Adultery Love Sex And War Part 1 : Age Of Darkness

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The story has reached a very critical point. Now, whether Sonarika confesses her infidelity herself or Hemant finds out from someone else, it doesn’t really matter.
In every situation, only Hemant will face loss, sorrow, and pain.

As for Sonarika, nothing much will happen to her. She will happily live her life with Vikram, and I’m sure that after a few days she won’t even remember Hemant.

When this infidelity began the reason was— though Hemant had all the good qualities of a great lover, husband, father, and person—except one: he was not aggressive or passionate enough in bed. That became the initial reason for Sonarika's affair. At that point in the story, Sonarika’s cheating was only about lust, adventure, and enjoying the forbidden fruit.  
But eventually, Hemant improved that flaw in himself. Still, Sonarika continued her infidelity. Who could be more selfish than this?

In the beginning, it was just lust. After the Bali trip, her decision to completely break all ties with Vikram was absolutely right. After leaving Vikram, she realized that Hemant had those same qualities too—he could also be passionate and adventurous in bed.

But over time, Sonarika went down an even darker path—what began as lust slowly turned into feelings and affection for Vikram, which is the greatest betrayal.

Then came the "Love of Voyage" incident. After that incident, hugging Hemant's picture, crying, and saying "nobody can take your place," showed complete guilt. Even at that stage, it felt like maybe she realized her true love was only Hemant.

But what happened later was a total crossing of the line—thinking of Vikram again and again, or giving him a place in her heart equal to Hemant—This is Biggest Sin one could ever make

A husband might forgive his wife for satisfying physical desires once, but giving somebody else that much place in your heart—a place that was only Hemant’s right—is beyond the gravest sin.

Now, Hemant has nothing left. The only thing he can do is let Soni go quietly and move forward in life as if there was never a girl named Soni Exist. This can bring him mental peace. If he tries to take revenge, he will only lower himself.

For him, completely forgetting Soni would be best, and maybe this is the real revenge.

As for Soni, she will cry for a few days and then start a new life with Vikram.

I’ve often seen on this platform that the one who cheats is the one who stays happy. Every story ends with this conclusion.

I’ve never seen a story where a wife cheats and faces any serious consequences. Either the husband keeps his eyes closed and keeps suffering, or he becomes a cuckold.

In this story, Hemant won’t become a cuckold, nor will he silently suffer his wife’s betrayal, because that’s not the way his character is written—this much is clear.

But the same question remains—did Hemant get any justice? —the answer is No, not at all.

And did Soni lose anything? She didn’t lose anything—she'll just be sad for a few days, that’s all. After going to Vikram, she won’t feel any regret, won’t even remember Hemant, and won’t feel any remorse.

I haven’t read a single story where a cheating wife faced sadness, regret, or any serious consequences after separating from her husband, or even missed him in her dreams.

Honestly, I had high hopes for this story—that maybe the wife would deeply regret her actions, face serious consequences, and miss Hemant a lot after leaving him— Rather badly Crave for Hemant
But now, it doesn’t seem like that’s happening. Even in this story, only the husband will remain sad, and he won’t get any justice.

No matter how Hemant’s past was—even if you portray him as a villain— still can’t justify Sonarika’s big betrayal. And even if Sonarika ends up getting hurt because of Hemant’s enemies, that can’t be called repentance for her betrayal. Repentance would only be if she can never be happy without Hemant, misses him so much, values him so much that her life becomes like a zombie—but I don’t see that happening here.

Sorry, but I’d like to mention a story called "My Wife, Why Did She Betray Me."

At least in that story, the wife punished herself a lot. She could never forgive herself, lived like a servant with her husband, and punished herself so much that she never claimed any right over him, didn’t even consider herself worthy of him. She just looked after the kids and prayed for death every single day—because she didn’t want to make her husband more unhappy by committing suicide. In a way, she started seeing her husband as God and lived as his servant.

The husband in that story was probably named Savarna. He was also a very strong man. Since the story was set in a village, he couldn’t divorce her. If he could have, he definitely would have divorced her, and the only reason he suffered her infidelity in silence was that he knew his wife wouldn't be able to bear it and would take her own life. In that story, at least some justice was given to the husband.

But all the other stories on this platform always end with the cheater staying happy, and that makes me really sad.

From your story, I truly hoped the cheating wife would, in the end, regret a lot that she lost a husband like Hemant. But sadly, even in this story, it seems Sonarika will not face true regret, guilt, or any real consequences.

Anyway, I am not criticizing your story, nor am I pressuring you to change it.

I am only expressing my feelings—that when I started reading and saw Hemant’s character, I hoped this story would truly bring justice for the husband and show a different result from all the other stories on this platform. But it seems, once again, in the end, the cheating wife will end up happy because she gets what she wants.

