08-08-2025, 06:45 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-08-2025, 10:21 AM by DeanWinchester00007. Edited 1 time in total. Edited 1 time in total.)
Continuing to follow this story , is worst mistake i have committed in last month , I was happy . Sona ended her affair and reconcile with Hemant ( which is very poorly , you ruined their THE NIGHT) . Everything was fine , I should have taken my exit from there , But To see THE BEAST DRINKING BLOOD OF ENEMY kept me here .
Man , you Matlb You had to do it , you cant help yourself . Everything was going fine . Nope Lets start the affair again . I have not read the confrontation part yet . But Nope .
Okay its fine , But the thing that bothers me is forcing the idea of THAT SONA LOVES HEMANT . Why it is so hard to accept that she never loved Hemant .
WHY ?
Why after having nasty sex with affair partner , There is always line or two about how much she felt guilty and how much she loves Hemant , and then again she fucked Vikram ?
Is it no possible that she never loved hemant , Yes the circumstances brought them together , Hemant was dealing with his issue , sona was dealing with hers , They met and supported each other , Now they both are fine . So they dont need each other . Now they should live their own life how they imagine.
NO SHE LOVES HEMANT . FUCK VIKRAM . LOVES HEMANT . FUCK VIKRAM . LOVES HEMANT .
Then again after fucking She again broke up with VIKRAM . He loves her and she loves him . Why them being together is such a terrible idea . If she is gonna confess to Hemant and Hemant is not cuck , they will surely get divorce , So why after live alone , Reconcile with VIKRAM and leads the life she always wanted to . Is it so terrible .
Hemant will find someone else .
As for me I think you went little overboard with Sona character . The extra debauchery adds nothing the earlier affair and then confrontation would have been great , but going back and restarting her affair , had destroyed little integrity that she had .
I dont know how many she said I LOVE HEMANT , NOBODY CAN TAKE PLACE HIS PLACE , Yet she let VIKRAM you take place inside her . Its so funny . Total 304 character , Its That internet meme character . SEX is not love , She loves him but can fuck VIKRAM because Addiction , thrill , etc etc . NOPE She loves VIKRAM and she never Loved Hemant . Hemant needs this truth or he will blamed himself . He needs to know that she never loved him , it will help him to move faster .
And as For SONA , She needs to accept this That SHE NEVER LOVED HEMANT , And She loves VIKRAM . She needs to go to him , and start her new life with the love of her life . Its the truth . She is just blaming her self , The guilt she is feeling because she is the position which demands sacrifice . People sacrifice for love.
She sacrifice her family not once but twice For Vikram the Man whom she had known only for months .
10 years of marriage , 1 kid vs Man she knew only for few months .
And she loves Hemant ? No way , She never loved him . Its painful and its truth . I believe Hemant take this positively . He got betrayed the person who never loved him .
Please let this be the Breaking point of HEMANT. Let his beast take over .
I wish He just fucked VIKRAM up so bad , VIKRAM needs to know Who is Hemant . Hemant will never do it , but The beast in him will do it , without any reason and logic .
I am still waiting to get the thrill of Beast inside hemant to come out . As of he is calm and composed . But once i want to see him go Berserk .
Also Is there something like this ? Hemant going crazy , Berserk . Or i am having wrong expectation , I will change it , Because I see Hemant character as someone who is holding his demon , as the story also has lot of Christian symbolism and theme . The Dark Hemant not the Michael Hemant that character is too calculative , not the raw predator , Someone like Jake Lockley ?
I can draw parallel , From Marvel's Moon Knight .
Steven Grant = Loving husband and father Hemant .
Marc Spector = The Angel himself Michael .
and Then Jake Lockley = The beast , The devil inside of Hemant .
I hope this betrayal fucked him so bad . So he loose his insanity . For once Just want him to butcher the VIKRAM . He needs to know Who he really is . Whats the point of Having the character like Hemant and dont beat up the guy who is knocking his wife . I know its not VIKRAM fault if Sona is jumping on his dick but that is the point Character like Hemant , Calm and composed , Silent guy , Good guy for once loosing his insanity and doing stupid things , which i think make his character more humane and grounded .
Well , again . You really fucked up the readers with this episode , which is testament of your skills .
Again , Kudos to you . And thanks for not leaving the story incomplete . lol .
also , One fear of mine , Regarding Sona character Why i am feeling that something gonna terribly happens to her . Dont wanna ruin the fun . But i feel i mean i have few ideas , what you are setting up .
