18-08-2025, 10:36 PM
(13-08-2025, 05:41 PM)khemucha Wrote: Nice development.
You seem to be very fond of this raand Supriya, protecting her for ever from facing any real consequences for her selfish actions. True, she lost Kriti's friendship, but did she care. Utla usko sunnane lagi, the bitch. Only good thing there was at least now Kriti is free of that Rahul character.
Aur Atul pe kaise jhapti thi kulta ek seedhe saadhe sawal pe. She projects her own degenerate thought process on others. And after finding the truth of D, not remorse, no self reflection, just ruthless and selfish pursuit of her own desires and ambitions. Her judgement is totally clouded and she is willing to be a kept woman with a figleaf of a fake marriage, knowing very well that Vikram will not break his marriage. What does that make her, his floozie in London.
You seem to be showing Vikram having genuine love for her, but he still does not want her to disclose anything to her husband. That's conradictory. kuchh to gocha hai. I hope bahut bada gocha ho.
Waise usko ek baar Isha ke gundo ke hawale karna chahiye. Justice will be served. Par aap ki chaheti hai woh to. No Papa ki Pari has ever been so pampered as you pamper your Supriya devi.
And you are right, any dalliance with Iqbal will have no affect on the story plot. In fact it will disturb it.. because Iqbal is playing a very good role here - the unquestioning support. A dalliance will disturb this equation. And with the maid also, another supporter. She seems possessive about Iqbal. So make your own call. All the more reasons for letting Isha's henchmen have her. Kuch readers ki IR ki chah kucch to shaant hogi.
I normally don't comment on other's comments, but I have to call out the double standards of many who chide others for not wanting the story to go the typical IR way. The trail of their comments on other threads give their game away. Arre bhai, some people get their rocks of on a mm-hf IR, some get it off on a hm-mf IR, some don't want either, and some like sexypreeti like all action, no matter the IR(I respect such even-handed debauchery approach and this user is one of those who wants to see people fucking no matter what, so this part does not apply). Jisko jo bolna hi bolne do. Doosron pe katash na karo ... thats all I say. Writer wahi kare jo uksa man kare. Writer ke alawa koi bhi thread ka thekedar na bane ... kitna achha hoga. Agar aap kisi ki mansikta pe sawal uthate hain to yaad rahiye, woh sawal aapki maansikta bhi darshata hai. So best to just leave mansikta out of the picture.
And how can I end my comment without my favourite plug. Aarti Bhabhi phir kab aa rahi hain. She lit up the scene. Need more of her ... and Jai.
Waise aapne pehli baar Atul ka kuch character dihkaya, the way he brushed Supriya's wild allegations aside. Are you saving him to be the ultimate spanner in Vikram's plans and Supriya's ultimate downfall? That would be unexpected but interesting.
Kuchh saalon pehale ek kahani pahdi thi - "Life of Mrs. Shailaja - Sleeping with the wrong men". Similar saga - young wife with loose morals. destroys home. Gets husband murdered. Gets it on with her father as a girl behind her mother's back destroying her mother's marriage, marries rich love-stricken fool in order to parade a father for her incestuous child sired by her father, fucked by a gold-digging employee who becomes her lover(and goes on to kill her husband), keeps fucking him even after finding out truth of husband's death, abandoned by lover who is now more interested in fucking her mother and her daughter as property papers are in their names, falls into lover's uncle lap who is a gangster, fucked by new lover's associates and there is even a nephew/son-in-law fuck thrown in somewhere. Ends up getting fucked by own illegitimate son, who has become a monster and becomes his keep. Sorry depressing end to the saga of lives destroyed by loose morals. Lets see yahan kya hota.
Haha... I enjoyed reading your comments.
Everyone sorry for the delay in posting, last 2 weekends par kuch na kuch tha, aur fir meri tabiyat bhi kharab thi. I am sorry for the delay in posting. Hopefully I will try to post sooner.


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