07-09-2025, 10:55 AM
Kaha se kaha story le ja rahe ho bhai. Bahut gadbad hai story me s"xting writing achi h but story nai. Pehle virgin batate ho namrata ko fir kuch bhi tin ungli fir se kuch story's bad kuch aur naya achanak se kahi se bhi. You should think about the before the story you wrote baki to thik hai kuch ache hai but story connection bht bakwas hai kuch kuch to thoda sa bhi match nai ho raha. I'm not reading it now. Bbye make sure updates thik se lage