Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

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Well , this chapter is about grief , which is why Vikram is kept in the backburner. Sonarika is being overwhelmed with the nasty amount of loss she is facing here at this moment. The reason Sonarika is ignoring Vikram is not because she dislikes him now , but because she is shielding him from her sins. She said it to Vikram when she left Jabalpur , that she believes she is Hemant's biggest betrayer and it should be her to take whatever punishment she will get. Her not answering Vikram is not her circling her stance here , but rather keeping him away from the chaos that has erupted in her life. In a way , she is protecting Vikram from Hemant. Also this is her accepting her own mistake , her reasoning will come later.


Another factor that plays in is Sonarika's expectations.

She expected that Hemant will lash out , throw a tantrum , chastise her for her sins. Then everything will fall apart and she can pick the pieces in her grief. But the opposite happened as Hemant suffered a stroke , went silent , completely cold on her. In a way her confession not just broke Hemant , it killed him in a way. And then the realization that Hemant deeply cared for their family and loved her even now to the point he had a surprise planned for all of them with a new house made Sonarika see the extent of her betrayal. Which is why Sonarika showcased her guilt and heartbreak rather than be a completely ignorant woman who will still swoon over Vikram. Her reaction and response to Hemant is an implication that the Sonarika that was in love in Hemant is still there with her. She just has to find out where her future leads.

her exceptation from hemant what i deduces is that he will accept her or forgive her, why? because of his friendship with the cuck friend & the encounters afterwards, if we go back and read the chapters again, we will allegedly say this she thought hemant also a weak person and she can handel him or i must say manipulate him

Nowhere have I implied or stated that Hemant is someone "Perfect" , matter of fact he is far from perfect. He is a man who has only made terrible decisions after one , and half of it was because of his trauma. As Hemant confessed to Sharon , he admits his mistakes knowing that him wasting his life resulted in Sonarika choosing someone else. (this is not hemant this is the MK talking here) In a way admitting that he didn't just betray Sonarika , he betrayed himself. His life and family with Sonarika was supposed to be a second chance in life , but when you have unfinished business and old wounds that are still fresh , you tend to return to that same world. And Hemant did just that , not to betray his family , but to finally get closure from his past and become true to himself. And this is the truth Hemant has accepted. Also he is not leaving Sonarika because he is guilty of his own sins or don't love her anymore. He is leaving her simply because he believes she loves Vikram and not him anymore.


I don't intend to show that only one character in the wrong , which is not true. I envisioned this story with deeply flawed characters. The core narrative is always been that Sonarika and Hemant were mean't for each other in their true selves but they both changed to start fresh. Which was a mistake for one and a blessing for other. Hemant is no saint , neither is Sonarika. But the truth is they both weren't true to each other , and the ironic part is their truth would've been incredibly compatible to each other and no third person could've came in between them.

Well , I get your point. But Sonarika's stance is there for a reason. Plus not to forget , Sonarika always had that submissive side in her. She became the strong and confident woman she is because of Hemant. And the evidence is there in the sex scenes , when you read Vikram and Sonarika in their passionate moments , most times Vikram is dominating her , and Sonarika likes it. But when it comes to Hemant and Sonarika , there is a passage of control between them , sometimes its Sonarika who initiates and has fun with Hemant,  while sometimes its Hemant. But Sonarika always had one frustration with Hemant , he always held back. But Vikram didn't , which is why her physical relation with Vikram felt more connecting as Vikram was willing to show his true self to her , while Hemant didn't. And thus their physical acts formed a deeper connection between them , but this also resulted in Sonarika loosing some of her own identity of a confident and strong woman she was. In a way , her relationship with Vikram is also a downgrade as she is also becoming her true self and not improving herself.



