18-08-2025, 06:06 AM
Well , I wanted to write this comment earlier , but i refrained after reading Harry's explanation about the story . I got the gist of the story , My focus was too much on Sex part not on the characters . The Sex or affairs was an element of the story . Now i consider the sex things as minor element .
I said this before , I said this again . HEMANT IS 100% innocent here .
Hemant was Hemant before he met sona , Hemant was Hemant when they met and dated , Hemant was Hemant when they got married . Why the expectation that he is gonna change . She made the choice and Hemant also made the choice .
They met each other when they were most vulnerable , they helped each other , they grew together and Made a family , TOGETHER .
Things got complicated . Sona cheated on Hemant not because She was not happy with her marriage , but because VIKRAM was the kind of men she always dreamt of . Adding to the manipulation and the kind of atmosphere she works in ( which i refused earlier but for the sake of the story ) . IF it was Michael King instead of Vikram , She would have fucked him too. Sona here does not loved VIKRAM , For me she loves those kind of Men ( The over sexual stuff messed up this narrative , because its hard to believe after reading her encounter with VIKRAM vs Her Love making with Hemant , That she loves the latter more, But its an Erotica lol ). She thinks Hemant was not Ideal man for her , but the Man she needed but never realizes . But now she is gonna realize what she has lost . That is why the guilt and pain . if we look She is not losing anything . She can still get her kid and Anjali will understand her, a good amount of money , And with VIKRAM she will get her life back on track and Can have children together (YUCK) , Every damn thing that she did with Hemant and things she did not do . Yes , the guilt of cheating a good man will always be with her but what she will gain simply out weigh what she will lost . But the guilt is because She is loosing Hemant .
Yes , Earlier my comment was complete opposite . But The situation was not this bad , Hemant was still in her life . All things she said , all the things she confessed , she did because HEMANT was still in her life . Present Sona is Sona because of HEMANT , without him , The we will have different Sona . I would not be surprise if VIKRAM rejects her later . lol . All the things He loves about her , Apart from her wife's resemblance is because of HEMANT . Once he gone , those things will be gone with him too .
Before I was against the Idea of Sona never loved Hemant , I accused the writer , simply because of written material , but failed to understand the explanation given by him in comments . That is why my perspective got changed .
VIKRAM only loves present SONA . Present Sona is Sona because of Hemant . He is the reason behind her success or what ever she achieved in his life . Same for Hemant too .
So why cheating ? Harry explained very well in comments . I also want to add Because Now they feel they dont need each other , They are stable , They think they Can survive without each other .
Sona is not to be blamed , But A wife is getting Blamed here , She rightfully deserves to. A husband should not be blamed here .
There is no justification for cheating , People cheat not because they are unhappy and or they feel ignored , They cheat because they can and want to . Its simple as that . Sona wanted too and she did . Now she is facing the consequences , Its only natural . The whole divorce plot is natural progression any man or women had done the same , Irrespective of Reason , Or explanation why they cheat . Its not gonna make any difference .
What do you expect ? Sona's confessing that The whole reason i cheated because You were weak / You were not giving me enough attention / No sex for months / No attention on family . Okay accepted . So after She fucked Vikram , Did all the problems vanish ? Her life got better ? While she had having her fun , Hemant was working for his family . He was not having fun , He was not having affair , He told everything to her , Every Plan. Why he was away , She knew everything . Never objected and Never took any action . Never fought him . When she was getting fucked in Bali , He was taking care of their family . So its not justify her action . So its much better to just accept that she cheated because she was tempted by Him , Or He reminds of him her past . An honest confession without blaming him or her marriage or her present life .
A cheating is itself a confession/statement/Reason everything .
Getting ignored , No sex , or Sexless marriage , No attention , even if we take it to extreme , like a partner completely ghosting his family , Still fell short for any justification for Cheating . There are lots of other way to deal which results in positive out come . Cheating or betrayal makes matter worst . People will say getting fucked makes them to escape reality , Yes but Tomorrow in morning everything will be same . Yes it will energize you , makes you feel wanted , but still in Gutter . Plus not you are cheater too .
No matter what you do it will give advantage to other partner even if they are abusive partner . That is how its work . and
This is same argument given by Pseudo Feminist . And calling something Pseudo Feminist does not make one Anti- Feminism . ( I am not being Political here , any one who feel any offend , I apologize )
Two wrongs do not make it wright . Even if Hemant 100% wrong here , Still not justify the action or the reasoning or anything for Sona Cheating . Hemant incompetence could have also be resulted in Divorce / Separation / Ugly Fight / Etc etc but Her fucking VIkram again and again and again could never be the one .