Thanks again , Harry .
Kudos to you . As always wonderful update . You should post the story in Literotica Contest lol .
( Note :- Comment is for fun and casual conversation , Not Criticism of the story )
Man , you Matlb You had to do it , you cant help yourself . Everything was going fine . Nope Lets start the affair again . I have not read the confrontation part yet . But Nope .
Okay its fine , But the thing that bothers me is forcing the idea of THAT SONA LOVES HEMANT . Why it is so hard to accept that she never loved Hemant .
WHY ?
Why after having nasty sex with affair partner , There is always line or two about how much she felt guilty and how much she loves Hemant , and then again she fucked Vikram ?
Is it no possible that she never loved hemant , Yes the circumstances brought them together , Hemant was dealing with his issue , sona was dealing with hers , They met and supported each other , Now they both are fine . So they dont need each other . Now they should live their own life how they imagine.
NO SHE LOVES HEMANT . FUCK VIKRAM . LOVES HEMANT . FUCK VIKRAM . LOVES HEMANT .
Then again after fucking She again broke up with VIKRAM . He loves her and she loves him . Why them being together is such a terrible idea . If she is gonna confess to Hemant and Hemant is not cuck , they will surely get divorce , So why after live alone , Reconcile with VIKRAM and leads the life she always wanted to . Is it so terrible .
Hemant will find someone else .
As for me I think you went little overboard with Sona character . The extra debauchery adds nothing the earlier affair and then confrontation would have been great , but going back and restarting her affair , had destroyed little integrity that she had .
I dont know how many she said I LOVE HEMANT , NOBODY CAN TAKE PLACE HIS PLACE , Yet she let VIKRAM you take place inside her . Its so funny . Total 304 character , Its That internet meme character . SEX is not love , She loves him but can fuck VIKRAM because Addiction , thrill , etc etc . NOPE She loves VIKRAM and she never Loved Hemant . Hemant needs this truth or he will blamed himself . He needs to know that she never loved him , it will help him to move faster .
And as For SONA , She needs to accept this That SHE NEVER LOVED HEMANT , And She loves VIKRAM . She needs to go to him , and start her new life with the love of her life . Its the truth . She is just blaming her self , The guilt she is feeling because she is the position which demands sacrifice . People sacrifice for love.
She sacrifice her family not once but twice For Vikram the Man whom she had known only for months .
10 years of marriage , 1 kid vs Man she knew only for few months .
And she loves Hemant ? No way , She never loved him . Its painful and its truth . I believe Hemant take this positively . He got betrayed the person who never loved him .
Please let this be the Breaking point of HEMANT. Let his beast take over .
I wish He just fucked VIKRAM up so bad , VIKRAM needs to know Who is Hemant . Hemant will never do it , but The beast in him will do it , without any reason and logic .
I am still waiting to get the thrill of Beast inside hemant to come out . As of he is calm and composed . But once i want to see him go Berserk .
Also Is there something like this ? Hemant going crazy , Berserk . Or i am having wrong expectation , I will change it , Because I see Hemant character as someone who is holding his demon , as the story also has lot of Christian symbolism and theme . The Dark Hemant not the Michael Hemant that character is too calculative , not the raw predator , Someone like Jake Lockley ?
I can draw parallel , From Marvel's Moon Knight .
Steven Grant = Loving husband and father Hemant .
Marc Spector = The Angel himself Michael .
and Then Jake Lockley = The beast , The devil inside of Hemant .
I hope this betrayal fucked him so bad . So he loose his insanity . For once Just want him to butcher the VIKRAM . He needs to know Who he really is . Whats the point of Having the character like Hemant and dont beat up the guy who is knocking his wife . I know its not VIKRAM fault if Sona is jumping on his dick but that is the point Character like Hemant , Calm and composed , Silent guy , Good guy for once loosing his insanity and doing stupid things , which i think make his character more humane and grounded .
Well , again . You really fucked up the readers with this episode , which is testament of your skills .
Again , Kudos to you . And thanks for not leaving the story incomplete . lol .
also , One fear of mine , Regarding Sona character Why i am feeling that something gonna terribly happens to her . Dont wanna ruin the fun . But i feel i mean i have few ideas , what you are setting up .
Thanks again , Harry .
Kudos to you . As always wonderful update . You should post the story in Literotica Contest lol .
( Note :- Comment is for fun and casual conversation , Not Criticism of the story )