Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

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Well , I wanted to write this comment earlier , but i refrained after reading Harry's explanation about the story . I got the gist of the story , My focus was too much on Sex part not on the characters . The Sex or affairs was an element of the story . Now i consider the sex things as minor element . 

I said this before , I said this again . HEMANT IS 100% innocent here . 

Hemant was Hemant before he met sona , Hemant was Hemant when they met and dated , Hemant was Hemant when they got married . Why the expectation that he is gonna change . She made the choice and Hemant also made the choice . 

They met each other when they were most vulnerable , they helped each other , they grew together and Made a family , TOGETHER . 

Things got complicated . Sona cheated on Hemant not because She was not happy with her marriage , but because VIKRAM was the kind of men she always dreamt of . Adding to the manipulation and the kind of atmosphere she works in ( which i refused earlier but for the sake of the story ) . IF it was Michael King instead of Vikram , She would have fucked him too. Sona here does not loved VIKRAM , For me she loves those kind of Men ( The over sexual stuff messed up this narrative , because its hard to believe after reading her encounter with VIKRAM vs Her Love making with Hemant , That she loves the latter more, But its an Erotica lol ). She thinks Hemant was not Ideal man for her , but the Man she needed but never realizes .  But now she is gonna realize what she has lost . That is why the guilt and pain . if we look She is not losing anything . She can still get her kid and Anjali will understand her, a good amount of money , And with VIKRAM she will get her life back on track and Can have children together (YUCK) , Every damn thing that she did with Hemant and things she did not do . Yes , the guilt of cheating a good man will always be with her but what she will gain simply out weigh what she will lost . But the guilt is because She is loosing Hemant . 

Yes , Earlier my comment was complete opposite . But The situation was not this bad , Hemant was still in her life . All things she said , all the things she confessed , she did because HEMANT was still in her life . Present Sona is Sona because of HEMANT , without him , The we will have different Sona . I would not be surprise if VIKRAM rejects her later . lol . All the things He loves about her , Apart from her wife's resemblance is because of HEMANT . Once he gone , those things will be gone with him too . 

Before I was against the Idea of Sona never loved Hemant , I accused the writer , simply because of written material , but failed to understand the explanation given by him in comments . That is why my perspective got changed . 

VIKRAM only loves present SONA . Present Sona is Sona because of Hemant . He is the reason behind her success or what ever she achieved in his life . Same for Hemant too . 

So why cheating ? Harry explained very well in comments . I also want to add Because Now they feel they dont need each other , They are stable , They think they Can survive without each other . 

Sona is not to be blamed , But A wife is getting Blamed here , She rightfully deserves to. A husband should not be blamed here . 

There is no justification for cheating , People cheat not because they are unhappy and or they feel ignored , They cheat because they can and want to . Its simple as that . Sona wanted too and she did . Now she is facing the consequences , Its only natural . The whole divorce plot is natural progression any man or women had done the same , Irrespective of Reason , Or explanation why they cheat . Its not gonna make any difference . 

What do you expect ? Sona's confessing that The whole reason i cheated because You were weak / You were not giving me enough attention / No sex for months / No attention on family . Okay accepted . So after She fucked Vikram , Did all the problems vanish ? Her life got better ? While she had  having her fun , Hemant was working for his family . He was not having fun , He was not having affair , He told everything to her , Every Plan. Why he was away , She knew everything . Never objected and Never took any action . Never fought him  . When she was getting fucked in Bali , He was  taking care of their family . So its not justify her action . So its much better to just accept that she cheated because she was tempted by Him , Or He reminds of him her past . An honest confession without blaming him or her marriage or her present life . 

A cheating is itself a confession/statement/Reason everything . 

Getting ignored , No sex , or Sexless marriage , No attention , even if we take it to extreme , like a partner completely ghosting his family , Still fell short for any justification for Cheating . There are lots of other way to deal which results in positive out come . Cheating or betrayal makes matter worst . People will say getting fucked makes them to escape reality , Yes but Tomorrow in morning everything will be same . Yes it will energize you , makes you feel wanted , but still in Gutter . Plus not you are cheater too . 
No matter what you do it will give advantage to other partner even if they are abusive partner . That is how its work . and 

This is same argument given by Pseudo Feminist . And calling something Pseudo Feminist does not make one Anti- Feminism . ( I am not being Political here , any one who feel any offend , I apologize )  

Two wrongs do not make it wright  . Even if Hemant 100% wrong here , Still not justify the action or the reasoning or anything for Sona Cheating . Hemant incompetence could have also be resulted in Divorce / Separation / Ugly Fight / Etc etc but Her fucking VIkram again and again and again could  never be the one . 

The Chastity/Faithfulness/Trust should not come with list of chores one should in order to expect it from other partner . This is not Gender Specific , This is General one . Husband , wife , Man , women . 

Oh you ignored me , Now i am going to fuck my Handsome boss . Oh you are not giving me sex , Now i have to fuck my beautiful secretary or collogues  . There are much better alternatives . 