The Chastity/Faithfulness/Trust should not come with list of chores one should in order to expect it from other partner . This is not Gender Specific , This is General one . Husband , wife , Man , women .
Oh you ignored me , Now i am going to fuck my Handsome boss . Oh you are not giving me sex , Now i have to fuck my beautiful secretary or collogues . There are much better alternatives .
This is why All the blame on her , She is not bad human but she committed a mistake and now she is facing the consequences , Its only natural . Hemant reaction and his action is normal . Him thinking He was not enough of man , again Natural and Normal . Him regretting again , Normal .
How come these action can be seen As Heroics ? Its a Normal reaction .
Its not a Gender thing . Its very General one .
IF we switch the character , Hemant would have received the same kind of Comment and Sona would have also received the same kind of comment , Would then she be seen as HEROIC or Hero worshipper Character , No It is what any one would have done . Its very Normal .
Again , People may disagree, They have every right to be . Hemant is no Saint here , He is not 100% right here , But A husband is 100% innocent here , There is nothing he could have done to stop her wife from cheating . If changing your physique and dance like hritik , having charm like Dhoom's JOhn abraham fuck like James deen is what take your wife to refrain from cheating then it is not marriage its an agreement . Loyalty should not be demanded. There should be no Price or Condition on Loyalty . Its not Transaction . Give or Take . ( Han gyan chod diya thoda
).
Also I am not saying that one should stay forever in these kind of marriages , Just divorce / separation / Marriage Counseling / Therapy many options .. If she was an rural women i can understand her but she is not , She is very capable women who can take any legal help very easily . That is why The Entire Blame on Her , Only Her . Again , I am not making comment on her character , her action , Just the Cheating part , Not on the Reason why she cheated , But Only She is the one who cheated and she deserves to face the consequences . And she bravely told him the truth . There is reason behind this .
Even though I dont agree on whole AIRPORT Confession scene , Where Michael was blaming himself , But for the sake of the story and the character development it was needed and acceptable .
It took time for me to get the What "Flawed Characters" mean .
Yes , The last chapter could have been better , Sona's feeling , her guilt , her love for Hemant , The idea of living a life without Hemant , etc etc . But then again , Hemant was not in the state nor Sona . But I hope It will eventually comes out , Slowly Slowly , in further update .
I still dont want couple to split . But if Sona confesses instead of accepting her mistake , It will further destroy their relationship . Her love for Vikram is not Real . Michael King is gonna prove this ( Spoiler to ni de diya
). Which will further make her realize that she also does not love Michael King . Its kind of Thesis and Anti Thesis , Situation . VIkram was Thesis and Micheal King is gonna be Anti Thesis , and when they collied We will get Synthesis which will be the Man she is in love .
So , Even though , The divorce part felt rush , but Them living together till divorce is Solid plot and justify the Divorce Plot, setting for future events . clp); clp);
Till now , Everything is fine .
But If Sona again gonna hook up with VIKRAM or even Kiss him . I am gonna done with this Story ( Because its gonna destroy the whole character of Sona ,then Nothing can redeem her character , she took enough for the plot lol . The whole flawed character thing would be waste . I would be happy to be read whole story without Hemant and Sona character , Only the Michael king and Underworld' story i am gonna read ) .
( Note :- You can agree or disagree with me , It is fine . It is just a perspective , I might be right or RIGHT , But again , Its all for fun . I always said this It is all for fun , Some comment i deliberately make just to play with writer hahaha . Harry's response always appreciative and Very explanatory in nature . He is master of his craft and also very good with people . )
This time I have VALID CRITISIM for Harry :- Enough with your Big talk , We need SOME ACTION , WE NEED BLOOD . WE ARE GETTING THIRSTY, Bawa . ( also dont make him Invincible during fights , Make him bleed ) . Also , Please increase dialogue between them . I know its gonna increase the length of Chapters but I miss reading dialogues .
One thing do we get to hear his Child hood , Past life , His parents ?
Also I want to see , How Sona would react seeing Michael's wounds and If He comes home bleeding or His face with bandage and his wounded knuckle . I just wanna see how she is gonna react to all this.
Just think , Michael king after a brutal fight comes home and see Sona , with adrenaline pumping through his veins ,anger , fear , and the testosterones ..................
