Xossip Ultimate Story Contest 2015
#38
Devil Inside Angel

lover boy 1513



Eak chote se kamre k andar Rohit apne ghutne ko mode subak
subak kar ro raha tha… Akhir aisa kya ho gaya jo wo aise
baithkar ro raha hai…iss kahani ki shuruaat hoti hai

Aaj se thik kuch mahine pehle:

Rohit eak 6 ft ka lamb gora smart ladka hai…Bachpan se
anath hone k bawjood usne security officer inspecter ban jindagi
me apne liye eak mukam hasil kar liya tha… Aaj usne eak
Case solve kiya jiske liye use puraskrit kiya gaya hai…

Wo kaphi khush tha aur jo medal use puraskrit kiya gaya
tha use lekar wo apne Anath ashram jahan usne apni jindagi
bitayi thi uski warden jisne use eak ma aka pyaar
diya tha uske paas jaa raha tha…

Wo utsah me aaj apni security officer jeep ko bahot tez chala wo
warden se bahot pyaar karta tha aur pyaar se use puspa
maa bulata tha…eak anath ko pushpa ne apne bête ki tarah
pala Tha… karan uski jindagi me bhi koi nahi tha…
Rohit naam bhi use puspa ne hi diya tha…

Rohit use apni momento dikhane k liye bajhot jaldi gadi
chala raha tha tabhi use bich raste me Do log dikhayi diye
jo road cross kar rahe the rohit ki najar jaise hi unnpar
padi usne unhe bachane k liye jeep ki disha badal di jiske
kaaran uski gadi uncantrol ho gayi…

Jaise taise rohit ne use side me bane footpath me chadne
se roka… uski saanse tez chal rahi thi Use gussa bahot aata
tha usne moodkar road k bich khade unn do insano ko chillaya…

Rohit: Are andhe ho kya dikhayi nahi deta…

Par jaise hi uski najr unpe padi Rohit unme se eak ko dekhta
rah gaya…unme se eak bujurg aadmi Tha jo shyad bimar tha aur
uske haant ko thame eak ladki thi…Rohit ki awaz sun wo ladki
Jaldi se uske paas aayi…

Ladki: Sorry wo actually mere papa bimar hai na isliye mai
unko road cross karwa rahi thi… Apko lagi to nahi…

Rohit ne na me sar hila diya…par use hosh kahan tha wo to
usko dekhte hi apne hosh o hawas kho chuka tha…

Ladki wahan se muskura kar chali gayi…Rohit use jata dekhta
raha…Aaj jinadgi me pehli baar Rohit kokisi ko dekhkar aisa
feel hua tha…khair usne uske bare me jyada nahi socha aur
Wahan se apni puspa maa se milne anath aashram chala gaya…

Puspa uska hi intzaar kar rahi thi…rohit ne uske haant me
inaam me mili medal thama di… Jise dekh puspa ki aankho
me aansu aa gaye…

Rohit jab se security officer me bharti hua tha tab se wo anath ashram
ko chod eak kiraye ke flat me rehta tha…usne puspa ko bhi sath
chalne ko kaha par wo nahi mani…rohit har maah apni salary ka eak
Bada hissa yahan de deta tha…

Rohit me eak achche insaan k sabhi gun the par uski eak kamjori
thi wo sochta bahot tha… Shayad isi karan use baar baar road me
mili wo ladki yaad aa rahi thi… kyon nahi pata par Rohit use
bhool hi nahi paa raha tha…

Khair din bitne lage eak din jab wo puspa se milne anath aashram
gaya to use phir se wohi Ladki najar aayi…wo wahan k bachcho k
saath khel rahi thi…

Rohit na jane kyon use dekhta hi reh gaya… uska svabhav aisa bilkool
nahi tha… wo humesha Ladkiyon se door rehta par iss ladki ne uspe
na jane koi jadu kar diya tha…

Wo subah ki tarah uske jivan me aayi thi… Uski kajal lagi jheel si
aankho me rohit ko apni jindagi dikhayi dene lagi… Chehre par
masomiyat jo kisi chote bachcho ki tarah thi, aur
Sharir k bharav me madakta saaf saaf jhalak rahi thi…
Rohit use dekh pagal hua jaa raha tha…

