16-08-2025, 04:31 PM
(06-08-2025, 05:15 AM)lakshana Wrote: Nice Writing but you are repeating the same lines and phrases.
Thank for your feedback.
Thanks all the readers who send DM comments on the story and please post in comments too.
Some clarification is i started writing this story year ago and i write this each chapter weekly one or monthly once like that and i sometime forget the past chapter details so it might feel repetitive and now I'm almost crossed 100th chapter in my writing and going back and correcting this mistakes is very boring since now I'm writing some spicy scenes i could imagine so i mages to rewrite initial 20 chapters and toned down the pace of her sluttiness for seamless corruption. I will post initial 20 chapters here for you and post 5 chapter each week. I am not a pro English writer so i'm using some help with writing tools to fix some grammar mistakes and the English words so that too sometime mess the content i will verify and post in my future Keep posting the feedback for my improvements.
Thank you,