Hope you have already written something like this , If not Please thoda sa dekh lena .
The story going great , Harry .
I am too excited for the next update .
Kudos to you .
yr):
*Peace out*
I said this before , I said this again . HEMANT IS 100% innocent here .
Hemant was Hemant before he met sona , Hemant was Hemant when they met and dated , Hemant was Hemant when they got married . Why the expectation that he is gonna change . She made the choice and Hemant also made the choice .
They met each other when they were most vulnerable , they helped each other , they grew together and Made a family , TOGETHER .
Things got complicated . Sona cheated on Hemant not because She was not happy with her marriage , but because VIKRAM was the kind of men she always dreamt of . Adding to the manipulation and the kind of atmosphere she works in ( which i refused earlier but for the sake of the story ) . IF it was Michael King instead of Vikram , She would have fucked him too. Sona here does not loved VIKRAM , For me she loves those kind of Men ( The over sexual stuff messed up this narrative , because its hard to believe after reading her encounter with VIKRAM vs Her Love making with Hemant , That she loves the latter more, But its an Erotica lol ). She thinks Hemant was not Ideal man for her , but the Man she needed but never realizes . But now she is gonna realize what she has lost . That is why the guilt and pain . if we look She is not losing anything . She can still get her kid and Anjali will understand her, a good amount of money , And with VIKRAM she will get her life back on track and Can have children together (YUCK) , Every damn thing that she did with Hemant and things she did not do . Yes , the guilt of cheating a good man will always be with her but what she will gain simply out weigh what she will lost . But the guilt is because She is loosing Hemant .
Yes , Earlier my comment was complete opposite . But The situation was not this bad , Hemant was still in her life . All things she said , all the things she confessed , she did because HEMANT was still in her life . Present Sona is Sona because of HEMANT , without him , The we will have different Sona . I would not be surprise if VIKRAM rejects her later . lol . All the things He loves about her , Apart from her wife's resemblance is because of HEMANT . Once he gone , those things will be gone with him too .
Before I was against the Idea of Sona never loved Hemant , I accused the writer , simply because of written material , but failed to understand the explanation given by him in comments . That is why my perspective got changed .
VIKRAM only loves present SONA . Present Sona is Sona because of Hemant . He is the reason behind her success or what ever she achieved in his life . Same for Hemant too .
So why cheating ? Harry explained very well in comments . I also want to add Because Now they feel they dont need each other , They are stable , They think they Can survive without each other .
Sona is not to be blamed , But A wife is getting Blamed here , She rightfully deserves to. A husband should not be blamed here .
There is no justification for cheating , People cheat not because they are unhappy and or they feel ignored , They cheat because they can and want to . Its simple as that . Sona wanted too and she did . Now she is facing the consequences , Its only natural . The whole divorce plot is natural progression any man or women had done the same , Irrespective of Reason , Or explanation why they cheat . Its not gonna make any difference .
What do you expect ? Sona's confessing that The whole reason i cheated because You were weak / You were not giving me enough attention / No sex for months / No attention on family . Okay accepted . So after She fucked Vikram , Did all the problems vanish ? Her life got better ? While she had having her fun , Hemant was working for his family . He was not having fun , He was not having affair , He told everything to her , Every Plan. Why he was away , She knew everything . Never objected and Never took any action . Never fought him . When she was getting fucked in Bali , He was taking care of their family . So its not justify her action . So its much better to just accept that she cheated because she was tempted by Him , Or He reminds of him her past . An honest confession without blaming him or her marriage or her present life .
A cheating is itself a confession/statement/Reason everything .
Getting ignored , No sex , or Sexless marriage , No attention , even if we take it to extreme , like a partner completely ghosting his family , Still fell short for any justification for Cheating . There are lots of other way to deal which results in positive out come . Cheating or betrayal makes matter worst . People will say getting fucked makes them to escape reality , Yes but Tomorrow in morning everything will be same . Yes it will energize you , makes you feel wanted , but still in Gutter . Plus not you are cheater too .
No matter what you do it will give advantage to other partner even if they are abusive partner . That is how its work . and
This is same argument given by Pseudo Feminist . And calling something Pseudo Feminist does not make one Anti- Feminism . ( I am not being Political here , any one who feel any offend , I apologize )
Two wrongs do not make it wright . Even if Hemant 100% wrong here , Still not justify the action or the reasoning or anything for Sona Cheating . Hemant incompetence could have also be resulted in Divorce / Separation / Ugly Fight / Etc etc but Her fucking VIkram again and again and again could never be the one .
