18-08-2025, 05:03 PM
(17-08-2025, 02:05 PM)Harry Jordan Wrote: I appreciate your nice words and vice versa. But I will always welcome criticism as long as its not over the line or uncomfortalbe. And for me , in this story , not a single reader have overstepped it , they respected my work and voiced their constructive criticism in their words.
And I welcome all of them , because I would like to hear what their perspectives are or how they envision their mind when they read my story. But I will make it very clear right now , readers never influence my story because I have already completed the base plot of part 1. Even while typing now , I am in brink of completing part 2 of this saga , the conclusion of it all. The reason I take time is because I want to polish the story before bringing it to you which is why I do weekly updates. So you can relax if your concern is readers are influencing my story because I already know where the story will go and how it will end.
So I acknowledge your concern , but I can assure you , you don't have to worry about others influencing me.
the reason I am sharing this story here is simply because I myself am fed up off many stories that follow this theme often end up ruining the character that is into that kink , turning a kink lifestyle into a masochist porn. That is something I wholeheartedly do not prefer , my story is not a revolution of sort to push some "narrative"
Quote:you can't decide on this, it solely depends on the outcome of the readers and their acceptance
Quote: Its purely entertainment , hell , entertainment to jerk off for that matter!! LOL!
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Quote:I also acknowledge that all of my readers will like my characters , and its OK. I understnad , this is after all a story , and stories can be subjective. But I must encourage everyone , if there is any criticism , it should be pointed against me. Not other's opinions.
Regardless , I hope all of you continue enjoying the story and at the end of the day that is what actually matters
PROMISING YOU A WONDERFUL JOURNEY AHEAD BY YOURS TRULY
HARRY JORDAN
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and for other matters, i can write a comprehensive reply on every point with the counter from the story itself but let's bury the hatchet, for me reading is a habit not the source of entertainment. yes, i agreed that erotica is more entertaining than any other videos around on the net, because the scope and canvas of it is like an ocean you can sail on any direction, but it will be frustrating when you are forced to sail on the particular current only.
let me give you some of the genuine female writer whose stories are pioneer and i love them
Bdrew86
Indian_Princess
komalrani
sexypreeti
rupanita
shiprat
and many more, sorry i'm not able to recall the names of other right mow
the depth of the female character they paint on the canvas is always going to be differ with respect to the male author or vice versa, but there will always a gap it doesn't mean that there is any difference with the flow of the character.
so i hope you and the others enjoy them as well
i prefer to be a man of few words so will end here.
kudos & regards
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