Adultery Rich, hot, haughty married women trapped by old dirty cunning care taker (completed)

[opendoor]

Dear Opendoor

Been reading your stories for quite a while now and I must say your story telling skills have tremendously been improved!
I absolutely admire your passion for story writing, you are writing for so long, I read your first story like a year or two ago, since then I think you have come a long way sir / miss and congratulations!!

You are the example that one can improve their writing skills just by sheer passion of writing more and more stories. You are one of the few writers who is absolutely dedicated to the story and your passion pours through your story.

This particular story is very close to my heart as it exactly matches my level of kink. Most of my search in this site is to find stories like this. At last someone took courage to write one I am so happy! After reading I felt obligated as it is my fundamental duty to leave a good review as it really touched me and is one of my favorites.

Every line of the story you wrote is very erotic, the universe you created is beautiful and even the images you chose is so damn erotic and I must say your taste and my taste matches when it comes to images :))

The seduction and the schemes devised by the ugly old man to get inside the most beautiful women in the world is very very erotic. I especially enjoy the dialogues between them, wish they were more (as it adds more eroticism) but I am already happy with the dialogues between the characters, they seem on point and very erotic.

Most erotic part is when the Narsingh gets to enjoy these beauties without condoms and they all willfully gets impregnated! Hope we reach there.

The ideas that you presented to trap the women in each scenario is out of the box and it blows my mind! You are full of ideas and hope this ideas continue to flow in all the stories you write.

Of course I am expecting a part 2. This is too damn good to let go. And I admire your dedication to this story!

So thank you Opendoor! Thank you for writing and entertaining us! Thank you!!

wow !!! thank you for your kind words and detailed feedback.

this story is outside my comfort zone and i have to spend lot of time in thinking , collecting pics and penning down. its tough (for me) to write realistic plots. here we have super rich ladies getting attracted to an ugly old man.. plot is interesting but writing is tough.. how to make these ladies attract towards the old man.. initially i thought only motive is sex.. but then as a reader i need more.. not just meeting/rubbing of body parts.. some emotions, sentiments should be mixed along withe logic and reasoning.. this is where the forest backdrop helped me a lot.. its not a oyo room or a five star hotel.. the old man can take out the ladies to outside and start making his moves..

tough part is the class diff...i cant write any meaningful conversation between an illiterate old village man and super intelligent CEOS.. So its more tough to get them closer. 

managing the writing with one lady might be easy but when we have two of them i have to show the contrast. initially i didn't want the ladies to know each other about their relation with Narsingh.. but i ran out of ideas on how to make Mandakini move with Narsingh.. that's when i decided to go with Roopa helping Mandakini to get her laid

Regarding sex scenes also i have limitations.. i cant write outright porn movie script.. we are dealing with a old remote villager whose only knowledge about sex is put your dick and bang hard... clothed.. unprotected...   but i need to take some liberty and introduce different angles , use condom, oral etc..

overall due to tremendous response from the readers, i could spend enough time and restraint myself from illogical sex scenes..

still i feel unprotected sex and making them pregnant is out of my thinking.. these are CEOs.. not road side cheap whores.. 

In part 2, i will take some liberty and write such plots.. will bring back these ladies after an year and then have all fantasies fulfilled (no pregnancy) 

thank you all readers for your great response and of course my friend who pushed me and helped me in this story