And even now I still say Yes , she still has some love for Hemant. If she didn't love Hemant , she wouldn't initiate sex with him and actually enjoy it , yes she feels guilty and pain , but deep down she is always grateful and in debt to Hemant for fixing her life. In a way it was goodbye sex but if she didn't love him , she wouldn't have been physical with him. The arc right now is just Sonarika accepting her sins which is why we didn't see her reasoning. This will indeed happen soon and we will see Sonarika to finally come clean. As for the house twist , he made it clear he was planning that as a surprise like many couplle does , the problem was he was too late for that. Hemant only wanted time to give Sonarika a life full of love and togetherness and he was this close. But he was unaware that Sonarika had drifted away in the sea of her pleasures. He only revealed it now because he wanted the divorce proceedings to go clean without another issue. Its not negligence in Hemant's matter , the problem was that Sonarika wanted more from Hemant , but he only gave her a promise for a wholesome future. But sadly , that future took its time coming and Sonarika faltered in her path unaware and now in regret realizing that future was just a cusp away. The dream house they envisioned together is now a relic of a shattered dream.


As for his switch in character , that is basically the result of Hemant's trust being broken. He trusted Sonarika blindly , never expected her of all people to cheat on him. This not only killed the innocence and kindness in him , but also broke his own perspective , making him realize that this ten years worth of starting over was a mistake. As for the "husband being hailed" well I took this narration for a fresh approach rather than portray the husband as the "loser" in the story and have the wife being gifted reward after reward. Its like Hemant said in the chapter itself , he inadvertadly will end up the looser in their separation story as Sonarika is only going to gain while Hemant will loose everything. Just think it in a general perspective , if divorce happens right now. Sonarika will move away , start a new life with Vikram , he will make her a part of his empire, make her quit TANISHQ and be part of his family business. She goes from a COM of a company to someone who leads a business empire. While Hemant will loose his time with Karan , completely loose his relation to Anjali , live in a house that no longer is part of a family dream he once had , leaving himself in his own chaos of unfinished business and trauma for the rest of his life.


On paper this can happen too. Regardless , both of them are loosing something at this point. Just the grieving process will be different than other stories.

Hi Harry 

Thanks for the wonderful story. I know wat is this platform for . surprisingly this story gave a new wave and gives a new definition f art. 


you made me registered to this site just to add comments in this story. Never expected I will do this. 

I enjoy reading others comments and your response. I respect their views and also like to add my perspective;  we cannot weigh sonarika adultery and hemants past in the same measure. 

What sonarika did is breaking trust with the love she got it. Hemant is trying so much to make the family safe , happy and progressive . 

The flaws of Hemant is understandable it is capability issue . but the flaws of Sonarika is not capability it is commitment . She dint do it as accident , she got addicted to the pleasure.

I understand Sonarika is heavily influenced by Meghna and Vikram. but breaking commitment is her choice she needs to pursue punishment. Hemant could have also tempted to tamanna or disha, but he didn't do it. I could have some what agreed if he is lousy, ignoring the family commitments, not taking care of his son. but here he honored all of it with full heart and working on the future for the family. His job is risky, Sonarika knows his past , being in army he is having bad dreams . he is tring to handle the situation on his own. he hided the pain not pleasure , to safeguard the peace of the house.  

He is not wrong, he with-held himself from sonarika because he wanted to treat her well. if Sonarika missed something , she should have communicated . She atleast should have confessed , she needs more intimacy, spice or encouraged Hemant  . she dint come clean to Hemant when she kissed Vikram the first time. she continued making mistake . Why did she reveal now  , it become regular that she forget the real home.she didn't feel pity for Hemanth or Vikram. she wantes end the chaos so she can focus.  She is coming true for herself to choose WHAT SHE WANT not out of remorse. then this is not forgivable. 

As I said Sonarika joining back to Vikram or Hemanth eitherways may not b a ideal situation. it doesn't matter of anything about Michael to Sonarika . Hemanth took good care of her and she betrayed ; She should feel the pain and Hemant should heal. 
Hemant is also flawed , but as i mentioned earlier not the right equation to weigh both in same plates. 

and it is ok for me or may many more people expect Hemant to be a hero. reason the site is erotica and most of the stories make male as bull or cuckold this STORY stands different talking positively man can also let go. 

sona also having the same expectation hahahahaha........

