Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

Well , I wanted to write this comment earlier , but i refrained after reading Harry's explanation about the story . I got the gist of the story , My focus was too much on Sex part not on the characters . The Sex or affairs was an element of the story . Now i consider the sex things as minor element . 


The story going great , Harry .

I am too excited for the next update . 

Kudos to you . 

   

*Peace out*

Wow that was a lot LOL , but regardless happy to see you appreciate my story. I will just share my mindset regarding this without spoiling the story.


You have some valid criticism regarding the characters and yes I agree to some. But one thing I don't is Hemant's character to be innocent here. Because at the end of the day , we must expect the dark truth that Hemant too has hid his true self from Sonarika. Sonarika still believes that Hemant is just suffering from a PTSD from his army days , she has no idea about Michael King and his legacy of brutal justice. In a way that is also betrayal but Hemant too has his reasoning , as he was running away from his trauma and past and now even after accepting it he is unwilling , because he doesn't want it to be his legacy. His ultimate goal in life was always to put Michael King to rest by avenging his past and finding closure in it so that he can be committed as a family man again , but that is gone out the window due to Sonarika cheating on him. Now his commitment only revolves around his son.


And even though Sonarika sinned , her reasoning has always been Hemant delaying his moments with her for a future that took time to come. Vikram was there for her in the current while Hemant built a future that she could only imagine. And thus her duality was born. She never ignored Hemant , she made both the men a part of her life. But now , Hemant is drifting away and that is breaking her. Will it affect her character as the aspects that connected with Hemant fade way change her personality? Maybe it will , maybe it won't. Either she can make her errors with Hemant a lesson about her wrongdoings and start fresh with Vikram to not falter. Or she can find her way back to Hemant. After all Hemant is changed , who knows maybe this time he won't hold back LOL!


And yes , action is definitely going to come. My next focus is building a solid action setpiece which will conclude with a character death. And the way I am building it , it will be a spectacle because we will see the birth of a new form that is an amalgamation of Hemant and Michael that merges. The two rings , Garuda and Archangel represent his dual form which will now be forged into one. Michael the Archangel is the past and his brutality will fuel the rage of Garuda in him , making him not just a force of order , but of vengeance as well because now he is not going to back down. His enemies will see him coming and that will have no other choice but to succumb and burn in his flame of hatred!

When Michael and Hemant merges , it will no longer be a warning. It will be MAYHEM!!!