Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

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Oh brother ! After reading whole chapters ( I skipped few to focus on Hemant's development ) . The Sona never changed , Earlier i was like Now she had become Saint , But she never changed , Even after ending their affair Bali , SHE NEVER CHANGED . I was so blind . lol . Now I get it . The whole mess of inner turmoil and guilt and whats not , Its all farce and fake . Her accepting that He would have married VIKRAM and Whatever she said to him building life with him, buying building , wishing she had never met hemant , never had child then she would have gladly accepted him  just  pure cringe  ,That Bastard This whole section itself is the Testament of her love for him . Its was mess . 

Also one thing I noticed is that She always praised Hemant as Caregiver , Who takes care of her ,and shows loves , supported her . Nothing wrong but meanwhile for Vikram He is stud, Charming , Praising him as Greek god , Confident  , Complete Man which makes her feel awe and whole, She is weak around him , she cannot help herself around him she totally forgets her family let alone her husband she dearly loves. 
What if Hemant stopped doing all these things taking care of household and taking care of her , Would she still loves him ? For me I think Hemant's worth in her life and his role is simply act of giving and taking as long as he doing husband duties its all fine the moment He stops , She will kicks his ass and she did  .

Her love and affection is simply a reciprocal act , Mutual exchange , Is what Hemant get for his devotion to his family and wife. . There is nothing , nothing like Vikram and Sona . 

But Her love for VIKRAM ? Its just pure act of love , Giving him everything and Giving herself to him for what ? He never had done a single thing for her ? Its just pure attraction ,lust , madness and natural chemistry , That is why Its loves , She clearly is in love with him . The Love of Voyage depicted it very Cleary , the Jabalpur incident was bound to happened . Giving everything without expecting any thing in return , is Cleary an act of love . They both need to accept this , Maybe after Divorce They would get together . They at least deserve a chance to try it out .

Hemant never had and never will , This type relation with her 

  Is it not hinting a cuckold relationship ?
 A cucks take care of house and wife and her mental and physical well being , and VIKRAM takes care of her Sexual Needs . and then in end Wife returns to husband and had petty sex with husband , but the only thing which is different here Hemant is not cuckold , YET    . lol .  

As for KUNAL , I am happy how you treated the character . Great for him , The only thing . I want her to leave her old life , though he destroyed her life himself , He needs to start fresh , He needs separate with Mouni . Not tell her to stop doing and get back their old life . He needs to find A Women who value him and Loves him . He needs fresh start . Either way , Only Happy thing in last few updates . 


  After everything . But then Chapter 16 and 17 thanks to god . These chapters saved me lol 

This whole Sexual Triangle of Lover , wife , and cuck sucked all the attention , While re reading , Both  Chapter 16 and 17 are among the best   . The level of detail in those two chapter is great . Also after re reading , Now I am feeling How insignificant the whole affair thing is when compare with The development that has been happening behind the scenes. There is so much going on . I even forget to feel bad for Hemant . lol . Now I am not even mad on Sona too , She and Hemant are both nothing in compare what is happening outside on the street . lol . Its crazy , Its getting so dense , So many characters . So many development happing parallelly and also somehow connected . Its mind blowing , Man .  

One thing , So Meghna is Step-Sister of Sona , A bastard Child .  Sona's father illegitimate child . Right ?

If I am not wrong There is some kind of Beef Between Hemant and Sona's father Right ? He asked him to call him Sir ?  I was forget to mention this , But 1 more name should be added to list who should get their ass kicked by Hemant ASAP ! . Sir Bulana , Why ?  After learning the affair of Sona , He should get one interaction with Hemant , Sir Phod de Hemant budhe ka . lol

To be honest , I am thrilled , with the revelation that  Meghna's Love for Hemant . It was never hatred , There was always an attraction which she was fighting with and calling hatred, The pull she had towards Hemant it was natural but Its was love but her years of resentment clouded her mind and she thought its hatred  , Now that She got crush on Hemant  and her plan for Hemant is kind of intriguing  . She loves him , Oh Man . She is crazy woman , who is now gonna fight for Him , . Killing two birds with one stone , and also dreaming of life she never had . Is it the reason she hates Sona , Because if Javed had stayed with her , her life would have turned out exactly as Sona's life . Its her life and Her father action's that turned Meghna into the path of vengeance , Now I sympathize with her . With just one paragraph you changed everything . *Slow Claps* , Maan gye guru . 

She is an Interesting character . Now I am kind of want something should happen  Between Hemant and Meghna , Not particularly sexual but anything . A date , Shoulder to cry on , Her manipulating Hemant, Her support for Hemant while Sona and Vikram will get together and Sona looking what she has lost . . The women got fire , and her fire turned into Inferno which can only be cool down by Hemant .  

This is an impressive and very interesting Premise . Now I want Sona to be gone to Hemant . When Hemant wakes up , Meghna expected Hemant, but it is Michael with whom she will be dealing with .
I dont know , How Michael and Meghna , The MM will turn out . One is too Calculative and other is just plain crazy . Brother , Meghna has overshadowed Sona or any Female Character  here .

I apologize for skipping earlier chapters , In hurry of reading the Hemant's part and The whole couple mess , I skipped few chapters , Now I get the whole picture . The earlier comment i made are shit , but I am not deleting them , Let it be there . Mistake should be not erased or hide . I simply Apologize , but Comment on Sona and Hemant relationship that i still think its true She never loved him , The earlier chapter cleared this + comment by other members , Clear  few doubts that  I had .


You are a WIZARD HARRY ! . You just You totally expelliarmused us with this premise . 

HATTS OFF TO YOU .

Again , Thanks buddy for this story . SIMPLY GREAT . TOO GOOD . Your Skills , How you create a plot then changed it completely  and then again twist it , Its too good . You are touching new heights with every updates .

I am taking my words back , please dont take as much time as you need , Just post the Next Update ASAP !

KUDOS TO YOU !!!!!