Sorry if I spoke too much. I still respect you as a writer and am a huge fan of your work.

Best Regards

Rocky ❤️?

Fuck , I should not have read this  . This is best observation and Explanation on this thread . Sad and Brutal ,  I was angry now I am sad for Hemant Character .     


A husband might forgive his wife for satisfying physical desires once, but giving somebody else that much place in your heart—a place that was only Hemant’s right—is beyond the gravest sin.

How can anyone let alone Hemant deal with this , No words , Assurance , No amount of love can convince Him , that Sona actually , Ever loved him . 10 years of marriage and 1 kid , all down the drain for some men she met few months ago then there must be something very special about that Man .If that Man worth destroying her family and future and Her reputation , then the idea that She loves her husband is farce , She needs to accept that she loves that Man , It would also be injustice with The Man who loves her dearly too . 

Now, Hemant has nothing left. The only thing he can do is let Soni go quietly and move forward in life as if there was never a girl named Soni Exist. This can bring him mental peace. If he tries to take revenge, he will only lower himself.

Hemant will do exactly this , maybe that's the reason Sona confess to her , because She knew her cuck husband will do nothing. She had dream about this in her dream Hemant was the cuck , Its how she perceived him and (from google) Dreams are seen as a reflection of our subconscious mind, a gateway to accessing hidden emotions, fears, and desires that are not fully accessible during our waking hours . She never thought that Hemant might actually kill Vikram or Harm her Or Hemant will destroy her reputation or Will retaliate . Nope , She knows Hemant too well . She does not know Michael but she does Know Hemant very well . The only thing she was worry about is that Its gonna Break Hemant's Heart not That Hemant might break the spine of her lover, which we know he is very capable of doing something like this. I . lol . She knows , She can handle him well . 

Now, whether Sonarika confesses her infidelity herself or Hemant finds out from someone else, it doesn’t really matter.





Thought the Confession part was already posted , I am late . But your point still stands true . 
If Hemant had found out on his own, he would have reacted differently . That is why Sona told him . I cant shake the thought that she is more guilty of Letting Vikram go than Hemant . She knew the moment she confess this to Hemant her relationship will be over , She could have hide it like she did earlier but this time , Her feelings for VIKRAM were genuine and this time by confessing She is ending her relationship with Hemant , Like a statement . 

She herself said many time , If only she and Vikram had met earlier her life would be different . What if 10 years ago she had the choice between Hemant and VIKRAM , She would definitely choose VIKRAM over Hemant . This is what will haunt Hemant , He was always an option for her . 
So many times she said , She wished if she was never married to Hemant , scheming against Hemant on Wedding anniversary , She felt whole wtih Vikram , alive etc etc . @RCF wrote about this in very detailed manner which dismantle any argument that She ever loved Hemant . Hemant and Sona was accident . Sona and Vikram are destined to be as whole . lol .Yuck .

In every situation, only Hemant will face loss, sorrow, and pain.


He is getting surrounded by the danger from all direction . His past enemies , His present's one , Then his own wife . How he is gonna deal with them alone . Hemant's future is dark , The most frustrating part , There is nothing he can do about it . Maybe something reveal that he also never loved sona in a way that he always believe , which might ease her pain . 

His visit to clubs and meeting Mruanl Thakur , I thought he was gonna bang Mrunal Thakur lol , in that case both Husband and wife cheated on each other which would have balance the equation   .

As for Sonarika, nothing much will happen to her. She will happily live her life with Vikram, and I’m sure that after a few days she won’t even remember Hemant.

Yes . But To be honest I hope she will move in with Vikram . VIKRAM though i hate his character , He deserves a chance if he truly loves Sona , and Sona also , This is what she dreamed of , She paid heavy price For Vikram then why not at least give a chance , this is what she desire then why not move in with VIKRAM . Maybe this is what she needs or maybe this would turn out a disaster which will finally break the fantasies she is having . Going back making amends for whom and for what ? What is done is done . Hemant will move out quietly , He is gonna be very busy with his enemies  , meanwhile she can rebuilt her life with love of her life . I was against this idea but want to see , How they will adjust . Destroying her marriage and then breaking up with her lover , What she wants to achieve . Lets see . 

Sorry, but I’d like to mention a story called "My Wife, Why Did She Betray Me."


yeah , It was really good . The character of SAVARNA was good too . I forgot about this story . One of the few stories where there is balance . 

But all the other stories on this platform always end with the cheater staying happy, and that makes me really sad.

I never understand why do some people get mad over If Husband character was treated with respect and Is not an Idiot . They always just throw insult and says " Dont like it dont read / Write your own story / dont discourage the writer / you are on erotic story stie why do you want it to morally correct . And i was like Bro There should be some logic , or at least explain the character of Husband and reason behind his stupidity . But Leave it . 




I am only expressing my feelings .