09-08-2025, 11:10 AM
(30-07-2025, 11:20 AM)WriterPK Wrote: You have the capability to continue this. You have the same writing skills and style. Only you and Kutto have the ability to continue or rewrite this. I truly believe you are the best at rewriting. Please consider it, because most of the greatest stories have been rewritten by others. People here are also eagerly waiting for this. Please consider our request.
First of all, I'm not here to judge. I loved this so much, i myself started writing Geetha story with inspiration from here. Understand how much I love this story and Dhika.
See here the situation is complex. With whom should Dhika become more intimate. Chotu fingered her pussy. Twins enjoyed her naked threesome dance. Uncle got teased.
Question is, If Dhika should got into her first sexual affair outside marriage, with whom should it be?
Chotu got more of her affection. But we can sideline him because he's little innocent.
Uncle is senior, he desire for her. And see comments, many readers are eager for uncles part.
Twins have the upperhand coming to Dhika enjoying their moves. Dhika desiring to play with twins.
Is Dhika really ready to take Twins dicks in her?
Dhika has a husband who fills her pussy needs whenever he's home.
Author got to a point where Dhika is in acceptance with all these intimate friendships, but still didn't let Dhika to decide whom should she offer herself.
Personally, my opinion, Twins have the rights of fucking Dhika. Dhika desire to get romance with both at a time.
If we consider fucking shouldn't be a point, then what would be the end point? Just Dhika disappearing somewhere from Chotu, Twins and Uncle.
I may sound bit criticising but think of it.