Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

I finally finished the update . That Sona and Vikram part was so unbearable .

I had one criticism before  and Now I have the same criticism  . You need to tone down a bit the whole Sona and VIKRAM situation . 

The plot is fine , the material is not right , great words and line but not needed , not everything needs to have some pinch of intimacy and 



But 

Also , Then I also understand the whole point of doing what you did . I get it . THE HIDDEN MEANING and THE SUBTLE HINTS . I have enough faith in you that you gonna pull it  off . 

I hope  whatever happens in future updates  balances out or even out do what happened in Earlier updates , The written material, The Content .

I did not want to make this comment , but The whole Sona and VIKRAM part irked me so much   which I know the may be the whole point of writing that paragraph . lol . This is good but not good . 

(Just wrote what i felt in that moment . lol . I am setting my maturity aside . A little bit of  maturity helps but too much of maturity can ruin the fun ) 


( Note :- Will write another comment on CHAPTER 21 , Later )

Well , here's the thing Dean. If Sonarika reacted condescendingly and completely ignored Vikram , then that would've been a big character assasination of her arc. Because think of it this way , she "rekindled" her affair with him. And she did it because she has alreadly formed a connection with him. Now If I suddenly make her ignore Vikram like she always does , she will be doing the same thing she did in Bali which is tip toeing between her men. But here, the romance , the small banter,  it was needed because Sonarika was suffering in her own pit of depression and sadness. She needed an emotional relief , a time with someone who could make her breath again. What they had was not mostly romantic , but piecing together from the wreck that they have created. And in a way it gave her relief from the Toxic environment she has created at her own home. Because Sonarika knows she is not going to get that love and affection from Hemant after the heartbreak she has caused him. 

In short this is her "duality" in play. She loves Hemant and also has feelings for Vikram but she understands she is moving away from Hemant which is why she finds some relief of emotional attachment with Vikram which is why she did all that with him. But at the same time , she didn't go all the way because she still has love for Hemant. But now we know , this wasn't just an emotional turmoil. She was meant to be that way as she is mentally damaged for a while. For me , in a storyline standpoint this was important because I didn't want Sonarika to go through an emotional torture for the sake of it. That scene paved the way to make Sonarika see that something was wrong with her which made her finally seek help from Ragini.

But I do hope you might like her future arc , because we will see her character heal and improve herself through therapy and other activities to find her inner self and bring out her truth. This is already have me hyped as a writer as well because I did a lengthy research on this to carve out her redemption/healing arc.