31-08-2025, 09:43 PM
Nice update. Please try to write longer update (I hope I am not asking too much). The main plot of the story should be geeta's and Venkat relationship where they treat sunil as CUCK. Any sub plot like the one involving Mariam should only feed into that narrative and should not overshadow the main arc . Just my point of view. Eagerly waiting to read what happens between Venkat and Geeta moving forward and how they treat Sunil. I also read a chapter in the story where venkat is talking about Geeta's morning sickness what was that? It seems that point now stands forgotten. Keep writing!


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