Adultery "సంతానం కోసం"

[Rishabh1]

is this a translated story? writing is bit off, apologies if that came off as rude! I meant everything is being described in third person or by third person even though you established that lead character is telling us the story! hope it makes sense! It is an interesting plot and I wanted to give it a try but had to give up due to lack of cohesiveness in narration. hope you would take this as constructive criticism and try to improve, great effort and thank you. it's pure curiosity, if you have difficulties with writing in telugu we can happily adjust our expectations that's all.