Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

[Harry Jordan]

~RCF

Believe me bro , you can never annoy me , because all of our conversations are healthy and is about perspectives. And yes to the most part I agree , your observation of Sonarika's sex life and her personality is somewhat spot on. And this chapter was heavily focusing on grief. Which is why the logical talk didn't happen. I built a scenario that Sonarika will not only be Hemant's undoing , but also become the catalyst to awaken the "Michael King" inside him. And that is why the whole hospital episode comes through. As for the divorce happening , its still part of the arc and in character with Hemant signifying that he has changed , he is not the sweet , calm and collective Hemant that Sonarika knew. Her cheating has merged both the past and present of him turning him into someone far more calculative and different person than Hemant was. And Sonarika is calling it a mistake right only out of grief , because right now , in this chapter , Sonarika's mindset of loss and heartbreak was the focal point which is why the logical talk has been stalled for a later chapter. I know you might feel this will take the impact away , but her arc needs it considering this is the point of the story for her where she will have to define her path to the future.


Yes and that confession would not work here. Because Sonarika in this chapter is worried. Worried for Hemant , her reveal already made him end up in a hospital. And then more than that , more than the honesty , the part of Sonarika that loves Hemant dominates in this chapter as part of her arc here. Which is why she ignores Vikram in this chapter because like she said in the past , she is not choosing , her heart duelled out to both Vikram and Hemant , both being two parts of her. And here , the part that loves Hemant is more concerned about him. Here her focus is completely on Hemant's health. But that too surprises her as Hemant is behaving in a way he has never been in her life. And this paved the way for confusion. And then as she is contemplating it , Hemant drops the divorce making her grieve further. But this was needed to be done , because once that grieving part is done , Sonarika can finally have that talk with Hemant and find a logical resolve in this.


Well the answer to that is pretty simple. Hemant is not a normal character to me, he can bring solutions to all other's problems but he can never find one for his own. Like I said in this chapter , its clearly shown Hemant isn't going to walk out a victor if this divorce happens. He already has the villains coming to surround him , his wife will soon leave him , he will loose his relation to his sister in law Anjali who he treats as his own sister. And he will also loose Karan's custody , forcing to share his future with a woman who no longer loves him according to him. And I believe you might be concieving Hemant in the wrong way , don't see him as an underdog fighting to bring his glory. He is the Dark Horse of this story , only he is treated as a main character here rather than coming from the unknown and taking the lead. And then you know the greatest challenge of a man , you can be a master stretegist , an expert fighter , a tactician , a ruthless hitman , hell even a KINGPIN. But there is one place a man will always falter no matter how strong or invincible he is , and that is to understand a WOMAN! LOL!


Once again , I iterate , you will never be an annoyance. Our conversations are always meaningful and thought provoking. Its always welcome!