02-09-2025, 06:59 AM
(01-09-2025, 07:15 AM)Ayush01111 Wrote: Bhai ab ye nahi bolna maa bete se pyar karti hai ,kyu ki abhi tak ki story me aisa kuch nahi hai maa randi hai jise shirf apni azadi or apne ap se pyar hai till now for me venkat is a criminal buy mom is is boss of all criminals .i woulf love to read this part till now only this part is giving little attenstion toward boy but in the end again writer will destroy boy image by that couple and may be bring venkat as a superman but it will be most hated part again for me
Do you understand or not??, you have your own right to comment on story, the author had already told you that you are not understanding the story, its the right of the author to go for whatever he thinks is suitable for the genre of story. Now if you want , write your story on your own, where you make the cuck a super hero.. and sissy and iron man.


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