Aaj jindagi me pehli baar dil me use iss ladki ko pane ki hasrat paida
ho gayi… Rohit wahin maidan k bench me baithe gaaya aur uss ladki ko
niharne laga…

Rohit man me sochne laga ki bhagwan ne iss ladki ko kitna sundar banaya hai…
Masoomiyat aur youvan ka aisa jadu aaj tak usne nahi dekha tha…
tabhi uske bagal me puspa aakar baith gayi…

Rohit: maa ye ladki koun hai aaj se pehle maine ise nahi dekha…

Puspa: Rohit ye Priya hai paas hi me rehti hai…iske pita ji yahan eak
mandir k pujari hain… Bechari ki maa bachpan me hi chal basi thi…
bahot hi sanskari bachchi hai…waise maine hi iske pitaji aur
ise yahan bulaya Hai…

Rohit: Kyon…
Puspa ne uski or muskura kar dekha…
Puspa: teri shaadi pakki karne k liye…
Rohit ye sun kar bahot excited ho gaya tha par usne khud par kabu
rakhkar puspa se pucha…

Rohit: par maa mai to anath hoon na…

Puspa: chup mere hote hue yahan ka koi bhi bachcha anaath nai hai…
aur waise bhi maine unhe Sab kuch bata diya hai… uske pita ko koi
samasya nahi hai iss baat se…

Rohit: apne inse baat bhi kar li hai kya…

Puspa: haan beta wo dono mujhe eak din mandir me mile the tab iske
pita ramadhar ji bahot hi sajjan insaan hai aur preeti to badi hi
pyaari bachchi hai wo… isliye mujhse raha na gaya aur maine tumhare
liye unse preeti ka haant mang liya…

Rohit: Aur preeti ko kya ye rista manjoor hai…
Puspa: tere aise puchne se mujhe eak baat to samajh aa gayi ki preeti
tujhe pasand aa gayi hai…

Rohit uski ye baat sun sharma gaya… jise dekh puspa ne uske sar k baal
ko sehlate hue kaha…

Puspa: wo log tujhse hi milne yahan aaye hain… preeti bahot hi seedhi
ladki hai jahan uske pita shadi karne k liye kahenge wo wahin shaadi
kar legi… ab chal uske pita andar tera intzaar kar rahe hain…

Rohit puspa k saath andar gaya… sabse pehe rohit ne Ramadhar k pair chue
aur jisse Ramadhar Ko itna to samajh me aa gaya ki Rohit me sanskar hain…
usne rohit se chand sawal puche jiska Rohit ne safayi se jawab diya…

Ramadhar ko Rohit ki sadgi bahot pasand aayi… Usne apni taraf se riste k
liye haan kar diya… Par Rohit ne sirf eak baar priya se baat karne ki
ichcha jahir ki… jise ramadhar ne maan liya…

Ramadhar aur puspa bahar nikal gaye… Puspa ne priya ko bulakar use Rohit k
paas andar bhej diya… Priya pehle to thoda hichkichayi andar akele jane se
par Ramadhar ne use ishare se milne k liye hami bhar di…

0Priya eak bahot hi sadharan pariwar ki eak sanskari ladki thi jisne aaj tak
kisi bhi paraye insaan se akele me baat nahi kit hi…maa k gujar jane k baad
pita ne hi pala tha… bhagwan ne use sanskar k saath saath khubsurati bhi
bahot di thi…doodh sa agora rang, masoom sa chehra jiski eak muskurahat kisi ki
dil ki dhadkan rok de, figure bh kehr dhata tha uska 34C ki breast Kisi ko bhi
apna diwana bana le, jab wo raste par chalti to manchalo ki nigahe uske bhare hue
hilte Nitamb se hatti hi nahi thi…

par use inn sab chizo se koi matlab nahi
tha… wo apna saara dhyaan padhayi aur puja path me lagati… use sanskar me eak
baat mil gayi thi ki eak ladki k jivan me uska Pati hi uska sab kuch hota hai…
isliye wo humesha apne sapno k rajkumar ka wait karti rehti…

