19-08-2025, 06:04 PM
(19-08-2025, 12:37 PM)Morbius Wrote: Hii mai ek silent reader tha khas aapki iss kahani pe comment karne ke liye ID banayi hai
Last 2-3 week se ye kahani suru ki thi aur jo 2 kahani ka refrence diya tha starting mai uss mai se ek kahani "The Innocent wife" se maine xossip par kahani padha suru ki thi aur wo kahani mere dil ke kafi kareeb thi aur aapki iss kahani mai uske jaisa hi maza aa raha aur Recently mai ye meri Fav kahani hai.
Apke likhne ka andaz kafi reality ke karib hai aur jaisa apne kaha aur maine baki logo ke comment mai dekha Supriya ek massum ladki hai par ye kahani padh ke uske liye gaye faisle se logo ko uske prati nafarat paida karti hai jaisa ussne apne pati ke sath kiya wo sab padh ke mujhe bhi kafi dukh hota hai
But aapne character devlopment bhi kafi ache se kiya ki kaise Atul aur uske beech Sab dheere dheere khatam hone laga aur supriya phle mazbur hui aur ab wo maze le rahi kisi aur ke pyar mai. Lekin ab wo apne hi faisle mai uljhi hui hai.
Last Update meri umeed se kafi alag aur intresting tha Abdul ka character apne bataya tha ki grey hai so sab confirm nahi thhe ki uske aur Supriya ke beech kuch hoga ki nahi.
Meri req hai ki Apni health ka dhyan rakhiye ga aur iss kahani ko puri zaroor kariyega
Bohot bohot dhanyavaad aapka… aur aapne khaaskar comment karne ke liye id banayi uske liye bhi..
Hopefully main ye kahani poori kar payu… main is kahani se jude kuch aur patro ke baare mein bhi kahani likhna chahungi… kuch kahani hai mere mind mein… sochungi ki unhe isi mein likh du ya baad mein alag se shuru karu…