Hemant may be a sinner of the past before stepping into the relationship and it resurfaced again. That and seeing as a husband is 2 different things. as a partner he is 100 % . Sonarika is not the same. to be honest Sonarika is built due to Hemant. sonarika didnt have a conversation on the missing piece of him and her life here. but last episode is the grief of her cheating. as i mentioned before hemanth flaws are different and dangerous.on the other side sonarika adultrous cannot be equated with it. If Michael dint exist and hemanth is still not improving can we normalise what sonarika did is right. a man can happily bleed but not accept the adultery of the wife. Hemanth as been 100% to the marriage, the commitment , she didnt . we cannot reason the same . i think people are able to connect here with hemanth because of his character to the family. if he is baadsha outside is just a drama of entertainment. but when hemanth is wounded it affects all of our emotions. if michael dint exist or he is , what sonarika did is wrong. instead of sonarika if hemanth cheated , even then it is wrong. though this platform offers the thrill fun. this story is different in a way.

Why was he balanced , is it because he is stronger , no . he is balanced because he didnt want to hurt her but the pain of her choosing someone , if you go through the episode i can see he didnt name call her. i really loved the arc of this person. so grounded its hard and most of the times most of the mens in the society who grown up with high responsibility are like this. i have seen , so it connected with me.


am looking forward to see how emotionally hemanth is getting healed and michael is going away from his life more than sonarika. 

Dear Herman you explain it well enough man, it was all about the balanced character no more no less, hemant been hemant and sona been sona

 

Sona :- I fucked him because He was there , and you did not ....... 

Hemant :- Yes , Its my fault .   


The End .

And every body is Happy and Chill too .

*Peace out*

for deen 


been immature is the blessing that only few enjoys it don't do it Ep, just don't...........

man, the so-called mature brain is so fucked up that cannot handle the reaction of a normal human being, why she don't get the chance why she don't fight to protect her family why she can't explain the circumstances of her betrayal, why she fucks around while you are working for the future of the family, why you hold back that make me betray you, why are you friend with the cuck do you also wants to be the one than i made you you deserves this hemant you truly deserves this

hahahahahahahah...................


oh man oh man i can't hold my laugh while writing, it is not the rocket science that can't be understand here, sona try to talk to hemant numerous time as shown in chapter 20, it was hemant that shut her completely why? because he got hurt from the person he love and trusted the most, every reasoning was throw-out the window when the situation like this arises, she just wants some kind of punishment to equal the balance sheets of her remorse, but she gotten none. as there was the perfect scenario where she could burst out and talk to the hemant about her doings (but let be clear here that she was already prepared to move on from hemant as she already spoken about her so fighting to protect her family is just the dream that she never watching, she already knows all about it but the rapidness and the cold and calm behaviour of hemant made her scared and for her for her lover also) at the attorney office, but after hearing about the plan and working about the so called sissy husband of her is working his ass to fulfil their dream the point where she truly got broken, earlier she was just dealing the situation as the worse scenario of the life phase.

that is the drawback of the matureness not able to read the room, it was not about who is right and who is wrong here, it was always about the situation and the reasons of the situation that the characters in the situation are being drawing, it develops the further plot of the story to continue.

and about the so called remorse of sona if she was already prepared is not just because of the love that she left for the hemant it was coming from the character of the sona who knows that hemant had been hurt because of her, she hurts the beautiful person that she ever encountered in her life, even her new love vikram was nowhere near to the personility of hemant. this is the reason of her feeling so much guilty and so much drama


remember it were us who knows what is hemant capable of not Sona she known her hemant and hemant known her sona, the griefing episode was perfect even the kiss was not overreached, it was the vurneble situation for hemant, that what about sona was she not going to the vikram? man it was already explain above her guilt was so much that she just wan't to suffer more to ease herself, means she was hurting herself because her hemant didn't lashout on her he was suffering on his own then how can she go on the same road which make her hemant like this.

it just a basic human nature of immature being   who reads between the lines

Regards
Ep 
(emmature person)