Jab wo andar rohit k samne aayi to use dekhte hi pehchan gayi…use yaad
aa gaya ki wo wohi hai jo uss din usko road me mila tha… par usne kuch
kaha nahi bus apne salwar-suit k dupatte ko haant me Lekar use ghumati
khadi rahi…

Rohit eak security officer wala tha wo samajh gaya ki Priya nervous ho rahi hai…
Is liye usne hi pehle baat karne ka faisla kiya…
Rohit: Are aap to wahi ho na jo uss din mujhe road me mili thi…


Priya ne haan me apna sar hilaya…
Rohit: Aaiye na aap wahan kyon khadi hain…
Priya dhime kadmo se uske paas aayi aur uske bagal wale sofe par baith gayi…

Rohit: mera naam rohit hai… aur mai eak security officer inspecter hoon… apko
aur kuch janana hai mere bare me…

Priya ne na me apna sar hilaya…
Rohit: Aapko to pata hi hoga ki hum log yahan kyon mil rahe hain…
Priya ne haan me sar hilaya…

Rohit: Aap iss riste se khush to ho na…

Priya ne uski iss baat ka koi reaction nahi diya… Rohit samajh gaya ki
wo bahot sharma rahi hai… Isliye usne apne dil ki baat seedhe seedhe
Priya se keh di…

Rohit: Aap kuch bhi tai kare usse pehle mai apko eak baat kehna chahta hoon...

Priya ne uski or najre utha k dekha use aisa laga ki rohit kahin iss riste
k liye mana to nahi kar dega… wo dar gayi kyonki rohit use bahot pasand
aaya tha jaisa wo apne sapno k rajkumar k bare me sochti thi…

Rohit: Mujhe aap bahot achchi lagti ho sach kahun jab se maine apko dekha
hai mai aapko bhool hi nahi paa raha hoon… Pls meri baat ka bura mat
manana mujhe aapse pyaar ho gaya hai… aur mai eak anaath bhi hoon…
Puspa maa ne mujhe pala bus hai…

Rohit k mooh se aisi baate sun priya to jaise aasman me udne lagi…
Uska hone wala pati uspe pehle se hi lattu ho ye koun ladki nahi
chahegi… Uska chehra sharm se lal ho gaya… wo khadi hui aur bina
Kuch kahe wahan se jane lagi…

Rohit: priya aap bina kuch kahe kyon jaa rahi ho… Kya apko mera aisa
kehna achcha nahi laga… Kya mai apko pasand nahi hoon…

Priya ne use piche moodkar dekha aur usse bus itna kaha…
Priya: Pasand ho…
Aur wo jaldi se kamre k bahar chali gayi…

Char din baad hi mandir me eak chote se function k saath Rohit aur
priya ki shaadi ho gayi… Dono hi bahot khush the… Shaadi ka pura
kharch Rohit ne hi kiya tha… jise dekh priya ki aankho me aansu aa
gaye kyonki uske pita eak pujari the jinke paas jyada punji nahi thi…

Priya ko sach me yakin aa gaya ki rohit use sach me bahot chahta hai...
Shaadi k baad Rohit use lekar apne flat me le aaya jahan saare saman
bikhre pade the… jise dekh priya k hosh udd gaye… Usne rohit ki or
banavati gusse se dekha…

Rohit: are mai kya karun mai aisa hi hoon … ab tum aa gayi ho na
sab sambhal lo aur mujhe bhi… Jise sun priya muskura uthi…dono ne
bade pyaar se khana khaya aaj rohit ne khana bahar se hi mangwaya tha…

Khana khane k baad jab rohit priya ko bedroom me le gaya to priya
dekhti reh gayi… rohit ne bedroom Ko naya banwaya tha… bedroom me
bahar jaisa kuch bhi nahi tha… sara karma foolon se saja tha…
aur jarurat k sabhi saman maujud the…

Priya room ko dekhti reh gayi… Rohit ne use god me utha liya
aur bed par rakh diya…
Rohit: aaj humari suhag raat hai priya par agar tumhe aur samay
chahiye to hum rook sakte hain...

Priya ne jab rohit k mooh se ye baat suni to uski aankhe bhar aayi…
usne to itna sapne me bhi nahi socha tha… Priya ne rohit ki aankho
me dekhte hue kaha…

Priya: Aap sach me koi fariste ho kya jo meri jindagi me khushiyan
bharne aae ho…
Rohit: Nahi mai koi "Angel" nahi hoon bus eak "LOVER BOY" hoon jo tumse
beshumar pyaar karne laga hai...


