08-09-2025, 11:38 PM
Dear Opendoor
Been reading your stories for quite a while now and I must say your story telling skills have tremendously been improved!
I absolutely admire your passion for storywriting, you are writing for so long, I read your first story like a year or two ago, since then I think you have come a long way sir / miss and congratulations!!
You are the example that one can improve their writing skills just by sheer passion of writing more and more stories. You are one of the few writers who is absolutely dedicated to the story and your passion pours through your story.
This particular story is very close to my heart as it exactly matches my level of kink. Most of my search in this site is to find stories like this. At last someone took courage to write one I am so happy! After reading I felt obligated as it is my fundamental duty to leave a good review as it really touched me and is one of my favorites.
Every line of the story you wrote is very erotic, the universe you created is beautiful and even the images you chose is so damn erotic and I must say your taste and my taste matches when it comes to images :))
The seduction and the schemes devised by the ugly old man to get inside the most beautiful women in the world is very very erotic. I especially enjoy the dialogues between them, wish they were more (as it adds more eroticism) but I am already happy with the dialogues between the characters, they seem on point and very erotic.
Most erotic part is when the Narsingh gets to enjoy these beauties without condoms and they all willfully gets impregnated! Hope we reach there.
The ideas that you presented to trap the women in each scenario is out of the box and it blows my mind! You are full of ideas and hope this ideas continue to flow in all the stories you write.
Of course I am expecting a part 2. This is too damn good to let go. And I admire your dedication to this story!
So thank you Opendoor! Thank you for writing and entertaining us! Thank you!!
Been reading your stories for quite a while now and I must say your story telling skills have tremendously been improved!
I absolutely admire your passion for storywriting, you are writing for so long, I read your first story like a year or two ago, since then I think you have come a long way sir / miss and congratulations!!
You are the example that one can improve their writing skills just by sheer passion of writing more and more stories. You are one of the few writers who is absolutely dedicated to the story and your passion pours through your story.
This particular story is very close to my heart as it exactly matches my level of kink. Most of my search in this site is to find stories like this. At last someone took courage to write one I am so happy! After reading I felt obligated as it is my fundamental duty to leave a good review as it really touched me and is one of my favorites.
Every line of the story you wrote is very erotic, the universe you created is beautiful and even the images you chose is so damn erotic and I must say your taste and my taste matches when it comes to images :))
The seduction and the schemes devised by the ugly old man to get inside the most beautiful women in the world is very very erotic. I especially enjoy the dialogues between them, wish they were more (as it adds more eroticism) but I am already happy with the dialogues between the characters, they seem on point and very erotic.
Most erotic part is when the Narsingh gets to enjoy these beauties without condoms and they all willfully gets impregnated! Hope we reach there.
The ideas that you presented to trap the women in each scenario is out of the box and it blows my mind! You are full of ideas and hope this ideas continue to flow in all the stories you write.
Of course I am expecting a part 2. This is too damn good to let go. And I admire your dedication to this story!
So thank you Opendoor! Thank you for writing and entertaining us! Thank you!!
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