Hey Harry, I just wanted to say something from the heart…
Your stories have sneak into my mind and settle there, unfolding layer by layer. You don’t just write, you connect. You make me care about people I’ve never met, places I’ve never been, and feelings I didn’t know I needed to feel, there’s something about the way you build your worlds and shape your characters that feels so raw, honest, and beautifully human, and it’s that authenticity that makes your writing unforgettable. You’ve mastered the art of seduction—not just of bodies, but of minds. Every chapter pumping with intensity, drawing readers into a world where danger and desire dance in a perfect rhythm.
What I admire most is your fearlessness. You explore the raw edges of emotion and intimacy with elegance and never shying away from the shadows. You make thrillers feel intimate, and erotica feel profound. That’s a rare gift.
I hope you know how much your words matter. Not just to me, but to anyone lucky enough to read them. Keep going. Keep creating. You have a gift, and it’s changing people to see the outcome of their desires whether it is about Hemant to had a beautiful peaceful life or it is about Sonarika to have the thrill of her life or any other character who are having their own thrill by following their own devil.
Yes in this story all are the Devils, each one of them wants their own world to rule on it, the title of the story "LOVE SEX AND WAR PART 1: AGE OF DARKNESS" is just made it point (but if may i suggest you shall remove the "part 1" from title, write it as whole without breaking it in parts, just a suggestion).
What a wonderful dedicated readers you have got here, I agree with them all no one is in wrong here, all are right in their own way. Some defer, lash, vent their anger, suggest on the story, is their right to do so and from that right am also expressing myself here, your story is the reason I registered again.
Do not destroy the character of Sonarika that you built like a strong woman or the Hemant that you built like a caring and loveable person of everyone around, in building the improve version of themselves, Same goes for other also like Mehgna. If you do so then it will take out the charm that made me pull towards your writing, it is just a suggestion from a fan that's all.
Yours truly with love
Mav
Your stories have sneak into my mind and settle there, unfolding layer by layer. You don’t just write, you connect. You make me care about people I’ve never met, places I’ve never been, and feelings I didn’t know I needed to feel, there’s something about the way you build your worlds and shape your characters that feels so raw, honest, and beautifully human, and it’s that authenticity that makes your writing unforgettable. You’ve mastered the art of seduction—not just of bodies, but of minds. Every chapter pumping with intensity, drawing readers into a world where danger and desire dance in a perfect rhythm.
What I admire most is your fearlessness. You explore the raw edges of emotion and intimacy with elegance and never shying away from the shadows. You make thrillers feel intimate, and erotica feel profound. That’s a rare gift.
I hope you know how much your words matter. Not just to me, but to anyone lucky enough to read them. Keep going. Keep creating. You have a gift, and it’s changing people to see the outcome of their desires whether it is about Hemant to had a beautiful peaceful life or it is about Sonarika to have the thrill of her life or any other character who are having their own thrill by following their own devil.
Yes in this story all are the Devils, each one of them wants their own world to rule on it, the title of the story "LOVE SEX AND WAR PART 1: AGE OF DARKNESS" is just made it point (but if may i suggest you shall remove the "part 1" from title, write it as whole without breaking it in parts, just a suggestion).
What a wonderful dedicated readers you have got here, I agree with them all no one is in wrong here, all are right in their own way. Some defer, lash, vent their anger, suggest on the story, is their right to do so and from that right am also expressing myself here, your story is the reason I registered again.
Do not destroy the character of Sonarika that you built like a strong woman or the Hemant that you built like a caring and loveable person of everyone around, in building the improve version of themselves, Same goes for other also like Mehgna. If you do so then it will take out the charm that made me pull towards your writing, it is just a suggestion from a fan that's all.
Yours truly with love
Mav
❤️(-zєαℓ ιη яєα∂ιηg, мαу ωяιтє ѕσмє∂αу-)❤️
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