This is why All the blame on her , She is not bad human but she committed a mistake and now she is facing the consequences , Its only natural . Hemant reaction and his action is normal . Him thinking He was not enough of man , again Natural and Normal . Him regretting again , Normal  . 

How come these action can be seen As Heroics ? Its a Normal reaction . 

Its not a Gender thing . Its very General one . 

IF we switch the character , Hemant would have received the same kind of Comment and Sona would have also received the same kind of comment , Would then she be seen as HEROIC or Hero worshipper Character , No It is what any one would have done . Its very Normal . 

Again , People may disagree, They have every right to be . Hemant is no Saint here , He is not 100% right here , But A husband is 100% innocent here , There is nothing he could have done to stop her wife from cheating . If changing your physique and dance like hritik , having charm like Dhoom's JOhn abraham fuck like James deen  is what take your wife to refrain from cheating then it is not marriage its an agreement . Loyalty should not be demanded. There should  be no Price or Condition on Loyalty . Its not Transaction . Give or Take . ( Han gyan chod diya thoda    ). 

Also I am not saying that one should stay forever in these kind of marriages , Just divorce / separation / Marriage Counseling / Therapy many options .. If she was an rural women i can understand her but she is not , She is very capable women who can take any legal help very easily . That is why The Entire Blame on Her , Only Her . Again , I am not making comment on her character , her action , Just the Cheating part , Not on the Reason why she cheated , But Only She is the one who cheated and she deserves to face the consequences . And she bravely told him the truth . There is reason behind this . 

Even though I dont agree on whole AIRPORT Confession scene , Where Michael was blaming himself , But for the sake of the story and the character development it was needed and  acceptable .  

It took time for me to get the What "Flawed Characters" mean .

Yes , The last chapter could have been better , Sona's feeling , her guilt , her love for Hemant , The idea of living a life without Hemant , etc etc . But then again , Hemant was not in the state nor Sona . But I hope It will eventually comes out , Slowly Slowly ,  in further update .

I still dont want couple to split . But if Sona confesses instead of accepting her mistake , It will further destroy their relationship . Her love for Vikram is not Real . Michael King is gonna prove this ( Spoiler to ni de diya   ). Which will further make her realize that she also does not love Michael King . Its kind of Thesis and Anti Thesis , Situation . VIkram was Thesis and Micheal King is gonna be Anti Thesis , and when they collied We will get Synthesis which will be the Man she is in love  .

So , Even though , The divorce part felt rush , but Them living together till divorce is Solid plot and justify the Divorce Plot, setting for future events  . 

Till now , Everything is fine . 

But If Sona again gonna hook up with VIKRAM or even Kiss him . I am gonna  done with this Story ( Because its gonna destroy the whole character of Sona ,then  Nothing can redeem her character , she took enough for the plot lol . The whole flawed character thing would be waste  .  I would be happy to be read whole story without Hemant and Sona character , Only the Michael king and Underworld' story i am gonna read ) .

( Note :- You can agree or disagree with me , It is fine . It is just a perspective , I  might be right or RIGHT   , But again , Its all for fun . I always said this It is all for fun , Some comment i deliberately make just to play with writer hahaha . Harry's response always appreciative and Very explanatory in nature . He is master of his craft and also very good with people . ) 



This time I have VALID CRITISIM for Harry :- Enough with your Big talk , We need SOME ACTION , WE NEED BLOOD . WE ARE GETTING THIRSTY,  Bawa . ( also dont make him Invincible during fights ,  Make him bleed ) . Also , Please increase dialogue between them . I know its gonna increase the length of Chapters but I miss reading dialogues .

One thing do we get to hear his Child hood , Past life , His parents ? 

Also I want to see , How Sona would react seeing Michael's wounds and If He comes home bleeding or His face with bandage and his wounded knuckle . I just wanna see how she is gonna react to all this.

Just think , Michael king after a brutal fight  comes home and see Sona , with adrenaline pumping through his veins ,anger , fear , and the testosterones ..................  

Hope you have already written something like this , If not Please thoda sa dekh lena .  

The story going great , Harry .

I am too excited for the next update . 

Kudos to you . 

   

*Peace out*

Dean you spelled it right mate ... Sona did sona thing ...... For that u cnt blame hemant for it... Atleast hemant stayed true to his marriage life..... Hemant maybe hooker before sona....but he stayed true to his marriage value..... ( Except his dream) Having a better life than today..... That dream cost his family   I believe that wht man ..do....be better than today... I started reading this just bcoz.. this is story is different other.... Cuck ...cuck.. cuck..... Sissy... (Jerk of) And leave...This site reader like that kinda story....  Hemant is no saint but  wetted his goods for sona.... Harry mentioned sona character is the trigger hemant need. To become Micheal king.... And she did it.rightly so....all thoughts divorce charpter bit rushed i like that hemant is cold n ruthless...now.. no more caring....sentimental... Story is gng great..... Keep it up.....m good day 
         

     Peace out...