24-08-2025, 10:17 PM
Hi, sriya
I am big fan of your writing, I have read alot of stories on various forums but this one is exceptional and awesome, in fact I made this is especially for you to reply. I am not able to follow the story since supriya gave blowjob to Mike, I guess since then your story has lost erotic sense, it has turned to old typical Bollywood tragedy romance, it has become mix of few Bollywood stuff, I am not able to understand where you are taking this story, it seems you are trying to gave romance tragedy but just to acquire readers you started with erotic writing and then eventually you are turning to unnecessary love stories...still hope to find some spark in upcoming episodes,hope you justify
I am big fan of your writing, I have read alot of stories on various forums but this one is exceptional and awesome, in fact I made this is especially for you to reply. I am not able to follow the story since supriya gave blowjob to Mike, I guess since then your story has lost erotic sense, it has turned to old typical Bollywood tragedy romance, it has become mix of few Bollywood stuff, I am not able to understand where you are taking this story, it seems you are trying to gave romance tragedy but just to acquire readers you started with erotic writing and then eventually you are turning to unnecessary love stories...still hope to find some spark in upcoming episodes,hope you justify