08-09-2025, 08:15 PM
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(08-09-2025, 05:33 PM)Romeo32 Wrote: Amazing Writing Skills.Great Story.......
But koi toh hoga koi ladki hogi madarse mein jo rudra se mili hui ho or Shahida or Shazia ko trap karne mein help kare or wahan ki sari information rudra ko de
Ayee hayee dimag toh kafi tagda lagaya apne....
Juday rahiye dekhte hai kya hota hai and yes... Shahida par cheezay nahi aane de toh he better hai q ki wo ek buzurg hogai hai.... Wo maza nahi rahegaa.....
Aur main bhi as a reader baat krra hu naa ki as a writer.....
Ho sakta hai shahida ko bhi ragad de wo log....ya ho sakta hai nahi kare kuch....
Dekhte hai aage hota kya hai.... Maza aega kafi dil chasp banani hai kahani ko .... Q ki mere readers ne muje kafi request ki thi is story k liye......
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