Priya ne rohit k mooh se ye sunte hi use apne gale se laga liya…
Rohit k liye ye priya ki or se khula amantran tha… uske baad dono ne
eak dusre par pyaar ki barsaat kar di…
Dono ka hi ye pehli baar tha to dono hi iss khel me nikamme the…
Par kehte hain na pyaar sab sikha hi deta hai… kuch hi der me dono
k kapde farsh me jahan tahan pade the… rohit to priya k husn se Ghayal
hi ho gaya tha… usne apne pyaar ki nishani priya k jism k har hisse me
chod di thi….

Sara karma unn dono ki aanho aur siskiyon se gunj utha… bich me eak baar
priya ki chikh bhi nikli Jiske baad rohit rukna chah raha tha par priya
eak pativrata nari thi usne apni taklif ki parwah na Ki aur rohit ko pyaar
ka khel jari rakhne k liye kaha… jab dono shant hue to rohit priya k upar hi
Lete lete so gaya priya bhi pyaar khel se thak kar aise hi so gayi…

Uss waqt dono purn roop se nagn the… priya k komal golayi k upar rohit ka
chehra pada hua tha… Rohit ka eak haant priya k kamar me tha aur dusra uske
nitamb k niche… ye raat inki jivan me pyaar ki eak nayi shuruaat le kar aayi...

Dono ko jaise saansar ki saari khushiyan mil gayi thi… Dono ne eak dusre k
jivan ko pura kar diya tha… Rohit priya ki har khwahish ko pura karta aur
Priya bhi apne pati k har chiz ka khayal rakhti… Aise hi pyaar me din bitne lage…

Par kehte na jab sab chiz eak dum sahi ho raha ho to insaan k jivan me kuch
na kuch hone wala hota hai… Eak Raat jab dono eak dusre pe pyaar barsa kar
so rahe the tabhi raat me rohit ka sharir me eak jordar kampan hua jisse
uske bagal me soyi Priya ki neend toot gayi… Usne jab dekha rohit Kaamp raha
hai to use uthane ki koshish ki par wo lagatar kampe jaa raha tha…

Priya ne use bahot uthane ki koshish ki par wo nahi utha… priyan se ab raha
na gaya usne turant Ambulance ko call kar bula liya aur rohit ko usme hospital
le gayi… jahan docters ne use thik bataya aur kaha ki use bas kaam ka stress
hai jisse wo aisa kar raha tha… jab Priya ne ye suna to uski jaan me jaan aayi…

Par ye bus kuch hi pal k liye tha… Uss din k baad rohit kuch badla badla sa rehne
laga… uska swabhav pehle se eak dum alag ho gaya… wo baat baat par gussa karta
jo priya uski jaan hua karti thi uss par usne haant uthana bhi chalu kar diya…
Kaam me bhi ab wo pehle ki tarah nahi rehta… jo rohit kabhi bhi daru ki or dekhta
bhi nahi tha ab har raat wo ghar pee k aane laga… ab wo pushpa se bhi milne nahi jata tha…

Priya to jaise aasman se se siddha jamin par geer gayi… aisa nahi tha ki wo
humesha hi hypar hota… Har baar jab wo priya ko daru peekar marta to usse baad me
ro ro kar maaphi jarur mangta aur usse minnate karta ki wo use chod kar na jae…
Priya bhi usse bahot pyaar karti thi issliye uska man bhi pighal jata aur wo use
maaf kar deti…

Bed par bhi rohit ab pehle ki tarah use pyaar se treet na karta… har baar jab
wo sex karta to shuruaat to bade hi pyaar se karta par na jane use kya ho jata
wo bahot wildly priya k upar hawi ho jata… yahan tak jab priya uske vehshi pan
se rone bhi lag jati to bhi rohit ko koi farak na padta…

Had to tab ho gayi jab eak raat rohit ne wo kaam kar diya jo priya ne sapne
me bhi nahi socha tha…

