ji rajmata mai bahut dur se aaya hoon yahan kisi ko nahi janta aur yahan aate hi mujhe kuch logo ne yahan kaid kar diya.ki tabhi kuch logo ki aane ki aahat sunai di jise sun kar dono chup ho gaye aur wahan kuch 10 se 15 log aa gaye aur aate hi mujhe marne lage ki tabhi us aurat ne beech main aakar mujhe bachane ki koshish karti rahi par wo log nahi ruke phir wo log piche ho gaye aur phir se 10 aadmi rani ki taraf badhne lage aur bolne lage.

Aadmi:- Aare O budhiya tu to es se baccha rahi thi tujhe aab koun bachaye hum se aaj teri wo halat karenge ki to kudh mout ki bhik mangegi . ki tabhi usme se ek aadmi ne apna pair hawa main uthaya use marne ke liya Aur rani ne apna sar apne haatho se chupa liye unse bachne ke liye. Thick usi samay Ansh ki awaj ne us ke kadam ko rok diya.

Ansh:-Tum logo ko jara bhi saram nahi aati ek bujurg ko marte huye, tum log apni jaan ki salamati chahte ho to abhi ke abhi yahan se chale jao nahi to tum logo mein se koi bhi apne pair par yahan se zinda nahi jayega.

Aadmi 2:- Tu hota koun hai hame rokne wala aur es budhiya ko tu bachayega tu hame jaan se marega lagta hai tujhe thick se sabak sikhana padega aur itna bolte hi wo mujhe marne ke liye aage aaya hi tha ki us aadmi ki sarir ki do hisse ho gaye. Aur wo khoon se latpat wahin ghir pada jise dekh phir sabhi mujh par hamla karne ke liye daur pade par un sab ki halat bhi unhi ki tarah ho gayi aur pura jail khoon se rang gaya. Yeh sab wahan khadi rani bade gaur se dekh rahi thi .tabhi meri nazaar unpar gayi thi hi wo mere paas aa kar mujhe se puchne lagi.

Rani:- tum ho koun, tum koi mamooli insaan nahi ho, sach sach baato koun ho tum aur ye sab tumne kaise kiya.Ansh:-ji rajmata maine pehle hi bataya hai ki mai ek musafir hoon aur yahan aap ko bachane ke liye aaya hoon.

Rani:-Nahi main yahan se kahin nahi ja sakti. Mai yahan apne naati ka intazaar kar rahi hoon wahi aa kar mujhe es kaid se bachayega tabhi mai yahan se jaungi warna kahin nahi jaungi es ke liye chahe meri jaan hi kyu nahi chali jaye, mai tab tak us ka intazaar karungi

Ansh:- Phir aap ka intazaar khatam hua nani. maine unhe apni saari sachi baata di aur unhone mujhe apne gaale se laga liye.

Phir maine apne nani aur raj ke lagbhag sabhi logo ko vikral ke aadmiyon se mukt karwaya aur vikral ki sabhi aadmi ko jaan se mar diya. Aur anat main vikral ko marne raj bhawan mein chalaga jahan vikral mera hi intazaar kar raha tha mere aur vikral ke beech ek ghamasan yudh hua jise main mujhe bahut chot lag gayi meri halat bahut hi kharab ho gayi ki tabhi mere andar se ek awaj aai “Beta paani ki taraf jao wohi tumhari shakti hai” pata nahi ye awaj kahan se aa rahi thi par mujhe majboor kar rahi thi unki baat maane ko.

Maine bhi wahan rakhe paani ki bartan ki taraf gaya aur jaise hi main apna haath paani main dala meri sarir par lagi saari chote bharne lagi aur mere andar ek ajeeb se takat aa gayi. Jisse main phir se vikral se yudh kar ne laga par phir bhi main hi kamzor padne laga aur main zameen par ghutno ke bal baith gaya ki tabhi vikral mujhe marne ke liye aage badha aur jaise mere karib mujhe marne ke liye pahucha mere sharir se ek alag tarah ki roshni nikli jis se meri takat 100 guna badh gayi aur maine vikral ko wahin jaan se mar diya par mujhe abhi kuch bhi pata nahi chal raha tha ki ye roshni achanak kahan se aa gayi.

Tabhi mere andar se ek aurat ki awaj aayi ye awaj jani pehchani lag rahi thi.maine us aurat se puch liya ki kaun ho tum aur tum ne meri madad kyu ki .
Tabhi mere saamne ek saya ubhar kar aaya yeh aur koi nahi balki meri maa thi jo mujhe chod ka chali gayi thi
Ansh:- Maa aap aur yahan aap to wahan papa ke paas thi to phir yahan kaise.kya aap hame chod kar chali gayi maa.

Usha:-Nahi mere bachhe mai tumhe chod kar kahin nahi gayi thi main hamesha tumhare saath rahoongi. meri shaktiya hamesha tumhari raksha karti aa rahi thi aur aage bhi karti rahegi.aab tumhari jimedaari aur bhi badh gayi hai yahan ka raj bhaar bhi tum ko hi sambhalna hai mere bachhe .aab mera jaane ka samay aa gaya hai ek accha raja banna thick apne nana ki tarah aab mujhe chalna chahiye beta.

Ansh:-maa kya main aap ko phir kabhi dobara nahi dekh paunga jab bhi mujhe aap ki jarurat padegi

Usha:-Meri saari shaktiya Tumhare andar hi hai mere bacche meri jab bhi jarurat pade toh apne andar hi dekh lena main tumhe wahin mil jaungi aur itna kehte hi wo saya gayab ho gaya.Aur phir main wahan ka naya raja ban gaya, aur thick apne nana ki tarah hi shasan karne laga jahan khushiyan phir se us raj mein aa gayi.


The End.