08-08-2025, 08:19 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-08-2025, 08:44 AM by DeanWinchester00007. Edited 2 times in total. Edited 2 times in total.)
Harry , How do you do it ?
You again surprised me , with That shanghai part , The world building is crazy . I dont know if Choosing the Name RICKY TAN was random or You did it on purpose . The name Ricky tan was sound familiar , Then I Remember it from RUSH HOUR 2 , The Villain . Oh man , It was so funny . I love that . You should kept that name for Villain .
That whole Shanghai Part was brilliantly written . Every line itself paint the picture so beautifully .
and that confrontation scene , Honestly I am disappointed . This is the second time . First with their Anniversary Night, It was complete let down, The built up was complete waste . and then this .
Is it me , Or I think the Carpet is not matching with dbangs . Every part of Vikram and Sona is brilliantly written , Even the length , The emotion , Everything is perfect , but With Hemant and Sona it feels so bland , felt like filler written in hurry . But She loves Hemant
Stop making her saying SHE LOVES HEMANT , SHE LOVES HEMANT . I SWEAR its feels so cringy .
Hahahaha , Sona is crying and acting like teenage kid , I love Hemant . Meanwhile Khatana Bhai :- Chi chi chi badi halki aurat hai tu , Pyar me logo ke halak se nivala ni utarta , Aur sona halak me roj Vikram ka leri hai ( i know cringe hai but likh diya aise , Its so irritating every time she says she loves Hemant . )
But I get it . I think i know what you wanna do here with her .
The words are not doing enough justice in portraying the love between sona and hemant , I mean that is the reason the Confrontation is not felt that hard , Its was okay . I dont know . I am writing what i felt . ( Again i a understand VIKRAM was her affair partner who supposed to spice things up for her , so logically their affair should have more erotism as compare to Husband and wife relationship which perceives as Vanila , But At least If eroticism is not there Intimacy should match up the Affairs Eroticism ) , Its just personal thought not criticism .
There is too much focus on HEMANT's Michael part , Every word , Every praise is just gold . But when it comes Hemant and Sona relationship Hemant part was okay okay .
But over all nice update .
Hemant had stroke . Hey do you know Stroke also causes Short term memory loss . Maybe someone needs to forget the whole episode which cause the Stroke and can have little more good family time .
Some one please write the summary and character track . My single brain cell cannot remember all these vast details and character and also i dont want to scroll old post just to keep track of all character .
Vikram with sona
and Hemant with enemy
( Comments are for fun and for casual conversation , Not criticism for the story )
You again surprised me , with That shanghai part , The world building is crazy . I dont know if Choosing the Name RICKY TAN was random or You did it on purpose . The name Ricky tan was sound familiar , Then I Remember it from RUSH HOUR 2 , The Villain . Oh man , It was so funny . I love that . You should kept that name for Villain .
That whole Shanghai Part was brilliantly written . Every line itself paint the picture so beautifully .
and that confrontation scene , Honestly I am disappointed . This is the second time . First with their Anniversary Night, It was complete let down, The built up was complete waste . and then this .
Is it me , Or I think the Carpet is not matching with dbangs . Every part of Vikram and Sona is brilliantly written , Even the length , The emotion , Everything is perfect , but With Hemant and Sona it feels so bland , felt like filler written in hurry . But She loves Hemant
Stop making her saying SHE LOVES HEMANT , SHE LOVES HEMANT . I SWEAR its feels so cringy .
Hahahaha , Sona is crying and acting like teenage kid , I love Hemant . Meanwhile Khatana Bhai :- Chi chi chi badi halki aurat hai tu , Pyar me logo ke halak se nivala ni utarta , Aur sona halak me roj Vikram ka leri hai ( i know cringe hai but likh diya aise , Its so irritating every time she says she loves Hemant . )
But I get it . I think i know what you wanna do here with her .
The words are not doing enough justice in portraying the love between sona and hemant , I mean that is the reason the Confrontation is not felt that hard , Its was okay . I dont know . I am writing what i felt . ( Again i a understand VIKRAM was her affair partner who supposed to spice things up for her , so logically their affair should have more erotism as compare to Husband and wife relationship which perceives as Vanila , But At least If eroticism is not there Intimacy should match up the Affairs Eroticism ) , Its just personal thought not criticism .
There is too much focus on HEMANT's Michael part , Every word , Every praise is just gold . But when it comes Hemant and Sona relationship Hemant part was okay okay .
But over all nice update .
Hemant had stroke . Hey do you know Stroke also causes Short term memory loss . Maybe someone needs to forget the whole episode which cause the Stroke and can have little more good family time .
Some one please write the summary and character track . My single brain cell cannot remember all these vast details and character and also i dont want to scroll old post just to keep track of all character .
Vikram with sona
and Hemant with enemy
( Comments are for fun and for casual conversation , Not criticism for the story )
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