Jab wo priya k vagina me apna panis daal ne hi wala tha pata nahi use kya hua
usne priya ko eakdum se palta aur jabardasti uske komal nitamb me apne panis ko
daal diya… priya Bilakti, kasmasati, aur chillati rahi par rohit ko uss par
rehem nahi aaya usne apni hawas puri hone k baad hi priya ko choda…

Priya saaari raat roti rahi uske saare sapne rohit ki iss harkat se chakna
choor ho gaye… wo haar maan kar subah rohit k uthne se pehle hi ghar se
apne pita k paas chali gayi… Usne jate hue eak baar rohit ki or dekha par
wo badi hi gehri neend me so raha tha…

Priya ki aankho se apne aap aansu nikalne lage par wo wahan ruki nahi kyonki
wo janti thi Ki agar rohit k uthne se pehle usne ghar na choda to rohit phir
use apne aansuon se kamjor kar dega….

Priya k achanak rote hue ghar aane se ramadhar pareshaan ho gaya usne priya
se pucha par usne Usne kuch nahi bataya… par Ramadhar se raha na gaya
usne puspa ko phone kar bulaya… Pushpa ne jab apni kasam de kar priya se
pucha to usne use sab bata diya… Jisse puspa ko rohit k upar bada gussa aaya…

Idhar jab Rohit ki neend khuli to priya ko ghar me na dekh wo pagal sa ho
gaya… usne priya k phone par call lagaya to puspa ne priya k haant se phone
lekar rohit ko bahot bura bhala kaha… Jise sun rohit rone laga aur
puchne laga ki priya kahan hai…

Puspa ko bhi uski roni awaz par daya aa gayi…usne Rohit ko mandir k piche
bane ghar par bula liya… rohit jaldi se wahan pahunch gaya… usne jaise
taise sabko manaya par puspa ne rohit se bhagwan k samne jaa kar priya ki
kasam khane ko kaha ki wo ab use tang nahi karega…

Rohit ye baat bhi maan gaya usne roti hui priya ka haant pakda aur use
apne saath rote hue mandir ki or le gaya par jaise hi wo mandir k andar
kadam rakhne wala tha ki uska sharir kampne laga aur wo wahin gir gaya…

Priya ne jab rohit ko girte dekha uska kaleja phat gaya wo uske seene me
sar rakh rone lagi… Aur use uthne k liye kehne lagi… wahan khade
shradhaluon ne rohit ko uthaya aur hospital Le gae… sabhi rohit k liye bade
chintit the par eak shaksh ko chodkar…

Jis waqt rohit mandir ki taraf aa raha tha usi waqt rohit ki aankho me
ramadhar ko kuch aur hi najar aaya… usne hospital jaakar priya aur puspa
se kaha ki rohit ab pehle wala rohit nahi raha use jald se jald eak aashram
le jana hoga jahan uska ilaj ho sake…

Usne iske aage kuch bhi nahi bataya… jab Rohit ko hosh aaya sabse pehle usne
priya ka naam liya… Priya to apne rohit se bahot pyaar karti thi wo uske paas
turant aa gayi aur use apne seene se laga liya…

Priya: aap na bahot gande ho mujhe bahot pareshan karte ho… jab mai apse door
chali jaungi tab dekhna mujhe yaad kar aap kitna rote ho…

Rohit: nahi priyu aisa mat kaho na mai bhi tumse apne jaan se jyada pyaar karta hoon…

Tabhi Ramadhar wahan aa gaya aur usne rohit ko apne saath eak aashram chalne ko
kaha… Jise rohit ne badi hi berukhi se nakar diya… jiske baad sab uski or gour
se dekhne lage… Tabhi Rohit ne has k kaha ki use kuch nahi hua bas kaam ka thoda
stress hai wo bilkool thik hai… jispar pushpa ne use daanta aur kaha ki ghar par
apne kaam k stress ko na laya kare…

Wahan se Rohit aur priya wapas ghar aa gae… kuch din to sab theek raha par eak
din rohit haanphta hua ghar par aaya aur usne priya ko khud ko bachane k liye kaha…
Jab priya ne usse uski iss halat ka karan pucha to usne bataya ki aaj usne galti
se S.P ko bahot maar diya hai… jiske karan use sabhi mental hospital le Jaa rahe
the par wo bhag kar wapas aa gaya…

