Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

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Finally, The update we have been waiting for !   

Oh boy , The story progressed too quickly . 

To be honest ,  I was expecting more drama and more tension , and more verbal fight between Hemant and Sona . But my fear was Right , MICHAEL is too calculative . Hemant might have fought with her but Michael would never . He is dealing his marital problem just like his official deals or gangster problem , No time for tears or remorse , Strike as soon as possible . Again took calculative measures . NO outburst no nothing , yes silently swallowing pain . 

And Not even thinking about VIKRAM too , No hate No Anger . Not a single thought of changing the jaw line of VIKRAM . 

Not for Sona but also for me Michael's Stoic nature and his calmness feels very irritating . 


The divorce matter arrived too quickly , Sona did not even fight it . At least she could have  try to refuse or fight or even leaving the office without even listening etc etc , But Nope ! , I guess her guilt stopped her to do anything or Is it the Love for VIKRAM stopping her. 

Sona , This women , will never learn , Her whole life and family destroyed in front of her and still She could not cutt off VIKRAM from her life ? What the hell was that she still have his number and She did not even blocked him , The writer missed the chance to add more ghee in fire when they were in hospital and VIKRAM called her  . Imagine Hemant seeing his name on her wife cell phone , while  they were still talking . lol . But thats okay . 


Finally Michael understand , His whole life did not crumble because he felt short , He was never meant to have life like Hemant . He can never be someone like Hemant . His dishonesty from his true nature, cost him 10 years of life . I hope he do not commit the same mistake twice by getting close with Tammana , He is bad choice for her and Pranitha too . He needs to go where he belongs . Back to his world . He left too many loose ends . Finally He can consider himself to be Free. 

As for Sona , She always wanted a man like VIKRAM or Man with few qualities of VIKRAM but she never realizes the MAN like VIKRAM IS VIKRAM himself . 
 

I thought she cut him off but nope which is good , Now that she is going to be divorcee , There is no reason not to get into Relationship with VIKRAM now . VIKRAM loves her and will take care of her both Financially and physically , Specially the latter    .
More important She also loves now the path is clear , so no need to steer away from each other or at least giving the chance . 

But as of now , She is mess , The divorce will wreck her . So who is gonna giver her should to cry on and also D.... to ride on .VIKRAM , Even if not Megha ( i forget her name ) she will create situation and manipulate her in way so she would fall on Vikram lap and clearing her way towards Hemant . Megha should have visited him in the hospital 
No matter how hard she can try A part of Vikram will always gonna be live with in her , His essence will be forever with her . Its better to become whole with him . ( her words not mine   )

This divorce will give them what they need 1 .Michael will get himself back and whole and Sona will finally have the chance to live the life she has always dreamed of with VIKRAM , without having to hide. 


Destiny brought them together so they could help each other , to built themselves , heal their wounds and so they will be prepare  to face the dangers ahead and now, having fulfilled their purpose, Same destiny is guiding them apart, so each can follow the destiny meant for them alone. Their Own Destiny . 

A parallel path is still a path . As an individual and as parent  , maybe as friend , Their journey will continue . I dont think Michael will harbor any hate towards Sona .

Now Best Part of the Update . THE FUNERAL . The New characters , The setting and atmosphere was too good . The whole Triad thing is fun , linking with other parts of under world . 

What is the past of Michael ? Was he a soldier ? Member of Triad ? European Mafia boss ? All of them ( I might be missing few details ) . Was not the whole Azerbaijan accident , Military operation gone wrong ? or it was Gangwar ? How he ended up here in Mumbai ? What made him to give up his old life and why did he choose to move mumbai ? ( If it mentioned in earlier chapters , Then I might have forget the details , My Apologies )


One thing is funny , How come he owns an industry and still worrying about Hospital bill ?   He is rich . 

Over all Good Update ,  The update was more Streamlined   . The tone was a little lighter, which was a good and felt more mature approach. 

Thank Harry for this wonderful story . 



         
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Yaar , Netflix jaise Habit ka tarah ho gya , Ab next update ke liye , Next week wait krna pdega   .

Also One request Harry , Can you tell us How much story has progressd ? How many chapters left in Part 1 , If I am not wrong There will be total 20 chapters In part 1 ? 

( Note :- The comment are for fun , and for casual conversation for readers , not for writer , Also comments are not criticism of the story nor the suggestion for the writers )

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