The Chastity/Faithfulness/Trust should not come with list of chores one should in order to expect it from other partner . This is not Gender Specific , This is General one . Husband , wife , Man , women .
Oh you ignored me , Now i am going to fuck my Handsome boss . Oh you are not giving me sex , Now i have to fuck my beautiful secretary or collogues . There are much better alternatives .
This is why All the blame on her , She is not bad human but she committed a mistake and now she is facing the consequences , Its only natural . Hemant reaction and his action is normal . Him thinking He was not enough of man , again Natural and Normal . Him regretting again , Normal .
How come these action can be seen As Heroics ? Its a Normal reaction .
Its not a Gender thing . Its very General one .
IF we switch the character , Hemant would have received the same kind of Comment and Sona would have also received the same kind of comment , Would then she be seen as HEROIC or Hero worshipper Character , No It is what any one would have done . Its very Normal .
Again , People may disagree, They have every right to be . Hemant is no Saint here , He is not 100% right here , But A husband is 100% innocent here , There is nothing he could have done to stop her wife from cheating . If changing your physique and dance like hritik , having charm like Dhoom's JOhn abraham fuck like James deen is what take your wife to refrain from cheating then it is not marriage its an agreement . Loyalty should not be demanded. There should be no Price or Condition on Loyalty . Its not Transaction . Give or Take . ( Han gyan chod diya thoda
). Also I am not saying that one should stay forever in these kind of marriages , Just divorce / separation / Marriage Counseling / Therapy many options .. If she was an rural women i can understand her but she is not , She is very capable women who can take any legal help very easily . That is why The Entire Blame on Her , Only Her . Again , I am not making comment on her character , her action , Just the Cheating part , Not on the Reason why she cheated , But Only She is the one who cheated and she deserves to face the consequences . And she bravely told him the truth . There is reason behind this .
Even though I dont agree on whole AIRPORT Confession scene , Where Michael was blaming himself , But for the sake of the story and the character development it was needed and acceptable .
It took time for me to get the What "Flawed Characters" mean .
Yes , The last chapter could have been better , Sona's feeling , her guilt , her love for Hemant , The idea of living a life without Hemant , etc etc . But then again , Hemant was not in the state nor Sona . But I hope It will eventually comes out , Slowly Slowly , in further update .
I still dont want couple to split . But if Sona confesses instead of accepting her mistake , It will further destroy their relationship . Her love for Vikram is not Real . Michael King is gonna prove this ( Spoiler to ni de diya
). Which will further make her realize that she also does not love Michael King . Its kind of Thesis and Anti Thesis , Situation . VIkram was Thesis and Micheal King is gonna be Anti Thesis , and when they collied We will get Synthesis which will be the Man she is in love .So , Even though , The divorce part felt rush , but Them living together till divorce is Solid plot and justify the Divorce Plot, setting for future events . clp); clp);
Till now , Everything is fine .
But If Sona again gonna hook up with VIKRAM or even Kiss him . I am gonna done with this Story ( Because its gonna destroy the whole character of Sona ,then Nothing can redeem her character , she took enough for the plot lol . The whole flawed character thing would be waste . I would be happy to be read whole story without Hemant and Sona character , Only the Michael king and Underworld' story i am gonna read ) .
( Note :- You can agree or disagree with me , It is fine . It is just a perspective , I might be right or RIGHT
, But again , Its all for fun . I always said this It is all for fun , Some comment i deliberately make just to play with writer hahaha . Harry's response always appreciative and Very explanatory in nature . He is master of his craft and also very good with people . ) This time I have VALID CRITISIM for Harry :- Enough with your Big talk , We need SOME ACTION , WE NEED BLOOD . WE ARE GETTING THIRSTY, Bawa . ( also dont make him Invincible during fights , Make him bleed ) . Also , Please increase dialogue between them . I know its gonna increase the length of Chapters but I miss reading dialogues .
One thing do we get to hear his Child hood , Past life , His parents ?
Also I want to see , How Sona would react seeing Michael's wounds and If He comes home bleeding or His face with bandage and his wounded knuckle . I just wanna see how she is gonna react to all this.
Just think , Michael king after a brutal fight comes home and see Sona , with adrenaline pumping through his veins ,anger , fear , and the testosterones ..................
Hope you have already written something like this , If not Please thoda sa dekh lena .
The story going great , Harry .
I am too excited for the next update .
Kudos to you .
yr):
*Peace out*
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