Priya ne jab ye suna to use rohit par bahot gussa aaya par wo bechari kya karti
usne rohit ko apne saath bahar chalne ko kaha aur rohit ki security officer jeep me baith
wo dono wahan se nikal gaye…

Priya ko tabhi ramadhar ki baat yaad aayi ki use eak aashram me la jana chahiye…
usne Ramadhar ko call lagya par jo khabar use phone par mili usse uski duniya
hil gayi… Ramadhar k phone se use kisi aur ne bataya ki uska aaj katal ho gaya
hai… usne jab ye suna to uski saans atak gayi usne rohit ki or dekha aur paya ki
uske shirt me khoon k dhabbe lage hain… wo kuch sochti uske pehle hi anath ashram
se call aaya aur usme bhi dukh ki hi khabar thi ki puspa ka bhi katal ho gaya tha…

Priya ka chehra inn do khabro se murti ki tarah ho gaya jisme koi emotion nahi the…
usne rohit ko jeep rokne k liye kaha… uss waqt jeep sheher se bahar eak sun san si
jagah par thi… Priya aur rohit dono gadi se niche utare…

Priya ne Rohit ki aankho me dekhte hue kaha...
Priya: Tum mere Rohit nahi ho...
Present time:

Rohit uss chote se kamre me sar niche kiye rote hue badbadae jaa raha tha…
Rohit: maine nahi mara… maine kisi ko nahi mara… Maine apni PRIYA ko nahi mara…

Tabhi achanak wo husne laga… usne apna sar upar kiya uski aankhe surkh lal thi…
Aur chehre par eak vehsipan wali hasin…

Rohit: Dekh Rohit aaj maine apna badla le liye… Aaj tere paas maine kuch bhi nahi
choda mera badla pura hua… maine tujhse tere saare apne chchin liye...
ab ji iss bojh k saath…

Aur usi waqt Rohit ki aankhe normal ho gayi aur wo wahin behosh hokar let gaya…
Darasal iss kahani ki shuruaat me jis case k liye puraskar mila tha usme rohit ne eak
Sereial killer jisne dus logo ka katal kiya tha uska encounter rohit ne kiya tha wo bhi
Uska trap ban kar… uska naam Ramanna

Actually wo sereial killer ka beta bahot bimaar tha aur usko kisi Baba ne gyaarah
logo ki bali dene k liye kaha tha… usne dus logo ko to maar diya aur rohit ko usne
apna gyarawah shikar banaya tha jo khud uske changul me use marne gaya tha…

Pehle rohit ne usse jaan bujh kar dosti ki aur jab eak baar dono hotal gaye to Rohit
ne Ramanna ko apni drink me kuch milate dekha aur samajh gaya ki wo behoshi ki dawa
mila raha hai… rohit ne chalaki se uss drink ko phek diya aur phir behosh hone
ka natak kiya…

Jiske baad ramanna use uthakar eak jangal me le gaya jahan eak baba hawan k sath uska
intzaar kar raha tha… Rohit jaise wahan pahuncha wo khada hua aur usne pehle baba ko
apni pistol se mara aur uske baad Ramanna par goli chala di…

Ramanna ki jaan turant na nikli marne se pehle usne rohit ko kaha ki wo wapas aakar
iska badla jarur lega jaise aaj rohit ne use apne bachche ki jaan bachane se roka…
waise hi eak din wo apno ko nahi bacha paega…

Ramanna: “ mai har chiz ka hisab lene aaunga... teri jindagi se har wo chiz chchin lunga
jo tujhe pyaari hai... “

Aaj shayad log rohit ko "Dissociative identity disorder" ka mariz samajh rahe ho …
par eak hasta kheta insaan itna darinda ban jaega ye kabhi bhi gale se utarne wali
baat nahi thi…

Rohit k andar se wo haivaan to chala gaya par usne rohit ko eak aisa dard diya
tha jisse rohit jindagi bhar na ubar paya… Aaj Rohit eak mental asylum me hai
jahan wo har pal eak hi Baat kehta rehta hai…

"Maine meri Priya ko nahi mara"

The End

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Xossip Ultimate Story Contest 2015 - by Expert - 08-09-2025, 10:59 PM
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