Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

One sureshot way of screwing up a story is by understanding the reader's point of view. happens invariably. New writers are particularly prone to this malady. They need to realize that its their, the writer's perspective that drew readers in the first place. Remember the old adage - too many cooks ... and all that.

Still not following your stories for reasons mentioned initially, but I see that you have developed quite a fan following. I was casually glancing at the last page, to get a sense of where you had reached and came across this toying with the idea of harakiri.