Misc. Erotica CHAMPA - EK AURAT YA KHILAUNA

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Finally , aap ne iss kahani ka The end kar hee dia. Janha tak mujhe yaad hai , ye kahani sabse pahle Exbii.com mei 2006 mei post hona shuru hua thaa . 2-3 platform badalne ke baad last 4-5 saal se ye kahani iss site par hai. Iss site par iss kahani ko wo jagah nahi mili jo milna chahiye thaa. Khair , mere liye ye kahni sabse se badhia kahni rahi . Aur ye last update ko padhne mei 2 din lug gaya . Iss kahani mei saikdo characters thhe lekin writer ne kisee ko nahi chhoda . Aur aakhir mei jab Manu kee charo khas maal Saumya, Leela , Poonam aur Sabina ko ek saath Pari ke saamne khada kia wo to gajab ka scene thaa. Aur Pari ko apne tareeke se Manu ko gyan dena , bahut hee badhia thaa. Pari kee shadi tak iss kahani mei itne characters ho gaye thhe kee isse aage chalana kisee ke buss kee baat nahi hai. Mujhe buss ek hee baat ka afsos rahega kee Manu aur Suchi ne jisse sab se jyada pyar kia , uss Saumya ne inn ke saath dushmani nibhai . Uss ke baad bhee agar Pari , Saumya kee beti ko bhee apne saath rakhti to bahut hee badhia rahta . Parth ko kahani mei laga kar Shirin aur Manu ke beech kee chhoti lekin bahut hee garam prem kahani kee yaad dila dee. Bhukhalund ne Mumtaz ko bhee nahi bhula .

Great story , great end . We will miss Champa, Manu & Suchi .