Adultery Priya Didi

[shailu4ever]

Amit:
“You’re a lifesaver, Ravi. You’re doing so much. Priya told me you’ve been helping out at home too. Thanks, macha. I really appreciate it.”

Ravi’s voice turned gentle.

Ravi:
“Just doing what’s right. You take care of Uncle. I’ve got things covered here.”


Amit:
“Ravi, I… I feel a little better hearing you. Tell Priya I’ll call her tomorrow. I couldn’t talk to her properly today.”

Ravi’s thoughts drifted to Priya. He hadn’t spoken to her much lately, with everything going on. The concern was palpable, even in her absence.

Ravi:
“She’s probably resting by now. I’ll tell her.”

Amit’s tone softened, as if he’d found some small comfort in Ravi’s words.

Amit:
“Okay. Good night, bro.”

Ravi:
“Good night. Take care of yourself. And of Priya.”



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Did priya came back?
Amit is asking ravi to tell priya and Ravi is saying take care of priya

I think I missed an episode...

Hi

Oh no, you definitely didn’t miss anything, that one’s on me! 

I was chatting with my husband about his packing and a bunch of other things while I was writing, and I ended up mixing things up in that scene.  This is only of the best examples to show how bad I am with multitasking.  Hahaha

I’m going back to fix it now so it all lines up.

Thanks for pointing it out, and for not blaming my poor characters for my brain’s little detour!

Sorry again for the mix-up!

-- Shailu

PS: It should be something like this:

Amit’s voice softened, filled with a touch of gratitude.


Amit:
“You’re a lifesaver, Ravi. You’re doing so much. Priya always talks to me how you helped her at home while we were in Mumbai. Thanks, man. I really appreciate it.”

Ravi’s voice turned gentle.

Ravi:
“Just doing what’s right. You take care of Uncle. I’ve got things covered here.”

There was a brief silence. Then Amit spoke again, his voice quieter, a little more vulnerable.

Amit:
“Ravi, I… I feel a little better hearing you. Priya told me that she will call you tomorrow. She couldn’t talk to you today.”

Ravi’s thoughts drifted to Priya. He hadn’t spoken to her much lately, with everything going on. The concern was palpable, even in her absence.

Ravi:
“She’s probably resting by now. Please tell her my wishes.”

Amit’s tone softened, as if he’d found some small comfort in Ravi’s words.

Amit:
“Okay. Good night, bro.”

Ravi:
“Good night. Take care of yourself. And of Priya.”

The call ended, and Ravi let the phone fall to his side.

The room felt quieter now, the weight of the conversation settling over him like a blanket.

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