23-08-2025, 04:35 PM
Hey Sriya, Lot of details and truly well researched your story seems to be. Never knew of such rituals too in marriages, the donkey dick one was hilarious. On the Atul Disha front or the Vikram-Isha one, I can understand why u do not want to shift the spotlight now from Supriya. It makes sense that way and keeps the story progressing along at a good speed, otherwise if you talk about the side characters, the focus and interest level will reduce. But do give some closure to those characters in an Epilogue if you can as well.